[VN][BxG] A+ Switch! [School Life][Romance][Drama] 5/20

[piichimi]

Updated the description

[piichimi]

also fixed some of the info, and added a random quote from the writting

[piichimi]

Tried creating a logo today, but I hate it.
I think I'll try another one. this one looks way too girly xD

[piichimi]

updated the info a bit

[Rinima]

Tried creating a logo today, but I hate it.
I think I'll try another one. this one looks way too girly xD

I think it looks nice Maybe change the colours around a bit might help it look less girly?

[piichimi]

Tried creating a logo today, but I hate it.
I think I'll try another one. this one looks way too girly xD

I think it looks nice Maybe change the colours around a bit might help it look less girly?

Ahhh, thank you ^-^

& I'll try that! ^-^
thank you for the advice.

[piichimi]

Voice Auditions for Akiko, Sayo & Lily are now open!
Comment on this post if you want to audition, and I'll send you the script : )

[Rinima]

I wouldn't mind having a go at Sayo.
She seems to the type to rock a British accent anyway lol

[piichimi]

I wouldn't mind having a go at Sayo.
She seems to the type to rock a British accent anyway lol

lol. okay! ^-^
but one thing I should mention, is that the voiceacting isn't full sentences, it's also in japanese. ^-^
if you still want to try out, here's the script. http://sta.sh/027ifdedeb3e
You don't have to say every line, just pick some lines out of there, and send it to me through soundcloud, or mediafire, or something else similar ^-^

[piichimi]

Title screen art WIP

[piichimi]

Meet Jirou


I'm not good at drawing males, so excuse the poor anatomy xD

[piichimi]

Here's a fake title screen:

Everything will remain the same for the real Title screen, except I will be drawing my own background for the cover image : )

credits:
Chalkboard background --- > http://www.backgroundlabs.com/item/chal ... ackground/
School gate background ----> Uncle Mugen

Also, listen to some of the first track of A+ Switch!'s OST here: https://soundcloud.com/mimiichi/a-switch-ost-track-1
composed by Outbreak : )

[akemicchi]

The title screen looks really nice, but I can't help but notice the katakana you're using for the logo. I'm not sure about the 'A' so it might be right, but 'plus' should be プラス and 'switch' should be スイッチ. You should probably get those fixed. Other than that, it looks great so far. :) Good luck with your game!

[171]

Personally, I think that your game looks appealing. The art is outstanding, it caught my attention. Anyway, I have two suggestions.
How long the story is? You should give some thoughts about this because quality is more important than quantity. Sometimes, I find meaningful short novels more satisfying to read than long novels.
About the sexual contents, I think that sometimes sexual acts are done in a very forced way, I mean, they do not have any significance to the storyline as if they're a bonus. You should give some meanings to them.
However, these suggestions are based on my personal thoughts, you can follow them if you want but I won't force you to do it.

Good luck!

[piichimi]

The title screen looks really nice, but I can't help but notice the katakana you're using for the logo. I'm not sure about the 'A' so it might be right, but 'plus' should be プラス and 'switch' should be スイッチ. You should probably get those fixed. Other than that, it looks great so far. Good luck with your game!

Thank you very much! <3
I did write it out with my basic knowledge of katakana,
So I have no doubt that I wrote something wrong, however, I do believe that the A part is right at least xD
So I'll remove the hyphen between プラス, and change スイチュ to スイッチ.
thank you : )