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PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2014 4:35 am 
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I want you to erase my memories...


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Synopsis
It's Summer 2010. I was given an assignment for my "final project" to watch over Violanda Margaritifera, an ordinary 16-years old high school girl, who was participated on the clinical trials of some kind of new substance on development. It is said that the substance has an effect on erasing some specific parts of someone's memories...Instead of having a standard procedures which require her to stay on the isolated facility during the treatment, she was given a freedom to lead a normal everyday life and attend school like she usually did. As the consequences, I have to watch her on her school and disguise my appearance as high-school student too. However, that girl is more troublesome than she looks...and many things is not going smoothly as I planned...

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Left : your protagonist (Tito)
Right : main character (Vio)


another characters : Coming Soon


FEATURES
1. Game menu screen to monitor your progress
2. Hyperlink that brings you to the quick explanation about technical terms
3. Tips for more in-depth explanation about technical terms you encountered during the game

SCREENSHOT
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DEMO VER 0.1
Code:
Statistics:

The game contains 300 dialogue blocks, containing 4,320 words and 24,854
characters, for an average of 14.4 words and 83 characters per block.

The game contains 1 menus, 18 images, and 38 screens.

Approximately 15-20 minutes reading.
Notes :
1. Tentative main menu screen
2. The sprites currently only have one expression
3. The script has not been corrected by the proofreader

Download Link for PC-All (Windows, Mac, Linux)

ERASER ON GOOGLE PLAY (for Android version 2.2 and up)
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STATUS
Story : 20/100
GUI : 80/100
CG : 0/100
Sprites : 20/100

Yeah it's still a long long way.
Planning : 20.000-30.000 words, approx. 1 hour reading

Please give me some feedback
1. What do you think of the story so far?
2. What do you think of game system overall?
3. What do you want me to improve on the future?
4. Any bugs/error encountered?

Also, I appreciate if someone's willing to help me as a proofreader.

OTHER MEDIA
Read at your own risk. Might contain some spoilers. But it can be some alternate story too.

Manga (12 pages)-Status : Ongoing (Hiatus)
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Video Trailer (Old)
made by ATL on Ren'Py. Watch the highest (480p) quality


Side Story of the Protagonist
made by ATL on Ren'Py. Watch the highest (480p) quality

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"Let us learn to DREAM, then we may perhaps find the truth" (August Kekule, the benzene structure inventor)


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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2014 3:36 am 
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By the way ERASER now has its official website. Wohoooooo :D
Please drop by to see miscellaneous things I won't bother to post here.

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"All things are poison, and nothing is without poison; only the dose permits something not to be poisonous" (Paracelsus, The Father of Toxicology)

"Let us learn to DREAM, then we may perhaps find the truth" (August Kekule, the benzene structure inventor)


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PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2014 10:18 pm 
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It seems I want to re-do all the sprites again. I'm trying my best to make a decent sprites for Visual Novel. It might not looks pro, but still, I'm trying....

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I SPY WITH MY LITTLE EAR IRISU SYNDROME OST


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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2014 8:02 pm 
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plaster wrote:
I SPY WITH MY LITTLE EAR IRISU SYNDROME OST

Eh? Eh? What do you mean? I don't understand :?

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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2014 8:34 pm 
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... I SPIED WRONG. It was Ai to Yuuki to Kashiwa Mochi, which was made by the same guy.

I know Irisu Syndrome had a composer but I don't know where Kashiwa Mochi's music came from.

... Sorry I get excited (´・ω・`)

Anyway the new sprites look good! ヽ(;▽;)ノ


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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2014 8:38 pm 
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plaster wrote:
... I SPIED WRONG. It was Ai to Yuuki to Kashiwa Mochi, which was made by the same guy.

I know Irisu Syndrome had a composer but I don't know where Kashiwa Mochi's music came from.

... Sorry I get excited (´・ω・`)

Anyway the new sprites look good! ヽ(;▽;)ノ


Hmm to be honest that BGM was taken from TAM Music Factory and it's free resources.
It's not surprising that some people used it for their projects too.
Should I change it by the way?

Thanks in advance.

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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2014 9:53 am 
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plaster wrote:
No, I think it's good!

Alright, I'm already in love with that BGM too XD

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Downloaded this story a couple of months ago, and have played through it twice now. I'm hooked . . . . can hardly wait until the complete game is released! Can you give me a hint as to when that might be?

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:17 am 
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The story looks interesting. And that Menu Screen is pretty.

Downloading when the connection's fast. :P


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2014 10:31 am 
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philip wrote:
Downloaded this story a couple of months ago, and have played through it twice now. I'm hooked . . . . can hardly wait until the complete game is released! Can you give me a hint as to when that might be?

philip

I'm sorry I've abandoned this project for quite some time (due to my thesis *cough*). I can't give you definite time, but I tried as hard as possible to get it done this year or at least next year. Even just a short read is fine. I want to finish it no matter what :?
Glad to hear your feedback and I have read your message too, definitely consider it XD Thanks

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theSardonyx wrote:
The story looks interesting. And that Menu Screen is pretty.

Downloading when the connection's fast. :P

Teheee thanks (I think the file size is not too big?) XD Please give me some feedback when it's done if you have some time :)

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Yo I see there are lots of modifications to your story, I like your new sprites!
they lokk even better than before :D

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zankizuna wrote:
Yo I see there are lots of modifications to your story, I like your new sprites!
they lokk even better than before :D

Ahaha, you're right on the bet! How did you recognize it anyway? O___O
Thanks for the compliment :)

Also I'm trying to publish the Android version on Google Play, so stay tuned folks :wink:

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