Half-Dead in Despair [BxG, BxB, BxNB] [Mystery]

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Half-Dead in Despair [BxG, BxB, BxNB] [Mystery]

#1 Post by ibukichan » Fri Dec 05, 2014 4:41 pm

Hey, everyone! Finally decided to post about the project I'm working on right now!

Half-Dead In Despair

Features:
-Lots of menus
-About 10 obtainable endings
-About 200K words (when I finish)
-5 romanceable characters; male, female, and non-binary


Progress:
Planning (done by me): 5%
Writing (done by me): 0%
Art: 0%
Programming (done by me): 0%


Plot
You play as the protagonist, James. The game starts with him waking up in an unfamiliar room. It is quickly discovered that he, as well as 9 others, have been kidnapped. The game is centered around their exploration of the amusement park they are trapped in, as well as their escape attempts, and their investigation of the people who kidnapped them.

Characters:

James

James is the protagonist of the story. He's 17, very passionate about music, and is often found playing his guitar, writing songs. He's easily angered, but cools off quickly, and doesn't hold grudges. He doesn't like being told what to do, but can recognize a good idea, and will generally go along with it. He's a rebel, and isn't above breaking the law, mostly to get noticed by his rich parents.

April

April is only 14, the youngest of the people who were kidnapped. She likes drawing, and is really talented, although she doesn't think she is. She's a bit shy, but once she opens up, she is easily excited and acts goofy. She knows when to be serious, though, but always tries her best to lighten the mood. She loves socializing and talking to people, and will always choose working together over working alone.

Terry

Terry is 15, and is very antisocial. They're reserved, and don't fancy talking to people, but have a great sense of humor, and will defend things they're passionate about, especially anything to do with sexual, romantic, and gender identity. They don't get angry easily, but have no problem resorting to insults if necessary. If someone uses a homophobic slur, that person is forever dead to them.

P

P is a mystery wrapped in an enigma. They're very antisocial, and it takes a lot to get them to open up. No one really knows a lot about them, and it's extremely difficult to get close to them. They're very insecure and paranoid, but come off as confident, and have a honed skillset that makes people wonder about their past.

Jen

Jen is 18, and attended military school for 7 years. She's very tough due to that, and could beat anyone in a fight. Despite all this, she's really insecure, and takes everything that people say about her to heart. She's good at concealing her weakness, but even she has a limit, and gets very emotional when she hits it.

Carlee

Carlee is 17, and generally very sweet and quiet. She doesn't like to be loud, but enjoys socializing with people she's close to. She never gets angry, but when someone insults one of her close friends, she'll speak up and defend them. She is often found in small out-of-the-way parks, trying to find a quiet place to read, or just taking some time away from people. If she doesn't want to be found, she won't be.

Sam

Sam is 15, and is a total snob. He doesn't believe talking to people he considers 'below him' is a good way to spend his time. He's a published author, which is where he gets his sense of worth, but his personality causes problems in the group. For him, first impressions are everything, so if he decides someone is below him, he won't be convinced otherwise.

Robert

Robert is 18, and the most nonchalant guy ever, almost to the point of indifference. His main focus is having a good time, kicking back and having fun. He is often accused of not caring, which isn't true at all. He is always terrified, and covers it up by pretending not to care. As long as he's just lying around, doing nothing to trigger his terror, he can forget about that constant fear.

Mathew

Mathew is 16, and he is very shy. His social skills are far from refined, and although he longs for social interaction, he's constantly worried that he'll say something wrong and mess everything up. Because of this, he's a total pushover, and will do pretty much anything that people ask him too. He once had to transfer schools because everyone was taking advantage of him, and it sent him into a deep depression.

Caleb

Caleb is 19, the oldest one of them. He gets angry really easily, is very violent, and is quick to jump to conclusions. He considers himself a great fighter, someone really tough, and can't handle being beaten. However, he is very protective of April, who he views as a little sister, and will mess up anyone who messes with her.


Do you have any feedback for me? Maybe your thoughts on the characters, or on the plot? Please let me know, I'd love to hear what you think!!
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Re: Half-Dead in Despair [GxB, BxB, GxG] [Mystery]

#2 Post by -Ren- » Fri Dec 05, 2014 8:38 pm

I noticed the GxG tag, but the MC is male? How does that work exactly? o.o
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Re: Half-Dead in Despair [GxB, BxB, GxG] [Mystery]

#3 Post by ibukichan » Fri Dec 05, 2014 8:41 pm

-Ren- wrote:I noticed the GxG tag, but the MC is male? How does that work exactly? o.o
I tagged it GxG because two of the female side characters have a relationship :) Sorry for the confusion!

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Re: Half-Dead in Despair [GxB, BxB, GxG] [Mystery]

#4 Post by papillon » Wed Dec 10, 2014 11:28 am

You might want to change that, or you'll keep getting disappointed or confused players either wandering into your thread thinking that it's something it isn't, or ignoring it because they think it's something it isn't. :)

Tagging convention in romance tags generally says that the first letter is what the PLAYER is and the second is what they can choose from, so your current tag list says "the player can be female and date males, the player can be male and date males, and the player can be female and date females" which doesn't seem to be what you meant.

Side character relationships are cool for the world but they're not generally a genre tag that anyone would be searching for. If it's important to your story for people to know up front that there are gay people in your world, maybe tag it [LGBT-friendly] or something?

If I'm reading your setup right, the most useful tag for sorting would be [BxG/B/?]

Other than that you'll probably get more feedback when you have pictures to show. :) Good luck!

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Re: Half-Dead in Despair [GxB, BxB, GxG] [Mystery]

#5 Post by ibukichan » Wed Dec 10, 2014 11:50 am

papillon wrote:You might want to change that, or you'll keep getting disappointed or confused players either wandering into your thread thinking that it's something it isn't, or ignoring it because they think it's something it isn't. :)

Tagging convention in romance tags generally says that the first letter is what the PLAYER is and the second is what they can choose from, so your current tag list says "the player can be female and date males, the player can be male and date males, and the player can be female and date females" which doesn't seem to be what you meant.

Side character relationships are cool for the world but they're not generally a genre tag that anyone would be searching for. If it's important to your story for people to know up front that there are gay people in your world, maybe tag it [LGBT-friendly] or something?

If I'm reading your setup right, the most useful tag for sorting would be [BxG/B/?]

Other than that you'll probably get more feedback when you have pictures to show. :) Good luck!
Ah, I was unaware of those conventions. Thank you for letting me know, I'll change that. :)

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Re: Half-Dead in Despair [BxG, BxB] [Mystery]

#6 Post by Ferdokki » Tue Dec 23, 2014 4:25 am

Question: How does the gameplay work?
Is it typical VN, or will you have to explore like an RPG type thing?
Can you die? O_O

Thanks in advance! =)

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Re: Half-Dead in Despair [BxG, BxB] [Mystery]

#7 Post by ibukichan » Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:41 am

Ferdokki wrote:Question: How does the gameplay work?
Is it typical VN, or will you have to explore like an RPG type thing?
Can you die? O_O

Thanks in advance! =)
It is like a typical VN, but you can influence where you go and what you find. And yes, it is possible to die, although it isn't easy. Certain combinations of choices can cause your death.

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Re: Half-Dead in Despair [BxG, BxB] [Mystery]

#8 Post by Ferdokki » Mon Dec 29, 2014 3:37 am

Ooooh, a game where it's NOT EASY to die! I like that! *_______*
I hate these kinds of games where it's easy to die, and there's no save button, or the last checkpoint was pixel-miles away. xP Those games frustrate me.

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Re: Half-Dead in Despair [BxG, BxB, BxNB] [Mystery]

#9 Post by ibukichan » Fri Feb 27, 2015 1:03 pm

Update 02-28-2015: My artist quit, so work on the art front has been delayed until either I find a new artist, or get back into drawing myself. Both will take quite awhile. I've made significant progress on the planning of the game, and decent progress on the writing.

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