Mind(less)
Story:
Cough (Name changeable) wakes up in a world that she knows by heart - but nothing feels the same.
Her name doesn't seem right, her coughing won't stop and the people she meets seem so familiar, yet so far out of reach.
One moment she can see the sun, only to be met with a dark moon seconds later.
The environment around her seems to change as soon as she closes her eyes - and her memories change with it.
Her confusion only becomes worse when she is met with countless murders, all centered around herself...
Features:
- Made with RPG Maker VX
- 1/2 puzzle RPG, 1/2 Visual Novel
- Self-drawn tilesets
- Choose your personality! [humorous but sarcastic; friendly but shy; mature but cold]
- Choose a strenght! [Intelligent; Sporty; Understanding]
- Choose a weakness! [Weak; Slow; Hot-Headed]
- 4 guys + 1 secret guy
- A Love-Meter
- A bunch of different endings + CG's
Characters:
Cough
A 20 year old woman that wakes up in the middle of nowhere, left with almost no memories and a name that she knows can only be fake.
Trained to become a police officer but can't remember anything else.
Stump
A 19 year old boy with a flamboyant personality.
Claims to be a soccer professional.
Just like Cough he can't remember his name - woke up with a tag that had 'Stump' written on it.
He is known for being humorous.
A person that stays positive through everything.
Patch
A 24 year old man with the habit of having one arm stuck behind his back.
It makes him uncomfortable to have both of his arms resting beside him.
Likes to keep to himself, but has a sharp mind.
He woke up with a bracelet around his right arm that had 'Patch' written on it.
Just like the others he cannot remember most things, but that doesn't make his strange habits less wierd.
Memento
[Picture coming soon...]
A 29 year old man that claims to be Cough's supervisor.
He states that he remembers everything (even his name) but never talks about what is going on.
He comes and goes as he pleases, but always makes sure that Cough is alright.
Even though he likes to tease Cough whenever he can, he is a really serious man.
Ashe
[Picture coming soon...]
A 23 year old man that always hides his face.
Really intelligent, even called a genius by some.
He wears a necklace with 'Ashe' written on it and seems to remember more than the others.
He could be best described as a loner, but a loner that makes sure that everyone is safe and sound.
Caligola
[Picture coming soon...]
A mysterious young man that only shows himself to Cough.
He always get's flustered around her and is so shy that he can't even look Cough in the eyes most of the time.
He seems to know everything and nothing at once.
What YOU can do:
To include the tastes of the audience, you are free to suggest how Caligola should look like! Brown, black or red hair? Feminine or masculine? Blue or green clothes? T-Shirt or pullover? Just state it - and I will draw him the way most of you want him to look like!
What do you think of the project? Does the story seem interesting? What do you think of the art style? What about the personality choices? Any further suggestions?
So your story seems good for starter and interesting enough to catch my attention, but can you clarify for me. 
You said that every time she closes her eyes, do you mean every time she blinks or every time she goes to sleep? And how much memory changes when that happens? Do they jumble around showing her different types of memory? How did those murder connect to all this?
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