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A history about Mari Futsuoka that finally confess to her Sempai, Aki Moteruki, ends up turning him into a Llama.
This is a free short VN with four possible endings that I'm working on. I'm writing the script but the main plot already outlined.
I plan on posting here my progress and a demo version in March. Tomorrow I will post more visual elements.
Op song: https://www.jamendo.com/en/track/112642 ... rt-version
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I clicked on your topic moderately interested, thinking it might be a typical romantic comedy. But then I saw the llama. That's awesome!
That's a great character description for a llama. It's funny and sad and kind of romantic--in just one sentence.He still likes Mari but he misses his human hands.
Best of luck with the project!
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Change your title to "Sempai finally noticed me but I somehow turned him into a Llama!", Comedy and Romance is already implied and that's a freaking hilarious title.
The attachment is also perfect 3-beat funny. Sempai (Llama version) cracked me the heck up.
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I am kinda intrigue at how Mari would change Aki into a llama.
This part just cracked me up.haha. Good luck with this project I'll be waiting eagerly for the demo.Aki-sempai (Llama version) - He still likes Mari but he misses his human hands.
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I'm curious how the sempai becomes a llama, lol, so I must check it out.
I tried to to use the whole title in the topic but unfortunately it doesn't fit ;_;Rosstin2 wrote: Change your title to "Sempai finally noticed me but I somehow turned him into a Llama!", Comedy and Romance is already implied and that's a freaking hilarious title.
I totally forgot about that VN. I will take a look, thank you.gekiganwing wrote:The premise is kinda similar to PacaPlus, in which the main character's girlfriend is transformed into an alpaca. I recommend making sure that your story has enough distinct traits.
Oops, fixed. Thank you.CrimsonMoon wrote:Seems interesting. Just wanna point out about Aki-senpai's description. He's someone that likes Aki secretly? It's supposed to be Mari. ^^;
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