ALLBLACK (Scifi, action)
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 1:43 am
LAST UPDATED: 10 APRIL 2014
PROJECT STATUS IS ACTIVE!To do list (Listed on priority):
[✓] Concepting
[✓] Write the whole rough draft
[✓] Consistency check
[ ] Grammar check? (Need someone with better English than me!)
[？] Interface layouting (Done, but not that good)
[✓] Backrounds!
[ ] MUSIC!!!!
[✓] SFX!!!!
[ｘ] Sprites! << In the making
[ ] Extras (Encouraged optional)
The Concept
Protagonist (Main story)
Ferno (The Subject, also known as Theodore Quentin, shorted Ted, during his amnesia days)
Heroine
Alisa Heller
Antagonist
Grail Einhorn
Plot device
Eve Heller (Alisa's sister)
Supporting character
Yuumi Arasaka
Protagonist (Flashback arc)
James Tanaka
Ievan Dalik
Synopsis
The story of an escaped test subject who lost his memories when escaping, the story will cover his journey half across the globe to find his memories back, reunion with an old friend, and self-centered revenge to the person responsible of making him able to do what other people cannot simply do.
Short Version
January 2007, James Tanaka and Ievan Dalik present a theory of space and time. The presentation pulls the interest of skeptical believer Grail Einhorn, forefather of Einhorn Foundation. Both of them feels honored to receive a private audience to present their theory in personal whilst aiming for sponsorship. Grail Agrees to give unlimited funding and utilities for both of them as long as he is the only one they would report to.
After seven months of researching in high level technology, both of them finally proven their theory; the fully functioning thesis of time travel. Ievan insist that they should test it to human being, but James against it. A few days later after conflicting their principle, Ievan decides to report their findings early than scheduled to Grail, where Grail reluctantly accept. Regrettably the experiment went wrong, Ievan disintegrates into nothingness while in the other side the experiment is a success. As before Ievan disappears Ievan managed to conjure an apple out of nothingness, in which the apple is a proof that he wasn't dreaming. Grail tries to cover the incident by claiming to James that Ievan did that badly ended unauthorized experiment on his own.
James can feel that his demise is coming if he keep harboring this secret. But against his conscience who wants to destroy everything, he decides to trust the secret to his colleague; Madame Claudia Magdalene, the highest caretaker of Edelweiss Orphanage that ironically runs under support of Einhorn Foundation. James decides that he will announce his theory to the Academy. He passes his theory to Anthony Heller, a colleague of his in the Academy of Science. When he returns home after passing the article, James get shot in train station and Anthony as the last man who knows about the existence of the article is also killed.
Anthony passed away leaving his two daughters; Alisa and Eve Heller, who is then taken care by Madame Magdalene in Edelweiss Orphanage. The girls later met with Ferno, a boy who has been raised in the orphanage since infant. One and half year later Ferno and Eve disappears from the orphanage to participate in a secret experiment. Magdalene is forced to comply and not to tell Eve's sister. Knowing the existence of James and Ievan's thesis without Grail aware of it, Magdalene then send mourning Alisa Heller to an intense military training to find her sister, under the condition that she has to find Ferno and save him, or kill him it is too late.
Another one and half year later, she found Ferno walking absent mindedly outside Arasaka Yuumi's apartment in Istanbul; a former engineer in project ALLBLACK, the secret project where Ferno is user as the lab rat. From there she contact Ferno and interrogate him about what happened to him in the last year. Where regrettably Ferno suffers amnesia after he fell from plane post his attempt to escape from Einhorn Foundation hidden research facility and stranded in Mombasa where he killed two Einhorn Foundation spies then tempted by Yuumi to turn himself in in return of his memories.
Three days later, after the time when Yuumi sets to arrange a transport to move Ferno into another facility in Japan. Where Alisa and Ferno proceed to hijack and interrogate Yuumi instead. Ferno who doesn't know Alisa's purpose to search her sister surprised to se Alisa lost control asking about project CHARMEINE when the plane they had hijacked failed to provide a security code for landing which eventually cause the foundation to shot the plane down. Amidst the chaos of their last minute, Ferno still forgives her despite Alisa burying herself in guilt for lying to him. But when Ferno and Yuumi proceed to pilot the plane out of threat, the plane get shot down separating Ferno and Alisa.
Three months later, Alisa found Ferno hiding in the island of Java in Indonesia after she returned to Germany to ask Magdalene for information. She contacted Ferno to share all the information she gathered and plan a surprise attack to Einhorn Foundation in Japan where Grail hold her sister and where Ferno have a chance to restore his memories. Alas, Alisa does not realise that she had been followed by an assassin from the foundation since she left Germany. Alisa and Ferno barely escaped their attacker but they manages to reach Japan.
They plan their attack for one week after spent those days spying on Einhorn Foundation research facility building. Within those days and the three days they spent waiting to hijack foundation's transport plane in Istanbul, they have bonded. Not the temporary common enemy kind of bond, but a slight romantic bond. Both of them tries to focus in their mission that they pretend to feel nothing. When they attack the facility after confirm that Einhorn is present inside the building, Ferno manages to find Einhorn who is deformed after the event post his escape from hidden foundation research facility. Einhorn has perfected the CHARMEINE; a brainwave controlling device, which allows him to transfer Ferno's least progress in ALLBLACK to CHARMEINE lab rat; Eve Heller, which is also Alisa's sister. During their confrontation, Eve demonstrates the devastating power of Second Astral under Grail's manipulation. Eve able to create almost everything from thin air. The confrontation restores Ferno's buried memories, awaking his ability to use Second Astral like Eve, despite less perfect. After a bitter hard fight, Alisa and Ferno only manages to break the first core of CHARMEINE, which allows Eve to think on her own and resist against Grail's control. After the first core breaks and freeing half of Eve's brain capability, she proceed to suffer a serious brain leak. Her third dimension manipulation is losing it's perfection and Grail starts to act reckless in desperation for survival. Grail manages to seal himself inside a bulletproof room full of computers. Just before Eve lost her mind, Alisa decides that she needs to assure her sister that she would never left her alone. Ferno tries to stop Alisa since Eve is not stable and could endanger everything that close to her without exception, but Alisa throws Ferno away from the building using a grenade, which doesn't scratch him since he manages to create force field to protect himself against the explosion. In his moment being thrown out off the building, he can see Alisa comforting her sister in her final moment, and Grail still tinkering with his computer inside the bulletproof glass box. Ferno flies backward against a window after surviving a series of explosion from the heavily damaged lab and freefalling below. But when he's falling, the floor where Eve and Alisa is starts to distorts, continues by an implosion. Ferno get pulled against gravity and manages to grab nearest ledge while witnessing the top part of this building fall into the ground after it's middle part gets cut off from the prior implosion. Ferno runs to the floor where he gets thrown away only to find everything is gone without trace.
[ENDING]Ferno mourns on the spot, but after a brief moment he regains his awareness and knows that he must continue with Alisa's mission; to destroy all data related to project ALLBLACK. He examines the collapsed middle part of this tower to find Grail's office. There he found a locked safebox, he breaks it and finds a big file folder about project ALLBLACK and takes it all. Three days later he stands above a ferry on Japan sea with a briefcase in his hand, he stares at the waving waters and reminisces about Alisa on it. He sheds a tear, and throws the briefcase to the waters.
After seven months of researching in high level technology, both of them finally proven their theory; the fully functioning thesis of time travel. Ievan insist that they should test it to human being, but James against it. A few days later after conflicting their principle, Ievan decides to report their findings early than scheduled to Grail, where Grail reluctantly accept. Regrettably the experiment went wrong, Ievan disintegrates into nothingness while in the other side the experiment is a success. As before Ievan disappears Ievan managed to conjure an apple out of nothingness, in which the apple is a proof that he wasn't dreaming. Grail tries to cover the incident by claiming to James that Ievan did that badly ended unauthorized experiment on his own.
James can feel that his demise is coming if he keep harboring this secret. But against his conscience who wants to destroy everything, he decides to trust the secret to his colleague; Madame Claudia Magdalene, the highest caretaker of Edelweiss Orphanage that ironically runs under support of Einhorn Foundation. James decides that he will announce his theory to the Academy. He passes his theory to Anthony Heller, a colleague of his in the Academy of Science. When he returns home after passing the article, James get shot in train station and Anthony as the last man who knows about the existence of the article is also killed.
Anthony passed away leaving his two daughters; Alisa and Eve Heller, who is then taken care by Madame Magdalene in Edelweiss Orphanage. The girls later met with Ferno, a boy who has been raised in the orphanage since infant. One and half year later Ferno and Eve disappears from the orphanage to participate in a secret experiment. Magdalene is forced to comply and not to tell Eve's sister. Knowing the existence of James and Ievan's thesis without Grail aware of it, Magdalene then send mourning Alisa Heller to an intense military training to find her sister, under the condition that she has to find Ferno and save him, or kill him it is too late.
Another one and half year later, she found Ferno walking absent mindedly outside Arasaka Yuumi's apartment in Istanbul; a former engineer in project ALLBLACK, the secret project where Ferno is user as the lab rat. From there she contact Ferno and interrogate him about what happened to him in the last year. Where regrettably Ferno suffers amnesia after he fell from plane post his attempt to escape from Einhorn Foundation hidden research facility and stranded in Mombasa where he killed two Einhorn Foundation spies then tempted by Yuumi to turn himself in in return of his memories.
Three days later, after the time when Yuumi sets to arrange a transport to move Ferno into another facility in Japan. Where Alisa and Ferno proceed to hijack and interrogate Yuumi instead. Ferno who doesn't know Alisa's purpose to search her sister surprised to se Alisa lost control asking about project CHARMEINE when the plane they had hijacked failed to provide a security code for landing which eventually cause the foundation to shot the plane down. Amidst the chaos of their last minute, Ferno still forgives her despite Alisa burying herself in guilt for lying to him. But when Ferno and Yuumi proceed to pilot the plane out of threat, the plane get shot down separating Ferno and Alisa.
Three months later, Alisa found Ferno hiding in the island of Java in Indonesia after she returned to Germany to ask Magdalene for information. She contacted Ferno to share all the information she gathered and plan a surprise attack to Einhorn Foundation in Japan where Grail hold her sister and where Ferno have a chance to restore his memories. Alas, Alisa does not realise that she had been followed by an assassin from the foundation since she left Germany. Alisa and Ferno barely escaped their attacker but they manages to reach Japan.
They plan their attack for one week after spent those days spying on Einhorn Foundation research facility building. Within those days and the three days they spent waiting to hijack foundation's transport plane in Istanbul, they have bonded. Not the temporary common enemy kind of bond, but a slight romantic bond. Both of them tries to focus in their mission that they pretend to feel nothing. When they attack the facility after confirm that Einhorn is present inside the building, Ferno manages to find Einhorn who is deformed after the event post his escape from hidden foundation research facility. Einhorn has perfected the CHARMEINE; a brainwave controlling device, which allows him to transfer Ferno's least progress in ALLBLACK to CHARMEINE lab rat; Eve Heller, which is also Alisa's sister. During their confrontation, Eve demonstrates the devastating power of Second Astral under Grail's manipulation. Eve able to create almost everything from thin air. The confrontation restores Ferno's buried memories, awaking his ability to use Second Astral like Eve, despite less perfect. After a bitter hard fight, Alisa and Ferno only manages to break the first core of CHARMEINE, which allows Eve to think on her own and resist against Grail's control. After the first core breaks and freeing half of Eve's brain capability, she proceed to suffer a serious brain leak. Her third dimension manipulation is losing it's perfection and Grail starts to act reckless in desperation for survival. Grail manages to seal himself inside a bulletproof room full of computers. Just before Eve lost her mind, Alisa decides that she needs to assure her sister that she would never left her alone. Ferno tries to stop Alisa since Eve is not stable and could endanger everything that close to her without exception, but Alisa throws Ferno away from the building using a grenade, which doesn't scratch him since he manages to create force field to protect himself against the explosion. In his moment being thrown out off the building, he can see Alisa comforting her sister in her final moment, and Grail still tinkering with his computer inside the bulletproof glass box. Ferno flies backward against a window after surviving a series of explosion from the heavily damaged lab and freefalling below. But when he's falling, the floor where Eve and Alisa is starts to distorts, continues by an implosion. Ferno get pulled against gravity and manages to grab nearest ledge while witnessing the top part of this building fall into the ground after it's middle part gets cut off from the prior implosion. Ferno runs to the floor where he gets thrown away only to find everything is gone without trace.
[ENDING]Ferno mourns on the spot, but after a brief moment he regains his awareness and knows that he must continue with Alisa's mission; to destroy all data related to project ALLBLACK. He examines the collapsed middle part of this tower to find Grail's office. There he found a locked safebox, he breaks it and finds a big file folder about project ALLBLACK and takes it all. Three days later he stands above a ferry on Japan sea with a briefcase in his hand, he stares at the waving waters and reminisces about Alisa on it. He sheds a tear, and throws the briefcase to the waters.
Non-Technical
Version 0.5
Kinetic novel
50.800 words (according to the lint report)
Splat in to 46 chapters
At least equal to 166 pages long light novel
No music and sound effects
Most background is still blank white, I am making most of the backgrounds using some games (Machinima?) namely The Sims 3.
ALLBLACK v0.5.6
Primary: https://www.dropbox.com/s/uh6spl9v6xtt5 ... ACK-056.7z (49mb)
Alternative: https://mega.co.nz/#!eVYHACCQ!uSBfPzREk ... ZLfnlysYOQ (49mb)
- Fixed: Line 3898 error
- Fully backgrounded
- Fully ambienced
Credited
Your's Truly (Duh)
PyTom
Lemmasoft Community generally
Reysuke_Takeru (Pseudonym, external bro)
KayZ-S (Also external bro)
Shir-O (Also external bro)
Personal notes:PyTom
Lemmasoft Community generally
Reysuke_Takeru (Pseudonym, external bro)
KayZ-S (Also external bro)
Shir-O (Also external bro)
* Call it "yet awful", but I'm planning to make an epic trilogy for it.
* I am not spoiling anything, but trust me, I am making the story of the century.
* You might ask "Why you write the story in third person?", I answer "Foreshadowing."
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