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Short Story [Collection]

#1 Post by Broyi » Mon Mar 16, 2015 10:57 pm

Short Story


"Short Stories" are collections of exactly that, short stories, compacted into a kinetic visual novel for you to enjoy. They will be spread across different themes, genres, characters and more. All updates will be posted here in the main topic.

Dracula's Guest by Bram Stocker UPDATE: 03/16/15

About: A British explorer goes to Germany and finds out something that will change his life. The Walpurgis' Night approaches and someone is watching our explorer from the shadows...

Screenshots: Coming soon!

Downloads: Windows| Linux| Mac

Details: Version 1.0 (INIT). I would like if someone would like to proofread the VN! Please leave feedback!

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Questions:

1. Do you like the idea?

2. What story would you be interested in?

3. Do you like the message box GUI? Does the CTC harms the experience?

3. Please put all the feedback you can here! Because you treat these Stories like books, please spoiler the text that you may believe "harmful" for the enjoyment of others.

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Re: Short Story [Collection]

#2 Post by Dylan_Bain » Tue Mar 17, 2015 5:07 am

Broyi wrote: Questions:

1. Do you like the idea?

2. What story would you be interested in?

3. Do you like the message box GUI? Does the CTC harms the experience?

3. Please put all the feedback you can here! Because you treat these Stories like books, please spoiler the text that you may believe "harmful" for the enjoyment of others.
1 - Yes.

2 - Maybe alternate versions of classics like Red Riding Hood and Hansel and Gretel.

3 - Don't mind it.

4 - I will try not to spoil anything !
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Re: Short Story [Collection]

#3 Post by Broyi » Tue Mar 17, 2015 7:40 am

Thanks. Hope you try the first Story!

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#4 Post by fleet » Tue Mar 17, 2015 7:26 pm

1. I like the idea, and read the story.
2. Hemingway wrote a lot of short stories, I suspect a lot of them are unfamiliar to VN readers.
3. I had no problem with the GUI. I don't know what you mean by CTC.

I did not like the sprites you used, but that's just me.
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