Fujiwara BitterSweet [GxB][School/Slice of life][16+]

[Karamelow]

Haha thanks! But don't worry, in fact I'm pretty glad that someone took the trouble to make a video, even if his comments were not necessarily nice. That's why I wanted to see the video, to see what was reproached (besides the fact that it was in highschool) and take notice. There was certainly good part to take in his criticism x)

[Deji]

Hey! Just stopping by to say love he character art and the logo and the profiles graphic design <3 <3
Keep up the good work!

[Karamelow]

Aw thank you Deji ~

[ColaCat]

^_^ I think, in regards to the soft sex scenes, it should be fine. Unless it's pure explicit stuff, then I'm sure people won't mind. Maybe put in a mature filter?

[Karamelow]

Yes, I think I will try that ^^
Oh by the way, I disowned the previous flashy boy's hair and did it a new one xD I think it suits him better and is more convenient to draw (and also, I think it corresponds better to his story)

[Karamelow]

Kenji profile here! ~



And in addition, the final sketch of the last main character ^^

[ColaCat]

Oh, I actually think I prefer this new hair! ^_^ And that last main character is intriguing...

[Karamelow]

Yes, I think it's better like that ^^ And for the last main character, I hope people will like it in the final vn

[Gabylc]

I really love Kenji! He's so cute with his freckles <3 (And I agree with its catch phrase, especially when I look at Miura )

The art of your sprite is really impressive, both unique and totally fitting the genre. I'll give a shot to the demo!

(PS: Do you plan to do a French version or will it be just English? Just wondering, I know it's a pain to translate ^^')

[neuropsy]

Your art is absolutely lovely. It's very bright, clear, and inviting.

I've been following this thread for a while now, and when I saw Kenji, I had to pop in and say that he seems so precious, and I'm planning to play his route first. His quote is something I wholeheartedly agree with.

Hehe, I played FujiFes, so it's exciting to see these familiar faces in a bigger game!

Out of curiosity, who were your inspirations for the characters, if you had any?

[Karamelow]

Thank you both for your kind comment!

@Gabylc: Ahah! I'm glad you like him ^^ (Indeed, sometimes Miura is certainly more frightening than some spirits lol)
And yes, I plan to do a French version too, even if it's complicated to do translations from one language to another. I hope that when the time comes, I might ask the help of a free proofreader or not too expensive for the English version x)

@neuropsy : Thank you! Seems that Kenji has a small success
I hope you will love his route. I didn't thought in detail, for now I focus more on Ikki, Yuta and Toshio's routes (I don't know why, I feel that these are my three favorite characters). And for inspiration um, let me see. I don't have precise characters which I have inspired, it's a mix of what I would see in a otome games and also a little of what I read sometimes in shojo manga ^^

By the way, I'm just too impatient to finish writing all the routes, but it take me time. I can't wait! xD

[Didules]

The more the developmet goes forward, the more interesting this game gets!
I really love all the colorful designs, your definitely mastered the art-part!
I can't wait to see more, though I'm a bit worried about all the "???" here:

for the whole vn

Main Sprites : 5/6
Sub Sprites : 0/???
CGs: 4/???
BGs: 0/???
Musics : 0/???

Do you still not know how many CG/Sub sprites/BG there might be? (Question is: can we expect more beautiful art? But isn't it too much?)
Good luck to you, MelowBee, I'll be supporting you!!!

[Karamelow]

Thanks!
Yes, indeed I still don't know how many graphics there will be in the whole vn xD This is because I have not finished writing all routes (the truth is that I have actually wrote only 3% of the whole story for now...) and I don't know yet what backgrounds/CGs/other graphics I will do (>___<) I have few in mind but it's not yet specified.
And thank you for supporting!!

[Karamelow]

Aaaaand say welcome to Haru, the last main character! Yaaaaay!



Also, just a rough sketch of the main menu (I hope I will can manage what I want to do...)

[JinTonic]

The project looks really interesting. I already have my first target to chase - Toshio!) He looks so handsome and brutal)
The only thing that bothers me is that some guys are "15-16". I feel a bit embarrassed to romance so young guys))