Gentle Rains [GxB]

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Sasielle
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Gentle Rains [GxB]

#1 Post by Sasielle » Sun Feb 01, 2015 1:47 pm

Plot:
Viola, a girl from the small town of Seabrook, moves to the city to escape the constant rain of her old town and to make something of her life. There, she meets two boys: Orion, a flirt who tries to woo her as soon as their eyes meet, and Icarus, a helpful boy who enjoys teasing others. However, even though Viola wanted to get away from the rain she detested so much, her new city is also a rainy place.

Characters:

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Viola (19)
The protagonist, fresh out of high school and wanting to make something of her life. Viola loves flowers and coffee with a passion, hates rain, and gets flustered easily. She's usually somewhat hesitant in making decisions and often regrets her choices.

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Orion (20)
A sophomore in college, Orion is currently focused on track. He loves running around the city, regardless of the rain, and knows tons of great date spots. He also likes classical music, but seems somewhat embarrassed of it...


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Icarus (18)
Still in high school, Icarus seems to know what he wants to do with his life and enjoys helping others out. He's a little bit shy from time to time, but is somewhat blunt in his mannerisms. Viola wonders if he ever gets stressed out from acting out his selfless personality.
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Progress:
Story: 100%
Script: ~5%
Sprites: 100%
BGs: 15%
CGs: 25%

Endings:
- 4 main endings
- 2 bad endings (possibly more later)

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I've been thinking about this concept for a while, and have been sketching out the art and plot over the past few weeks... I'd like to get feedback on whether the idea/characters are too cliche or anything, and any thoughts or comments y'all have to share.

I might post a beta after I get more script in.

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Thanks for checking this out!

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Re: Gentle Rains [GxB]

#2 Post by Universalfiction » Sun Feb 22, 2015 12:17 pm

If Icarus is the "hide personality and come out to the main character only" type, then it might be cliche, but it's not too cliche... You know? I'm surprise you didn't include the cold personality guy. That would be cliche.

Also what's the plot? Is it to find love at the new city? What's supposed to happen? Or is that a secret hah

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