Wow, thank you so much : )171 wrote:Personally, I think that your game looks appealing. The art is outstanding, it caught my attention. Anyway, I have two suggestions.
How long the story is? You should give some thoughts about this because quality is more important than quantity. Sometimes, I find meaningful short novels more satisfying to read than long novels.
About the sexual contents, I think that sometimes sexual acts are done in a very forced way, I mean, they do not have any significance to the storyline as if they're a bonus. You should give some meanings to them.
However, these suggestions are based on my personal thoughts, you can follow them if you want but I won't force you to do it.
Good luck!
The story is actually pretty long, the script is composed of 49,000+ words at the moment, and I'm not even half way done yet. I'm wanting to give as much of a detailed and interesting story as I possibly can. Though I do have to agree with you, I find some short novels more satisfying than long ones at times : )
About the sexual acts, they're not necessary, however, I am an adult artist, so for some reason I feel the need to add some scenes like this in it, xD however there is a part in the story where you can choose to do a sexual act with one of the heroine, and it affects the story in a dramatic way. (Though of course, for the ones that turn these scenes off, you won't be seeing anything sexual) : )
thank you bery much!
