[VN][BxG] A+ Switch! [School Life][Romance][Drama] 5/20

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Re: [VN][BxG] A+ Switch! [School Life][Romance][Drama]

#61 Post by piichimi » Fri Oct 31, 2014 1:23 pm

Updated the description

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#62 Post by piichimi » Fri Oct 31, 2014 9:33 pm

also fixed some of the info, and added a random quote from the writting

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#63 Post by piichimi » Tue Nov 04, 2014 6:16 pm

Tried creating a logo today, but I hate it.
I think I'll try another one. this one looks way too girly xD
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#64 Post by piichimi » Tue Nov 04, 2014 9:45 pm

updated the info a bit

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#65 Post by Rinima » Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:26 am

piichimi wrote:Tried creating a logo today, but I hate it.
I think I'll try another one. this one looks way too girly xD
I think it looks nice :) Maybe change the colours around a bit might help it look less girly?
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#66 Post by piichimi » Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:27 am

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piichimi wrote:Tried creating a logo today, but I hate it.
I think I'll try another one. this one looks way too girly xD
I think it looks nice :) Maybe change the colours around a bit might help it look less girly?
Ahhh, thank you ^-^

& I'll try that! ^-^
thank you for the advice.

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#67 Post by piichimi » Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:56 am

Voice Auditions for Akiko, Sayo & Lily are now open!
Comment on this post if you want to audition, and I'll send you the script : )

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#68 Post by Rinima » Thu Nov 06, 2014 7:23 am

I wouldn't mind having a go at Sayo.
She seems to the type to rock a British accent anyway lol
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#69 Post by piichimi » Thu Nov 06, 2014 9:20 am

Rinima wrote:I wouldn't mind having a go at Sayo.
She seems to the type to rock a British accent anyway lol
lol. okay! ^-^
but one thing I should mention, is that the voiceacting isn't full sentences, it's also in japanese. ^-^
if you still want to try out, here's the script. http://sta.sh/027ifdedeb3e
You don't have to say every line, just pick some lines out of there, and send it to me through soundcloud, or mediafire, or something else similar ^-^

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#70 Post by piichimi » Fri Nov 07, 2014 2:33 am

Title screen art WIP
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#71 Post by piichimi » Fri Nov 07, 2014 8:16 pm

Meet Jirou
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I'm not good at drawing males, so excuse the poor anatomy xD

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Re: [VN][BxG] A+ Switch! [School Life][Romance][Drama] 11/07

#72 Post by piichimi » Sat Nov 08, 2014 12:06 am

Here's a fake title screen:
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Everything will remain the same for the real Title screen, except I will be drawing my own background for the cover image : )

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Chalkboard background --- > http://www.backgroundlabs.com/item/chal ... ackground/
School gate background ----> Uncle Mugen

Also, listen to some of the first track of A+ Switch!'s OST here: https://soundcloud.com/mimiichi/a-switch-ost-track-1
composed by Outbreak : )

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#73 Post by akemicchi » Sun Nov 09, 2014 8:56 am

The title screen looks really nice, but I can't help but notice the katakana you're using for the logo. I'm not sure about the 'A' so it might be right, but 'plus' should be プラス and 'switch' should be スイッチ. You should probably get those fixed. Other than that, it looks great so far. :) Good luck with your game!

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#74 Post by 171 » Sun Nov 09, 2014 10:47 am

Personally, I think that your game looks appealing. The art is outstanding, it caught my attention. Anyway, I have two suggestions.
How long the story is? You should give some thoughts about this because quality is more important than quantity. Sometimes, I find meaningful short novels more satisfying to read than long novels.
About the sexual contents, I think that sometimes sexual acts are done in a very forced way, I mean, they do not have any significance to the storyline as if they're a bonus. You should give some meanings to them.
However, these suggestions are based on my personal thoughts, you can follow them if you want but I won't force you to do it.

Good luck!

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#75 Post by piichimi » Sun Nov 09, 2014 10:54 am

akemicchi wrote:The title screen looks really nice, but I can't help but notice the katakana you're using for the logo. I'm not sure about the 'A' so it might be right, but 'plus' should be プラス and 'switch' should be スイッチ. You should probably get those fixed. Other than that, it looks great so far. :) Good luck with your game!
Thank you very much! <3
I did write it out with my basic knowledge of katakana,
So I have no doubt that I wrote something wrong, however, I do believe that the A part is right at least xD
So I'll remove the hyphen between プラス, and change スイチュ to スイッチ.
thank you : )

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