New Dynamic English: The Tour
About:
New Dynamic English: The Tour is a short visual novel based on the radio show New Dynamic English by DynEd International and Voice of America (is given permission to do so). Set in Washington, D.C., you play as an ESL student who won a prize for a vacation in Washington D.C., and it turns out that you're actually there for a tour in a radio station.
Characters
Max Wilson: The producer and host of New Dynamic English. He's an outgoing guy, but watch out: if you do anything obviously wrong he'll react accordingly.
Kathy Cataluna: The co-host of New Dynamic English. She is sweet and caring, but is also very good at talking to people.
Larry Smith: The engineer.
Elizabeth: Just here to host Functioning in Business.
Screenshots

Progress
50% in coding
70% in story
40% in art
Last Words... for now
I'd like to ask you what you think so far. Now I am kind of stuck on how radio shows work, so I'll also need your help.
I'd like to have 3 levels of English on this visual novel. Perhaps someone can help me on the more basic script?
Also critiques are welcome.
New Dynamic English: The Tour is a short visual novel based on the radio show New Dynamic English by DynEd International and Voice of America (is given permission to do so). Set in Washington, D.C., you play as an ESL student who won a prize for a vacation in Washington D.C., and it turns out that you're actually there for a tour in a radio station.
Characters
Max Wilson: The producer and host of New Dynamic English. He's an outgoing guy, but watch out: if you do anything obviously wrong he'll react accordingly.
Kathy Cataluna: The co-host of New Dynamic English. She is sweet and caring, but is also very good at talking to people.
Larry Smith: The engineer.
Elizabeth: Just here to host Functioning in Business.
Screenshots

Progress
50% in coding
70% in story
40% in art
Last Words... for now
I'd like to ask you what you think so far. Now I am kind of stuck on how radio shows work, so I'll also need your help.
I'd like to have 3 levels of English on this visual novel. Perhaps someone can help me on the more basic script?
Also critiques are welcome.