Didules wrote:Your signature caught my interest, so I came to see what this project was about, and I have to say I'm not disappointed at all!
The art is beautiful, the plot seems really dark and complicated enough to keep us into the game, and I had fun reading the informations about the characters (especially Alba who hates "Austin Beaver" (that one killed me XD)). Every single character is: interesting, realistic, believable (as far as I know), and a bit cliche, but not too much (for instance, Jamie could be really cliche, but then:So maybe she's not that cliche in the end...)as far as anyone from the outside knows.
Oh, and please, even if you revamp the synopsis (nice word here!), don't put too many informations, so that it'll stay intriguing
I'm waiting patiently for new updates!
Aww! Thank you for the praise!
I'm currently busy with college right now so the progress is a little.. slow. But there shall be progress!
And now you've rejuvenated me! I feel can feel the urge to work on this coming back.
Oh ho ho, you and I are definitely on the same boat about the "cliche-ness?" XD
Especially Jamie. She's a special character. I originally planned to make every character to look
and sound cliche at the beginning of the story then they turn out to be something else as the story progresses.
Anyhow, that didn't turn out so well since my proofreaders (cousins) said that it made the reader/player lose
interest right from the start. T^T
(Sorry, for my habit of using big words T^T I guess I do have a bit of "Alba" in me).