Win the princess - LOOKING FOR BETA TESTERS :)

[Sharane]

I added some questions (not obligatory of course, just a little inspiration for a discussion ) and I´m curious about your opinions

1) Which character will you pursue first (if any)?
2) Who do you think the mysterious man is? And who would you like him to be?
3) Is the topic interesting for you? What are you the most curious about?
4) Any questions, ideas, notes etc.

[Sharane]

I started to create this game with decision it will be without CG. Well... I can´t help myself (just still want to amaze you with my stunning art, hehehe ) so I made three sketches. Here is the one I also coloured.

And by the way, merry christmas

[lockpicklogic]

This looks interesting
Ahh, I just love it when female leads have a strong personality
Anyway.
1) Which character will you pursue first (if any)?
Well, I'm interested in fighting for my own hand first, so... me.
2) Who do you think the mysterious man is? And who would you like him to be?
I don't really know, but it'd be interesting if he was an assassin, or maybe if it was an old friend or a relative looking out for me and was planning on dropping me as soon as the incident was over.
3) Is the topic interesting for you? What are you the most curious about?
Oh yeah! I'm probably most interested in the kings reaction to my winning... will he take it honourably? Or will he be stubborn and unreasonable?
4) Any questions, ideas, notes etc.
Edit: Oops, sorry.
I wish you the best in writing and creation

[Sharane]

This looks interesting
Ahh, I just love it when female leads have a strong personality
Anyway.
1) Which character will you pursue first (if any)?
Well, I'm interested in fighting for my own hand first, so... me.
2) Who do you think the mysterious man is? And who would you like him to be?
I don't really know, but it'd be interesting if he was an assassin, or maybe if it was an old friend or a relative looking out for me and was planning on dropping me as soon as the incident was over.
3) Is the topic interesting for you? What are you the most curious about?
Oh yeah! I'm probably most interested in the kings reaction to my winning... will he take it honourably? Or will he be stubborn and unreasonable?
4) Any questions, ideas, notes etc.
Edit: Oops, sorry.
I wish you the best in writing and creation

Thank you for your comment and interesting answers Well, I´m afraid that the fact that princess could win, could deepen the king´s passion for gambling No, just joking. You will see how it ends

[Sharane]

I finnished the script and coding for the first task, you can see the samples below (Here again, for these samples, I named MC like my nick)

[Sharane]

The sprites are 100 % done. I used some of the sprites which I gave to the Creative commons earlier (maybe some of you know); some of them are completely new and were made just for this game.

Also second task is written and the coding and proofreading is going very well so I hope that the half of the game will be done soon.

[Sharane]

CG for Marcus is done and I made some coding and writting as well.

I feel (and also hope) that I´m in the middle of my work, hurray I guess, the ending will be more difficult and it will take me more time then the rest of the game but still, it´s nice to see the light at the end of a tunnel.

[Mikaren]

What with that white thingie on the sprite??(not that i really care though)
love the idea by the way!
i'l keep an eye on this

EDIT:
This is not really important but did you make the game with the novelty?
if yes then i think you should move to renpy because sometimes novelty make an error
like the file can't be opened even if the file the game want there
then also novelty gui can't be edited except for the main menu and textboxes also quick button
novelty also has many error because it still demo
but if you still want to stay in novelty then good luck

1) Which character will you pursue first (if any)?
....no comment....
2) Who do you think the mysterious man is? And who would you like him to be?
The Mc -3-
3) Is the topic interesting for you? What are you the most curious about?
It's quite interesting i say and the most curious thing i want to know is....
is there more boys than those two(or three)guys?
4) Any questions, ideas, notes etc.
none...(because i can't think of anything right now)

[Heiden]

This looks like a really cute story!

1) Which character will you pursue first (if any)?
I'm interested in the Mysterious Man, he seems very... mysterious!
I also really like Commoner x Royalty romances so I'm also interested to see just what Marcus is like.

2) Who do you think the mysterious man is? And who would you like him to be?
Initially I thought it was the MC in her male disguise, but in one of your screenshots the MC seems to be in the same room as the Mysterious Man, so that's probably not right. (Is it the MC from the future sent back in time to change her fate?? Haha, ignore me XD)

Maybe he's her long lost brother, so that he can inherit the throne and she doesn't have to.

3) Is the topic interesting for you? What are you the most curious about?
Certainly! I'm curious to see what sort of trials the MC will have to best in order to win her own hand.

4) Any questions, ideas, notes etc.
How long do you plan the VN to be? Short, long? Just curious.

[Sharane]

What with that white thingie on the sprite??(not that i really care though)
love the idea by the way!
i'l keep an eye on this

EDIT:
This is not really important but did you make the game with the novelty?
if yes then i think you should move to renpy because sometimes novelty make an error
like the file can't be opened even if the file the game want there
then also novelty gui can't be edited except for the main menu and textboxes also quick button
novelty also has many error because it still demo
but if you still want to stay in novelty then good luck

1) Which character will you pursue first (if any)?
....no comment....
2) Who do you think the mysterious man is? And who would you like him to be?
The Mc -3-
3) Is the topic interesting for you? What are you the most curious about?
It's quite interesting i say and the most curious thing i want to know is....
is there more boys than those two(or three)guys?
4) Any questions, ideas, notes etc.
none...(because i can't think of anything right now)

Oh, this... he´s luminescent
Yes, I make it in Novelty and I know it has got some bugs but I like the WYSIWYG system. Maybe if I create my second game, I will use Renpy.
Concerning the number of boys, I must disappoint you. There are only boys which you can see in description.
Thank you for your remarks

This looks like a really cute story!

1) Which character will you pursue first (if any)?
I'm interested in the Mysterious Man, he seems very... mysterious!
I also really like Commoner x Royalty romances so I'm also interested to see just what Marcus is like.

2) Who do you think the mysterious man is? And who would you like him to be?
Initially I thought it was the MC in her male disguise, but in one of your screenshots the MC seems to be in the same room as the Mysterious Man, so that's probably not right. (Is it the MC from the future sent back in time to change her fate?? Haha, ignore me XD)

Maybe he's her long lost brother, so that he can inherit the throne and she doesn't have to.

3) Is the topic interesting for you? What are you the most curious about?
Certainly! I'm curious to see what sort of trials the MC will have to best in order to win her own hand.

4) Any questions, ideas, notes etc.
How long do you plan the VN to be? Short, long? Just curious.

Thank you for your comment
I like the idea with MC sent from her future. It reminds me the movie "Back to the future"
Well, it will not be so long as it´s my first VN. I think it will take approximately 30 - 45 minutes but I don´t dare to say it definitely. As the game will be finnished, I promise to check the play time

[Mikaren]

is there any new update sharane?

[Sharane]

is there any new update sharane?

Yes, there is Currently, I´m writting third task and also with great help of ColaCat, we made a progress in a proofreading
There is another print screen of the game:

[ColaCat]

Yes! I can second that! The script is coming along really well. ^_^

[Sharane]

I´m happy to announce that MC is ready and full of energy for the third task
After a period of no access to PC, I finaly made some writting and scripting so don´t be afraid, I didn´t forget about this project. Thank you for understanding

[Sharane]

I hope you enjoy the summer and I´m adding some screenshots from the game