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Renee Montagne is 16, a model known by the name Mischief and one of the popular girls at her school. On top of that she’s the heiress to a big company and will later become the wife of Aiden, the son of her father’s friend in the business world and also the heir to a big company. However deep down Renee does not wish to have all this, she just wants to be a normal girl and not have her future decided for her, but the years went on without her saying anything. Then one day, some kids from her school start disappearing. There’s also going to be a masquerade held by Renee’s parents where many important people will come and where Renee’s date will be of course Aiden. On the day of the masquerade, Renee is waiting for her date but something happens to him...
-Well half of the game will take place in our time and the other half in an other time.
-Renne/Mischief goes to a school for rich people --->so the guys you can end up will be rich too or at lest most of them ^^.
-Renne/Mischief lives in a rich neighborhood of course.
*I havent decided how many guys there will be, but i will try 3 of 4.
She is smart, pretty, nice but can be cold sometimes. Her dream is to be a top model, however she will inherit her father's company and marry Aiden.
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If they were always missing in the first place, why was it even noticed that they were even missing? Stuff like that could make the story less credible than it really is. Although since you just posted a snippet of the plot, and I know that she's going into the past because of the info under 'setting', I can't really know how much that incident will relate to the story itself (: (I can make a guess that they're disappearing into the past, though...)...but no one thinks much of it because they are always missing.
Anyway, this sounds like a really intriguing story... Sorry if I sounded nit-picky above >//< I wish you the best of luck with this!
P.S. Is that lineart going to appear in the game or not? Either way, it's really great. Makes me think that she really IS a model.
Oh I dont this I will make it appear in the game, but I might put it as the background for the menu in the demo.
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