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Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 7:09 am
by potouto
under major revamp, to be back during April-May 2016

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:29 am
by CSV
Oh, I really like your character designs. And the logo. :D The story seems a bit vague, but I guess that might have been your intention. Still, I look forward to seeing more about this project.

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:58 am
by Hazel-Bun
Beautiful!!! I can't wait to see more :D

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:24 pm
by Laniessa
Oh, it's so cute *a* Love the art, good luck with the project!

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:34 pm
by Mono
*steals Ashton away* *0*

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:42 pm
by potouto
@CSV: Thank you! I will try to update a better synopsis soon. I'm sorry for the inconvinient.
@Hazel-Bun & @Laniessa: uguu thanks to you both, we have a great artist
@Mono: "..."
Image

Update: Some concept art to show, the script is advancing to chapter 2 with the nonstop rain even in Winter. A demo coming soon!

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:45 pm
by akemicchi
I agree with the others, the art is so pretty. o|-< Good luck with everything! :D Can't wait to play the demo! ^^

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 5:31 am
by euphorics
ROLLS INTO THE SUN I'M
SO
EXCITED FOR THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! ! ! ! ! !!!!!!!

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 6:16 am
by potouto
@akemichi: SENPAI NOTICED M...Y PROJECT THANKS YOU haha I hope it will live up everyone's expectation!
@euphoriabutts: YOU'RE HERE OTL The character design are done for most characters except Charlie, succuren wants to color the whole stuffs so I have to take down the profile to redo it later GOMEN
I need to include the features and update the character profiles along with improved storyline next time. JUST BECAUSE.

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 1:21 pm
by euphorics
why am i a butt omg-
but is ok hhHHH I LOOK FORWARD TO THE FULLY COLORED CHARACTER DESIGNS EEEE, SO EXCITE
i believe in succuren's amazing skills, heheh u v u
THE STORYLINE ALSO SOUNDS GREAT OMG, IDK WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT. rain is such a nice theme, and all the characters sound so cute * v * (my favorite is that little thingy in the 'whoops' screenshot going "wanna fight" uheuhuehue)
p.s. Ashton already has hair surpassing the level of every man's dream \o/

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2014 12:39 pm
by potouto
@euphomos:
we can always have alternative if you don't like butts
YOU BETTER she's working for commissions for the 3ds so I won't rush with anything wee
LIAR YOU DO KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT
I didn't realise rain actually have something to do with the plot until I'm half way through the second chapter. Thank you thank you. ●▽●
(I rejected otl but it's still too beautiful to not show)
Of course he did, he is *flips hair* Ashton after all

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 8:05 am
by AsHLeX
That art!!! *starry eyed* I love it so much <3
Good luck with everything!!

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 9:11 am
by noeinan
Looks cute! I am a fan of both the fabulousness of that unicorn shirt and of combat butlers. (Hayate~!)

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:35 am
by potouto
@AsHLeX: Thank you very much!
@daikiraikimi: Ah yes it seemed that the two are most loved characters, especially Ashton.

Mini-update #1: Dec 2nd, 2014
As you can see, the thread has been improved greatly and I'm well-satisfied.
Chapter 2 is done, but the second draft is still in progress. Be patient friends!
Charlie is still the most problematic character to design imo
subconsciously forget about Ellie

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2014 5:03 pm
by astrokeofmadness
Is it just me or is Neils Katana totally slipping out of its straps XD Also us canadians dont stumble on ahs umms and ehs! Your umm a big fat liar! Please change this eh!

Anyways... enough with the horrible Canadian humor, I vote for look 3 or 4 for Charlie. No Ascot!