The Gardener Did It! (I Did Not!) [bl][mystery][comedy?]

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The Gardener Did It! (I Did Not!) [bl][mystery][comedy?]

#1 Post by AshenhartKrie » Mon Jul 29, 2013 8:38 pm

THE GARDENER DID IT! (I DID NOT!)
John the gardener reckons he cops the blame for everything. And he does. For good reason - he always does it. But this time he's been accused of something he sure as hell didn't do.
Murder.
Flirt shamelessly with the cop, the shy and creepy butler and the son of the deceased master to prove your innocence and catch the perp.

ALL CREDIT FOR THE SPRITES GO TO A-BOX.

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John
The gardener and the protagonist. He has a short temper and a slight case of sticky fingers. He says he is always blamed for everything (becuase it's always him), but this time he's innocent.
Oh, and did I mention he's gay?

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Luka
The shy, quiet butler. He is friendly towards everyone, but is a little scared of John. He can be quite spooky, seemingly appearing and disappearing into thin air like a ghost.
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Harry
The young cop. This is his first case and he is determined to solve it, taking his job very seriously. But John's constant flirting and Luka's appearing out of nowhere is flustering him. He is convinced that there is something going on in the mansion.

Mark
The (dead) mansion owner's son. He is currently going through a rebellious phase and is always sulking, despite the smile on his face. His father was murdered, but it seems he doesn't care...

Both writing and scripting are at 25%
CGs 0% (Don't currently have a CG artist)
There won't be music
Backgrounds are at 50%, I still need to get a few.
Sprites 50% (well, I have half of them)

I'm currently working on Luka's path. So far there's around 3,000 words (yeah that's not much I know, but school's a drag). I have a few screenshots of the first little bit that basically introduces the characters.
So far I've got all the paths planned, although there'll only be one choice (I'm really sorry, but I'll try to make up for it with interesting dialogue and cute paths
(even if two of them end in bloodshed)


Look, Look, an update! (even if it's a very small and not interesting one).
I've basically just written all the endings. Unconventional, but that's how I roll. I have the three major events planned for Luka's route, and I'm beginning planning Mark's.
Harry still seems really boring to me, I've sort of formulated his path, but it's super boring and kind of weak. Any advice/ideas/thoughts would be appreciated.
Still looking for a CG artist (psst if you're interested, PM me, it would help me out).

Hopefully I can get some feedback from you all, what you like, what you'd like to see, which character appeals the most to you that sort of thing.
I've also almost got enough for a brief demo - just the beginning, the first day where you meet everyone and get some brief information. Would you guys be interested in checking that out once I get Harry's and Mark's sprites?

I seriously just want to send hundreds and hundreds of hugs to a-box who is doing the sprites for this game. Seriously. I love you.
Rated M for swearing, crap pick up lines and a tacky mystery.
This is my FIRST EVER ATTEMPT AT PROGRAMMING! Whoo!
I am determined to finish this. It will be finished, even if it kills me.
Thanks for looking!
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Re: The Gardener Did It! (I Did Not!) [bl][mystery][comedy?]

#2 Post by aphosphene » Mon Jul 29, 2013 8:49 pm

Okay so the sprites just blew me away. Can I have John for myself? I'd go all manly for him and even wear breeches if he prefers it that way.
Haha so anyway. I love the idea of a gay protag. You don't see much of them. Plus he's a gardener! Hot.

Good luck with your game. I'll definitely be watching out for the release :)
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Yes. This is justice. I raise the .45 to his face.
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#3 Post by AshenhartKrie » Mon Jul 29, 2013 8:54 pm

Ah, thank you very much ^u^ I'm lucky to have the great artist helping me that I do.
I think it's kind of a shame that not many games these days have characters who are trans* or most of the protagonists are straight, although I have seen a lot of BL anf GL games on here.

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#4 Post by aphosphene » Mon Jul 29, 2013 9:00 pm

You're welcome. Yup there's definitely lots of BL and GL stuff, but you don't see one with a protag that's openly gay/les/bi from the start of the story. Usually they believe they're straight at first, then they start all these "ohmaigoshimfallinginlovewithmyowngender" thing going, and sadly this usually becomes the main conflict of the plot. This incredibly cliched internal struggle, figuring out their identity and so on.

I'd like to see a protag that''s over that already from the beginning. :)
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#5 Post by AshenhartKrie » Mon Jul 29, 2013 9:08 pm

And he's open about it too. :D
But I don't see a problem with those kinds of VNs if they're well written.

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#6 Post by Obscura » Mon Jul 29, 2013 10:21 pm

Glad to see this is still happening. I was wondering where you disappeared to! :)
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#7 Post by AshenhartKrie » Mon Jul 29, 2013 11:05 pm

XD I had a whole heap of schoolwork on my plate and I got super discouraged, but then I logged on and saw how supportive everyone was and I decided to keep going. :D

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#8 Post by AshenhartKrie » Fri Aug 16, 2013 4:20 am

Oh god that menu screen is WAY too pretty and bright for this. It's only temporary though, unless you guys think I should change it? Maybe I should find an image of a garden or something.
Anyway, there's also another screenshot of those two (Goddamnit I love them far too much).
Once I feel polite enough to ask for the other two sprite-sets I'll post those up as well, and hopefully release a very short demo.
This is really just me checking in and letting you all know I'm still alive.
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#9 Post by kisa » Sun Jul 20, 2014 7:17 pm

That menu screen is FABULOUS.
It's perfect.
keep it.
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