Truculence (GxB) (Otome, Mystical, Adventurous, Religious)
Posted: Sun May 26, 2013 10:11 pm
Okay people this is my first VN and I am about to finish it, but I just didn't finish the art...
I will be thankful if you guys gave me some advices, the story I am making is pretty hard and twisted so I will need all the help I can get
Story:
Relic, is a a high school girl from Siberia, above Mongolia, their country's main religion is shamanism, and her father was the king of the shaman in her region, after her father died, her mother got re-married to a man who is younger than her by ten years, after her mother's death, her step-father stopped looking at Relic as his wife's daughter, and wanted to marry her, and he tried to sexually abuse her, so she hit him hardly and entered in a conflict which lead to a disaster, she was transferred to a reformatory and found friends which share the same difficulties as her, when Relic becomes close to a character, she begins a complete new journey with him/her! Which is different according to each sub-character, but the main issue is, the whole country began to change their religion and kill their shaman monks, leading to a disaster in the country by which the increase of criminals, suicides, drugs taking and more and more things, so Relic must rescue her religion from disappearing.
Character:
Relic Daniess 17 :
A normal high school girl, energetic and has a heart of gold, she believes in her religion and will do anything to make the people believe in it also, along her journey she will meet new friends, can anyone of them be her love?
Berry 17 :
Relic's best friend from the reformatory, she is a maid that was brought to the reformatory instead of her friend, who stole a rare item from the master's house, and Berry took his place according to her will, she may share Relic adventure and may not
Svin 20 :
A mysterious redhead, his sister died in the reformatory and her death caused him to be offensive and addicted to drugs, he looks calm but he is always nervous, he is burning from the inside trying to take his sister's revenge
Alan Jaikan 20:
Andrew's older brother and son of a great killer called Jaikan, he is a quite gentleman who doesn't have a problem in anything, and he is amazingly smart, but no one dares talking to him because of his father, he killed many people only because of his father's will, he doesn't have a problem getting to know Relic even if that bothers his brother
Andrew Jaikan 17 :
Short-tempered, naive , silly, childish killer! He is a killing machine but with childish brain, imagine that problem! He hates girls because they scream when they are going to be killed, he hates their voices, but since his brother wants to get to know Relic he will try to accept her
Alex 19 :
An indian criminal who went to Siberia to find an old buisness man and kill him, he got caught and brought to the reformatory, he has one rule! Hit and Fit! Hit the opponent and fit him inside a bag....yeah he only uses his muscles.
Robin 18:
Young funny guy, always smiling, teacher's pet, helps the teachers and the cops all the time, not only teachers but enjoys helping everyone, he was brought in the reformatory because he tried to help an old lady cross the street but he pulled her strongly and fell and a car hit her, sad right?
Cop Zen:
Relic's neighbor who arrested her and put her in the reformatory, with time he will know that she is innocent and help her.
Progress (27/5/2013):
Story: 100%
Art: 5%
Music: 75%
Script: 70%
BG's: 0%
Sound: 0%
Screenshots soon (I hope)
I will be thankful if you guys gave me some advices, the story I am making is pretty hard and twisted so I will need all the help I can get
Story:
Relic, is a a high school girl from Siberia, above Mongolia, their country's main religion is shamanism, and her father was the king of the shaman in her region, after her father died, her mother got re-married to a man who is younger than her by ten years, after her mother's death, her step-father stopped looking at Relic as his wife's daughter, and wanted to marry her, and he tried to sexually abuse her, so she hit him hardly and entered in a conflict which lead to a disaster, she was transferred to a reformatory and found friends which share the same difficulties as her, when Relic becomes close to a character, she begins a complete new journey with him/her! Which is different according to each sub-character, but the main issue is, the whole country began to change their religion and kill their shaman monks, leading to a disaster in the country by which the increase of criminals, suicides, drugs taking and more and more things, so Relic must rescue her religion from disappearing.
Character:
Relic Daniess 17 :
A normal high school girl, energetic and has a heart of gold, she believes in her religion and will do anything to make the people believe in it also, along her journey she will meet new friends, can anyone of them be her love?
Berry 17 :
Relic's best friend from the reformatory, she is a maid that was brought to the reformatory instead of her friend, who stole a rare item from the master's house, and Berry took his place according to her will, she may share Relic adventure and may not
Svin 20 :
A mysterious redhead, his sister died in the reformatory and her death caused him to be offensive and addicted to drugs, he looks calm but he is always nervous, he is burning from the inside trying to take his sister's revenge
Alan Jaikan 20:
Andrew's older brother and son of a great killer called Jaikan, he is a quite gentleman who doesn't have a problem in anything, and he is amazingly smart, but no one dares talking to him because of his father, he killed many people only because of his father's will, he doesn't have a problem getting to know Relic even if that bothers his brother
Andrew Jaikan 17 :
Short-tempered, naive , silly, childish killer! He is a killing machine but with childish brain, imagine that problem! He hates girls because they scream when they are going to be killed, he hates their voices, but since his brother wants to get to know Relic he will try to accept her
Alex 19 :
An indian criminal who went to Siberia to find an old buisness man and kill him, he got caught and brought to the reformatory, he has one rule! Hit and Fit! Hit the opponent and fit him inside a bag....yeah he only uses his muscles.
Robin 18:
Young funny guy, always smiling, teacher's pet, helps the teachers and the cops all the time, not only teachers but enjoys helping everyone, he was brought in the reformatory because he tried to help an old lady cross the street but he pulled her strongly and fell and a car hit her, sad right?
Cop Zen:
Relic's neighbor who arrested her and put her in the reformatory, with time he will know that she is innocent and help her.
Progress (27/5/2013):
Story: 100%
Art: 5%
Music: 75%
Script: 70%
BG's: 0%
Sound: 0%
Screenshots soon (I hope)