Blissful Kisses [GxB] [Otome, Romance, Slice of life]

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Blissful Kisses [GxB] [Otome, Romance, Slice of life]

#1 Post by DeletedUser160413 » Sun Nov 17, 2013 9:24 pm

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As you can see the game is called Blissful Kisses and it's actually my first game. Right now I'm working solo, but I might look into recruiting a couple of people in the near future. This is a romantic otome game, taking place in the modern world that we live in. I decided to make a slice of life, happy kind of story with a little bit of drama because those are the kind of stories that I personally enjoy. Most of the characters in this game will be in their mid- to later part of their twenties (25-28 y/o), successful, really handsome characters. I'm a big fan of series like Gintama, Samurai Champloo, Death Note and other relatively similar series with more 'adult looking' characters and I'm looking into creating characters like that.

This story has a little 'Suits' theme going on btw, with the MC being fresh out of college and now finally starting a new life as a paralegal in a successful law firm. This is a very cute and lovely story about life and love and everything inbetween. I must say that I'm a perfectionist, so I'm going to try to perfect every single detail before I present you this game.

As for myself. I'm a 20 year old university student living in Stockholm, Sweden. Reading and writing have always been hobbies of mine, but not as much as art has been actually :) I recently got introduced into the world of anime and otome games and fell in love with it all. So I decided that it was time for me to share my stories, and I really want to create something beautiful. That's why I've been putting a lot of work and effort into this project, but it's definitely not ready for the world yet.

I'll be sharing a lot more info in the near future, so please stay tuned for updates :)

Oh btw, this game is rated 10+. This game does not contain any violence, nudity, crude humor, blood or use of any kind of strong language. Be aware of super hot guys in suits though!
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#2 Post by twilightworks » Mon Nov 18, 2013 4:02 am

I like what I'm hearing so far! For some reason the idea of a Gintama-influenced VN really appeals to me.

I look forward to seeing/hearing more. Even if it's just a real small bit, show us some characters!

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#3 Post by gekiganwing » Mon Nov 18, 2013 7:22 am

When you have time, please state:

* Where it'll take place
* Estimated number of routes or endings
* Few choices, many choices, or somewhere in between?
muniiam wrote:This story has a little 'Suits' theme going on btw, with the MC being fresh out of college and now finally starting a new life as a paralegal in a successful law firm. This is a very cute and lovely story about life and love and everything inbetween. I must say that I'm a perfectionist, so I'm going to try to perfect every single detail before I present you this game.
Overall, I think writers benefit when their story lends itself to comparison with a famous successful one. But I don't think writers benefit if their story has *too much* resemblance to a published work. (You don't want it to be called "Lost knockoff #7" or "Harry Potter imitation #10.") So yeah, keep in mind that your premise is slightly similar to the indie game Love & Order, which is about lawyers in Montreal. Think about other pieces of fiction that you can compare yours to, in a positive way.
muniiam wrote:Most of the characters in this game will be in their mid- to later part of their twenties (25-28 y/o), successful, really handsome characters. I'm a big fan of series like Gintama, Samurai Champloo, Death Note and other relatively similar series with more 'adult looking' characters and I'm looking into creating characters like that.
Adult characters have continued to appear in 2000s-2010s anime, as well as shonen and shojo demographic manga. But they're not as prevalent as they used to be. In recent years, adults have had major roles in series such as Usagi Drop, Rescue Wings, Tiger & Bunny, Hyouge Mono, Planetes, King of Thorn, most of Naoki Urasawa's works, and some feature length films.

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#4 Post by DeletedUser160413 » Mon Nov 18, 2013 7:57 am

gekiganwing wrote:When you have time, please state:

* Where it'll take place
* Estimated number of routes or endings
* Few choices, many choices, or somewhere in between?
- The story takes place somewhere in western Europe. I will not really mention any country so the player kind of gets to imagine where he/she would like to be. I chose this because I realised that it was different and really could work for me if I do it well. Also, I know western Europe quite well, and I think the story would be more actual if I write about something I know rather than something I've never seen in my life.
- I'm planning on writing about 12 chapters for every character (three routes so far), with one chapter being about a 20-30 minute read. There will also be two endings to the story, depending on the love points.
- There will be up to 24 or more choices in every route, and they will be randomly set in every chapter, but basically two choices per chapter. These determine your overall score in the game.

gekiganwing wrote:Overall, I think writers benefit when their story lends itself to comparison with a famous successful one. But I don't think writers benefit if their story has *too much* resemblance to a published work. (You don't want it to be called "Lost knockoff #7" or "Harry Potter imitation #10.") So yeah, keep in mind that your premise is slightly similar to the indie game Love & Order, which is about lawyers in Montreal. Think about other pieces of fiction that you can compare yours to, in a positive way.
To be honest with you, I haven't watched one episode of suits, so I don't really know it that well. I compared my project to this series because I got a couple of ideas when I was reading the plot of it. And also, all of my characters are basically wearing suits, so that's why I thought it was a good comparison. Also, my story will probably not touch upon a lot of law talk, so it will be more about life in general and a lot of things happening outside of the work system. And I have quite honestly never played this game called Love & Order, neither heard of it, but I will look into it. My reason for telling you this is that I don't plan on changing anything in my story if it resembles Love and Order, because I had no idea it even existed in the first place.

Btw my story is not all about lawyers either. I have been planning a lot of characters who don't have anything to do with what MC is doing. But I will look further into the game you mentioned.
gekiganwing wrote:Adult characters have continued to appear in 2000s-2010s anime, as well as shonen and shojo demographic manga. But they're not as prevalent as they used to be. In recent years, adults have had major roles in series such as Usagi Drop, Rescue Wings, Tiger & Bunny, Hyouge Mono, Planetes, King of Thorn, most of Naoki Urasawa's works, and some feature length films.
I love Naoki Urasawa's work, and it has definitely inspired a lot of thoughts and planning of my stories. Monster is one of my top animes/mangas out there, and I fell in love with it the first time I layed my eyes on it. I realised after watching a lot of his amazing series that the Europe theme actually could work a lot even though I want it to be japanese influenced. I think this story will be different, and I'll do whatever I can to get peoples positive attention without having to imitate the prevalent taste in style.

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#5 Post by Katta » Mon Nov 18, 2013 12:21 pm

That's a pity that you won't include professional themes that much, I like series about lawyers, with actual cases and stuff - it could have added some interesting twists to your game.
Also I hope, MC won't be stupid and unprofessional like in many Japanese games.

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#6 Post by DeletedUser160413 » Mon Nov 18, 2013 12:30 pm

Katta wrote:That's a pity that you won't include professional themes that much, I like series about lawyers, with actual cases and stuff - it could have added some interesting twists to your game.
Also I hope, MC won't be stupid and unprofessional like in many Japanese games.
If I include any professional details, I will probably spend a lot of time researching about it and trying to make it as real as possible in my project. Believe me, I've been working hard for over a month now and I finally feel like its working out for me, but I still have a lot of planning to do so I'm always up for ideas :) I'll try to make MC awesome lol ^^

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#7 Post by Katta » Tue Nov 19, 2013 12:50 am

Btw I've read it in your recruitment thread, that the girl is 25 - isn't that too old for just finishing college? (well, maybe she has her reasons...)

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#8 Post by DeletedUser160413 » Tue Nov 19, 2013 4:40 am

Katta wrote:Btw I've read it in your recruitment thread, that the girl is 25 - isn't that too old for just finishing college? (well, maybe she has her reasons...)
Well, actually I wont mention her age in the VN, because its not really necessary for my game. If I ever need an age I'll make it reasonable but still going with the game :)

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