Re: Update!Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise Cancelled?

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Re: Update!Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise Cancelled?

#1 Post by Fenrir34 » Tue Jul 16, 2013 8:55 pm

Update-Sakura Blossoms might be Cancelled. I was trying to upload another game from renpy in Build Distributions and I got a script error saying I had multiple files. I tried to find them but couldn't . I then thought that since I had at least two renpy systems that I should delete one. I did that and Sakura Blossoms was on it. So I'm sorry to anyone who wanted to play. I don't know if I can rewrite it :cry:






I'd like to actually think this is my first Novel. It's a Kinetic Novel. I took a break from my fantasy one and thought it would be better to practice with this one. I worked hard on this game and once I'm finished all I have to do is the editing. I really would like some CG'S but I would need someone to help me with that. I think about 2 or 3 three is all.

I don't know how interested people our in KN's but I hope that some would like to read this. It may not be perfect but it's the first one that I'm about to finish.

Anyway I'll update when I'm closer to my goal. For those that are interested in it, I will be grateful. If it does alright I might make an alternate version with more characters and romance options.




Plot-Sora has always been picked on by her high school delinquent Jun Ryuuga. When he suddenly confesses to her however she can't believe what he is saying and thinks it's just some joke. Sora however remembers that she must learn to forgive and decides to be his friend. But once Jun is in her life, things begin to change for her friends and family, and the horrible secret revolving around her parent's death comes to light

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(Sora's Sprite thanks to harajukulolita)
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Sora-The main character. A former fighter who took a oath never to fight again after fighting her enemy Naru. She has a rather defensive personality and doesn't have much faith in herself. She is afraid of love and at times doesn't open up to people. Despite that she tries to see the goodness in others and not judge.

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Jun-Our main hero. Jun is a delinquent at school and constantly pranks Sora. Though seemingly tough and distant, Jun is actually a nice guy who wishes that Sora would returned his feelings. He has something to do with her dark past and is afraid she'll remember it.

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Ayumi-Sora's best friend. She is Sora's 'ray of hope' as Sora relies on her very much. This causes Ayumi to have some difficulty to truly express herself to Sora. Shy, kind, and smart, Ayumi tries to help others. She has some sort of connection with Kenichi.
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Kenichi-The popular boy in Sora's school who Sora greatly admires. Sora considers him a good friend and is aware of how Ayumi feels for him. Kenichi also has a past with Jun, and is on bad terms with him.

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Minori-Sora's eccentric sister who took care of Sora after their parents died. She has a rather big chest and at times embarrasses Sora, though not on purpose. Overall she is a caring and loving sister who wants Sora to find happiness.

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Juichi-Jun's Home Ec teacher. He is a very emotional man who loves all his students, though when it comes to women he can be kind of a jerk. He is madly in love with Minori.

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Naru-Sora's enemy who hates Sora after the beat she gave her. She tries to make Sora's life a misery. She has a crush on Kenichi, though he never shows it back.

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Story-Fenrir34
Script-Fenrir34
Pictures for characters- Blue Forest and tokudaya
Bg's-Mao Space


Current Progress:
Story: 100%
Script: 80%
BG's: 100%
CGs:About 2 or three are needed. If anyone is willing to help me with them then that would be nice. Please PM me if you are interested. If not, oh well.
Music:100
Game Length-TBA
Editing-Needs to be done.
Words-Right now the game has about 32,000
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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#2 Post by fleet » Tue Jul 16, 2013 10:40 pm

I wish you success in making your KN.
I can't help you with CGs as my choice of art medium doesn't match yours, but you might want to mention how many CGs you'll need.
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Poorly done hand-drawn art is still poorly done art. Be a Poser (or better yet, use DAZ Studio 3D) - dare to be different.

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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#3 Post by Fenrir34 » Tue Jul 16, 2013 11:09 pm

fleet wrote:I wish you success in making your KN.
I can't help you with CGs as my choice of art medium doesn't match yours, but you might want to mention how many CGs you'll need.

Thank you for being interested and thanks for the advice. :)

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#4 Post by Kami » Wed Jul 17, 2013 2:41 am

Sounds interesting, will it have voice covers?
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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#5 Post by harajukulolita » Wed Jul 17, 2013 4:17 am

Nice, artwork. I guess it would be interesting doing the CG's but I would have to know how many you want and specifically what you want. You can check out some of my art on http://harajukulolita.deviantart.com. The problem is I haven't put up most of my anime or digital work but my style is versatile. Just PM if you're still interested :mrgreen:

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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#6 Post by Fenrir34 » Wed Jul 17, 2013 4:51 pm

Kami wrote:Sounds interesting, will it have voice covers?

Wish it would but I don't think so since it's my first game. Maybe it will but I'm not sure?

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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#7 Post by Fenrir34 » Wed Jul 17, 2013 4:56 pm

harajukulolita wrote:Nice, artwork. I guess it would be interesting doing the CG's but I would have to know how many you want and specifically what you want. You can check out some of my art on http://harajukulolita.deviantart.com. The problem is I haven't put up most of my anime or digital work but my style is versatile. Just PM if you're still interested :mrgreen:

It's alright right if the art work isn't like the art work in the game. I know it's hard to draw that style. I'm grateful that your even considering it :)

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#8 Post by BrokenAngel75 » Mon Jul 29, 2013 10:04 pm

Sounds like a fun game. I hope you can get it out there

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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#9 Post by Ran08 » Tue Jul 30, 2013 6:08 am

It looks nice. :) Jun's sprite is kinda common already but that's alright, he seems cute and interesting. Hahaha. ^^ I do have one question though. Is that the final look for the textbox? It doesn't seem to fit with the overall feel of the screen but... maybe that's just me. :))

Anyway, good luck on this! :)

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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#10 Post by Fenrir34 » Tue Jul 30, 2013 6:15 am

Ran08 wrote:It looks nice. :) Jun's sprite is kinda common already but that's alright, he seems cute and interesting. Hahaha. ^^ I do have one question though. Is that the final look for the textbox? It doesn't seem to fit with the overall feel of the screen but... maybe that's just me. :))

Anyway, good luck on this! :)
I know. His sprite has been used quite a bit and since I can't draw it's hard for me to make different ones. I more of a coder and programmer. And now that I finally know how to change the text boxes it'll be different.
I understand what you mean by that . :D

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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#11 Post by MarineScripter » Tue Jul 30, 2013 10:26 am

The art style for a lot of the sprites look a little BxG to me, but overall the game seems promising. The premise is simple, but I like it.
The text box, as I agree, does seem a little out of place. Perhaps a different color would suit better but as this is just a preview, it'll be interesting seeing the updates.
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#12 Post by compositionc » Tue Jul 30, 2013 10:38 am

It's a simple premise, I think, but it has a lot of promise and heart to it. I look forward to the completed game! If you ever need help with editing, I can do some.

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#13 Post by Fenrir34 » Tue Jul 30, 2013 3:40 pm

MarineScripter wrote:The art style for a lot of the sprites look a little BxG to me, but overall the game seems promising. The premise is simple, but I like it.
The text box, as I agree, does seem a little out of place. Perhaps a different color would suit better but as this is just a preview, it'll be interesting seeing the updates.

You're right. I need to find a good text box that fits the story and I think I have it. Thanks for being interested btw :)

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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#14 Post by Fenrir34 » Fri Aug 02, 2013 10:33 pm

An update for Sora

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Re: Sakura Blossoms-A Sacred Promise (GXB)(Romance/Drama)

#15 Post by BrokenAngel75 » Mon Aug 05, 2013 8:11 pm

Fenrir34 wrote:An update for Sora
I must say that I like Sora's style :lol:

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