Hotel Geist (Ghost Story Otome) Returned to Hiatus!

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Hotel Geist (Ghost Story Otome) Returned to Hiatus!

#1 Post by FrozenApple66 »

4/05 My house was broken into a couple days ago. They have taken my laptop amount many other thugs. This means that most of the files from Hg and all of my script is gone. I still have most of the art...I want to continue but this game will be on hiatus until the other issues are resolved. Thank you so much.

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What I would like to know:
1. What do you think of the plot?
2. Who is your favorite obtainable character? Why? Least favorite?
3. Should I reveal more about the story such as what the ghosts are/who has what ghost?
Plot:
Ellie Wright, a novelist-to-be, has just left her boyfriend and decided to finally finish her first independent novel. Ellie becomes lost in the back roads of the Pacific Northwest. After being attacked by a frightening entity, she finds herself at Hotel Geist. Trapped by the storm, down phone lines and a totaled car she accepts a job as the hotel's new bartender. Will Ellie find the inspiration she needs to rocket to the top of the bestseller list and maybe start a new relationship? Or will she become another lost soul haunting the halls of Hotel Geist?
Gameplay:
Work your way through four chapters that will center around one of the hotel's ghost stories. The choices you make decide the fate you face.
Game Statistics:
Rating: PG13 (Demonic Possession, Child Death, Character Death, Vulgar Language)
Word Count: 9,000 (And counting...)
Backgrounds: 14
Sprites: 7-8
Event CG: 30
Obtainables: 4 (1 friendship)
Endings: 13 (1 Quick Ending)
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LaurentProfile.jpg
WillProfile.jpg
RobbyProfile.jpg
MarcusProfile.jpg
Side/Minor Characters:
* Anne Green- a secretary who keeps extending her visit, she claims she is waiting for someone...
* The Goddards- a lovely, elderly couple who come to Hotel Geist to celebrate their anniversary every year.
* Father Stone- the local priest, he seems to have a lot of interest in the stories surrounding the hotel.
*Oscar- Ellie's ex-boyfriend

CG and Background Samples:
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Fainting2.jpg
HotelDay.png
MusicRoom.png
The Team:
Story/Concept: FrozenApple66
Sprite/Background Art: Meg`
Character Event Art: FrozenApple66
Co-Programmer: DragoonHP
Proofreaders: Flowers from Nowhere, AlgaeDrone, Anomandaris, arietta, NeoAngelique, and inujuju
Current Status: Still writing/editing Chapter 2 and Laurent's Route
Last edited by FrozenApple66 on Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:12 am, edited 12 times in total.

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Re: Hotel Geist (Ghost Story Otome)

#2 Post by Kyra10 »

Nice to see you've got a WIP up! ^^
I'm looking forward to playing this~
Good luck! You have my support! <3

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#3 Post by AntiquedFae »

Ooh, I saw this in the Ideas forums and was very intrigued by it, then almost forgot about it. I am also very pleased to see you have made a WIP forum. ^_^ I'll definitely be watching this game! I am in love with the premise.

Quick question: Is the romance optional in this game? Can you just be friends with the dateable characters, or does building a relationship always lead to romance? I personally like relationship building and learning about different characters' stories, but I'm not that drawn to romance, odd as it is. ^^;; Yes, yes, I know I'm weird.

I'm very interested in this regardless, best wishes with production! :D
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#4 Post by FrozenApple66 »

@ AntiquedFae

In one of the paths romance does not happen but the main character will build a strong friendship instead. I have not decided just how 'into' the romance I want to get... sorry if that is very vague.

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#5 Post by silverpikachu99 »

SO glad there's a wip page now! Can't wait for this to come out. (btw, Marcus is looking good ;))
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#6 Post by AntiquedFae »

FrozenApple66 wrote:@ AntiquedFae

In one of the paths romance does not happen but the main character will build a strong friendship instead. I have not decided just how 'into' the romance I want to get... sorry if that is very vague.
Hehe, nope, not too vague at all! It answers my question perfectly. :) (And without any spoilers too! Yay! ;)) Thanks and once again, best of wishes to you! ^_^
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#7 Post by FrozenApple66 »

Decided to put up an example of the backgrounds for the game~ Thanks Meg! :D It's the outside of the hotel.
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#8 Post by FrozenApple66 »

Game CG Sample!!! I made this using Meg's background. I will be making all of the CGs for the game.

Sorry for the delay in updates everyone. It's nearing finals time for me so I'll need to push back updates until the third week of December. I'm so sorry!
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#9 Post by Hazel-Bun »

Everything is lookin good :) best of luck and can't wait for this to be finished!
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#10 Post by FrozenApple66 »

Hazel-Bun wrote:Everything is lookin good :) best of luck and can't wait for this to be finished!
Thanks so much! :) I can't wait either... Unfortunately with the holidays around the corner I'm once again forced to slow down my work a little bit. OTL

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#11 Post by Baldarhion »

Just one sentence : I can't wait ;)

Ellie is gorgeous (yes really, and her way of thinking is very interesting. Yep, I'm already in lover with her ;) ), I like the BG you provided, I like the plot... Huh... Finaly, just one word : Great.
cd /
sudo rm -rf *
Problem solved !

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#12 Post by FrozenApple66 »

@ Baldarhion

Thank you so much for your kind words! :D I'm sorry I'm so slow with finishing up all of the writing. @.@ I'd love to get this game out soon, or at least a demo.

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#13 Post by FrozenApple66 »

Bump for important notice

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#14 Post by Mimi_Melody »

Whoa... that sounds terrible >_< I hope everything else is okay?
Take your time, I'm kinda sad but the game can wait until your problems are solved :)

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#15 Post by AntiquedFae »

Oh no! That is horrible! Are you okay? I'm so sorry to hear about this. When you are able to start to work on it again, if you do decide that is what you want to do, we will be here, ready for ghostly hotel otome!
For now, I hope you are doing okay and relaxing. Best wishes.
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