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Didules wrote:Your signature caught my interest, so I came to see what this project was about, and I have to say I'm not disappointed at all!
The art is beautiful, the plot seems really dark and complicated enough to keep us into the game, and I had fun reading the informations about the characters (especially Alba who hates "Austin Beaver" (that one killed me XD)). Every single character is: interesting, realistic, believable (as far as I know), and a bit cliche, but not too much (for instance, Jamie could be really cliche, but then:

as far as anyone from the outside knows.

So maybe she's not that cliche in the end...)
Oh, and please, even if you revamp the synopsis (nice word here!), don't put too many informations, so that it'll stay intriguing
I'm waiting patiently for new updates!

Aww! Thank you for the praise!
I'm currently busy with college right now so the progress is a little.. slow. But there shall be progress!
And now you've rejuvenated me! I feel can feel the urge to work on this coming back.

Oh ho ho, you and I are definitely on the same boat about the "cliche-ness?" XD
Especially Jamie. She's a special character. I originally planned to make every character to look
and sound cliche at the beginning of the story then they turn out to be something else as the story progresses.
Anyhow, that didn't turn out so well since my proofreaders (cousins) said that it made the reader/player lose
interest right from the start. T^T

(Sorry, for my habit of using big words T^T I guess I do have a bit of "Alba" in me).

aphosphene wrote:Aww! Thank you for the praise! Oh ho ho, you and I are definitely on the same boat about the "cliche-ness?" XD

Using clichés and then breaking them is the funniest thing to do. Ever.

Anyhow, that didn't turn out so well since my proofreaders (cousins) said that it made the reader/player lose
interest right from the start. T^T

That may also depend on the person reading, but usually, clichés never make me loose interest when they are varied (not always the same personnality for instance), I've recently realised that a story may be strange/inintersting for some and really enjoyable for others, it may depend on what the reader wants to see in your story! If it makes loose interest because they seem too cliché, then maybe, as you did in the bio of your characters, put some small short part when we doubt about their cliche-ness? Or is it already done?

(Sorry, for my habit of using big words T^T I guess I do have a bit of "Alba" in me).

That's fine with me, I quite like long and pompous words, it makes me feel like I'm having a really serious conversation. As long as I understand them it's okay

Also, don't worry about slow progress, lots of games have slow progress and it doesn't really matter ^^ We all have various things to do out of LSF I think, and studies are really important, it won't make people loose their interest in this thread! Good luck!!

Finished two sprites, will post a preview on them tonight when I get home. Found some really good, calming BGMS.
The writing is half-way done. Added multiple endings to it, though I'm having trouble with the coding.
Might need someone else to do it for me.

I did say I'm not gonna be working on this game for a while, but I suddenly had the urge to update the logo.

wooow. *A*
your sketches are really pretty and nice.
//feeling envious right now---
on hold-- but I'll definitely play once it's done and up for downloads. ;w;

ppppantsu wrote:wooow. *A*
your sketches are really pretty and nice.
//feeling envious right now---
on hold-- but I'll definitely play once it's done and up for downloads. ;w;

Thank you! I'm not working on this right now because I'm focusing on a much easier and simpler project.
But I will definitely finish this. Thank you very much.

HI PINOY!