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Re: Seduce Me [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama][Incubi/Demons]

#16 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Fri Sep 27, 2013 10:19 pm

Thank you so much for your notes =3

There's no denying it, My Teacher was very restricted and small. However, it was a great experience for me to learn and get better from so I can make my future projects better =3

I'll definitely take a look at some free BG's.

Thank you all again for your advice! <3 It's really helping this project out!

P.S. There will be VERY steamy scenes, despite it being PG-16 ;3 I promise you this!
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Re: Seduce Me [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama][Incubi/Demons]

#17 Post by try10 » Sat Sep 28, 2013 7:31 am

:oops: VERY steamy scenes! YAY! That's what I wanted. I'm happy!

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#18 Post by Meg' » Sun Sep 29, 2013 3:37 am

Very intriguing story and the art looks nice !

Good luck with your project ! :D
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Re: Seduce Me [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama][Incubi/Demons]

#19 Post by Akitsuki » Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:53 am

I'd say the opening story is rather.. typical, but it's not stopping me to play it! Who knows what story waits after that ;D
Like always, the art interests me--even thou it's not the finished version. I'm willing to wait for this game! Wish you best of luck!

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Re: Seduce Me [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama][Incubi/Demons]

#20 Post by Didules » Sun Sep 29, 2013 4:22 pm

About this whole "why is the story set in Japan?"-thing, I wanted to add something.
I think that what disturb many people and stop them from playing a game set in Japan isn't that there were many games set in Japan, but set in "manga-japan" aka the Japan we know through manga, that may not be very accurate or realistic: it becomes a bunch of cliche on Japan and the creator can't get through this without using the same situations, then it gets boring.
If you know your subject and make it in a realistic Japanese environment, I don't think it would cause any problems, but if you don't have the confidence about making your environment accurate and going out of the cliche-ness of Japan seen in manga, then think of another country. That would be all on that point.
About the names, well if the story isn't in Japan anymore, it doesn't mean you have to change all the names, the MC can stay japanese (or half, who knows? That would explain the eyes colour), but of course all the protagonist can't keep a japanese name, but that doesn't really matter, besides once we have chosen the names of the characters, it's hard to change it, right? :)
About the cliche-ness of your characters, I trust you, your choice and your writing since I've yg d your previous comments :) I hope you'll manage to write them the way you want them to be, good luck to you!
Apart frm that, as it was already said, the art is nice :) I'm waiting to see more! The stairs don't look that good, my advice would be to try another viewpoint and do thinner lines, then don't use "strong" colors that would distract us from the sprites, and after that I trust your art, making BG is * hard... Good luck!

That was a bit long, sorry and congrates for reading everything ^^ good luck with this game, I'm waiting for more updates :D
Also, am I the only one who think of this: "incubi/demon brother = diabolik lovers"? (I never played the game! It's just a bit similar XD)

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#21 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Fri Oct 04, 2013 1:54 am

~NEWS~
--Notes Taken as of 10/3/2013 and Script Changed (Character names and setting change)
--Slight Character Background Change (Mika)
--GUI added - Options Menu
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#22 Post by Flowers from Nowhere » Fri Oct 04, 2013 11:34 am

I love that menu!

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#23 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Wed Oct 09, 2013 10:04 am

--Voice Cast announced! (10/09/13)

VOICE CAST (Provided by VOICEIYUU)
James - Bradley Gareth
Sam - Alejandro Saab
Erik - Christopher Escalante
Matthew - Ethan Nakashima
Damien - RevTheSamurai/Lou Cosh
Naomi - Samantha Chan
Suzu - "Pickle131"
Lisette (New Mean Girl) - Trina
Mean Girls - Kimberley Campbell & Sakura Hughes
Devil Boy - Tyler Coker
Father - Tyler Coker
Mother - Kimberly Campbell
Grandfather - Christopher Escalante
Mrs. Philips - Sakura Hughes
Lawyer - Ethan Nakashima
Intercom - Sakura Hughes
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Re: Seduce Me [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama][Incubi/Demons]

#24 Post by try10 » Wed Oct 09, 2013 4:21 pm

VOICE CAST?! WOW! I'm really impressed. :D Good luck! I'm sure the full game would be wonderful to play.

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Re: Seduce Me [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama][Incubi/Demons]

#25 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Wed Jan 01, 2014 3:55 pm

UPDATE! (After forever, oh my goodness!)

I am excited to announce that the Demo and Kickstarter for SEDUCE ME will be posted and public on February 14th. As I have said before, this game will be free to play free, so the demo will obviously also be free to play.

Happy New Year, by the way, everyone!
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Re: Seduce Me [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama][Incubi/Demons]

#26 Post by Hazel-Bun » Wed Jan 01, 2014 4:08 pm

Awesome ^^ Can't wait!
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#27 Post by try10 » Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:00 pm

Finally an update! I'm really happy! :D

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#28 Post by Alphonse » Thu Jan 02, 2014 5:59 am

I'd work on distinguishing the guys more, tbh. They look rather similar, except for Hideki, who is the same besides his tsurime. The only thing setting the rest apart is hair color and eye color! (I mean, even their hairstyles are pretty similar). You can give them more distinctive features and still have them be attractive. A strong jaw here, a rounder face there, a straight nose there, longer hair, super short hair, somewhat thicker eyebrows, you know? These things don't kill attractiveness and they help to set characters apart.

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Re: Seduce Me [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama][Incubi/Demons]

#29 Post by Maltagliati » Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:09 pm

@ try10 + Hazel-Bun
Thank you for your support! \o/ I hope you guys will like our demo when we release it.

@ Alphonse
Thanks for your feedback! I agree that they do have same face syndrome, which is a habit that I am trying to break out of whenever I draw, especially for anime characters. I understand what you mean by adding different facial characteristics for each of them so that they are more distinguishable (I try to do that with body types as well!). When I first drew them, I didn't have that in mind, and that ultimately did me in. That was my first concept sketch of the guys, so I will take what you said into account the next time I draw them.

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#30 Post by Shacchan » Fri Jan 03, 2014 11:57 am

The art looks amazing and the story is interesting! Good luck for you!

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