Inferno [GxB][Comedy][Demons]
Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2014 11:23 am
INFERNO
Hey people of LemmaSoft! I'm here to present my current new project. Since I finally have a tablet for drawing, I would be very happy if you tell me your opinion about my art >///<, and of course, about the plot of my VN. Thank you
''Live here is so relaxing... I don't need to care about Dad's business... This is the best decision I have done.
You play as Astartea, The King of Demons's daughter. Sick of her Dad, who is always yelling at her because she doesn't like Hell's business, she ran away to the human's world, where she is living now. But her Dad is not going to let her do what she wants... So he's going to send two of her most powerful warriors to look for his ''little girl''... Will she return to Hell? Or will she stay in the Earth? Decide yourself.''
You play as Astartea, The King of Demons's daughter. Sick of her Dad, who is always yelling at her because she doesn't like Hell's business, she ran away to the human's world, where she is living now. But her Dad is not going to let her do what she wants... So he's going to send two of her most powerful warriors to look for his ''little girl''... Will she return to Hell? Or will she stay in the Earth? Decide yourself.''
Azazyel: The Commander of the Fallen Angels. He is a bit pervert, always laughing, he doesn't really care about Hell's business and all that stuff. he only cares about have a good time, drinking and with girls. He is a lazy person, always in good mood, but sometimes he is very serious, even he can be very scary and dangerous. He is looking for Astartea because if he don't, he could be banished from Hell to the human's world. He doesn't have a good relationship with Luzbel because he is jealous of his status in Hell's army.
Luzbel: The currently Right Hand of the King. He is pretty silent, very rude and grumpy. He hates the human world and all humans, so he hates the fact that Astartea, the beloved daughter of the King, ran away from Hell. He is very angry with the King because he considers that going to look for the wild Astartea is a minor task, a pathetic task considering that he's the Right Hand of the King, so he isn't very happy for being in the human world. He is always teasing Azazyel and Astartea as a way of have fun. Always sorrounded by beautiful women, but he is not interested.
Astartea (you) : She is wild and crazy, always looking for her own sake. She is sick of Hell and her Dad, so she is hidding in a mistery village in the Earth. She was the Right Hand of the King because she was the best warrior in Hell (and the prettiest, of course), but she resigned because she couldn't deal with that pressure. She doesn't want to return to Hell.
Luzbel: The currently Right Hand of the King. He is pretty silent, very rude and grumpy. He hates the human world and all humans, so he hates the fact that Astartea, the beloved daughter of the King, ran away from Hell. He is very angry with the King because he considers that going to look for the wild Astartea is a minor task, a pathetic task considering that he's the Right Hand of the King, so he isn't very happy for being in the human world. He is always teasing Azazyel and Astartea as a way of have fun. Always sorrounded by beautiful women, but he is not interested.
Astartea (you) : She is wild and crazy, always looking for her own sake. She is sick of Hell and her Dad, so she is hidding in a mistery village in the Earth. She was the Right Hand of the King because she was the best warrior in Hell (and the prettiest, of course), but she resigned because she couldn't deal with that pressure. She doesn't want to return to Hell.
Well, I have to say pretty things. First, yes, all my characters are all nude. It's because I am actually very busy right now with my finals, so I haven't got any time to draw the final sprites of my characters.
Second, I would like to hear your opinion about the plot, and any comments, all that you want <3 Thanks for reading !
THE FULL VN WILL INCLUDE:
-At least 2 endings per path, if not 3
-Some CG
-Original art and story
-Spanish version, probably English version too.
PROGRESS:
Story: 20%
Sprites 10%
CG: 0%
GUI: 0%
Script: 0%
I appreciate every comment or critique<3
Pd: It would be fantastic any type of help since I'm the only one working in this project. Hope you like it and thanks for reading and taking your time.
I really like your sprite work, especially the differences you portray in the body types. The story sounds like it could be enjoyable, especially if you do multiple endings. I'd like to see a joke ending of for one of the "fail" endings as being slung over one of the demon's shoulders and dragged back kicking and screaming. The only thing I'm not so found of is the names, they feel a little too serious, but it's only an opinion. Good luck with the project!