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Re: FujiwaraHigh [GxB][School/Slice of life]

#16 Post by ColaCat » Wed May 20, 2015 9:45 am

*puts on art critic glasses* XD Well...

The wall could maybe look a little grainier? At the moment it looks a bit smooth. The part facing you (not with a light on it), with the little dark bits on it, looks really good. Maybe do that for the entire stretch?
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#17 Post by Karamelow » Thu May 21, 2015 10:28 am

Thank you for your comment! I'll try to fix it ^^
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#18 Post by Laluune » Sat May 23, 2015 1:44 am

I love your art style, it's so unique! I'm excited for Flashy Boy haha, I think his hairstyle looks like he has a headband in his hair (like this http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2526/4059 ... 88d32e.jpg) which would fit his personality I think, he looks playful, just a suggestion. Which colour hair do you think you'll go with?

If you are after textures, I would just google brick textures or concrete textures and overlay it, which it looks like you have, chuck in some different coloured bricks and it'll push in some more "realism". Something about the grey wall feels weird... I think it's the lack of shadow from the brick wall, it currently doesn't feel like it's further back in the scene. But you haven't gotten to the rest of the buildings or ground, so I can't gauge whether you've even gotten to your lighting step :)

Oh and don't be afraid to blur things, if it's further away it wouldn't be as crisp :)

Totally keeping an eye on this <3

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#19 Post by Karamelow » Sat May 23, 2015 4:07 pm

@Laluune: Thanks for your kind comment and your tips! (^ o^)/

And also... I knoooooow it's not too good to come forward but I could not help but show you... It's a new character who will have his own route later ;)
And now I stop to spoil you! x)
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#20 Post by ColaCat » Sun May 24, 2015 7:38 am

^o^ Spoil us more, please! I'm loving the character designs you've come up with!
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#21 Post by Karamelow » Sun May 24, 2015 3:59 pm

Well...If it doesn't bother anyone that I spoil a bit, maybe I'll continue. But until then, just some news with a sketch of the remake of the haunted class' CG ^^
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#22 Post by Karamelow » Fri Jun 12, 2015 4:36 pm

Hey people!
There is no really news for now. I still work on new graphics (I tried to put myself in 3D, uh ...) and on the routes of the different characters for after the festival. Oh and if you want to see the final sprite of old Flashy boy Tadaaaah... ~
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And see the difference with the original sketch x)
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Re: FujiwaraHigh [GxB][School/Slice of life]

#23 Post by ColaCat » Sat Jun 13, 2015 7:54 am

Woah! Looks great! I really like all the accessories, the glasses are a great addition! ^_^ Also, CG sketch looking good too!
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#24 Post by Elmvine » Sat Jun 13, 2015 8:43 am

Oh this is so cute. I can tell I'm going to love it.

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#25 Post by Erikka » Sat Jun 13, 2015 8:54 am

I love the new character!!! He's so good-looking! What is his name?)

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#26 Post by Karamelow » Sat Jun 13, 2015 2:09 pm

Thank you all! ^^

@ColaCat : Thanks! I hesitated to add the pink glasses but finally I prefer him like that! xD For the CG, I decided to turn that more "kawaii" with a chibi, though.

@Elmvine and Erikka: I hope you will like his route! In the short FujiFest, his nickname is Flashy boy since the heroine don't knows his name. But when he will have his route later, his real name will be Ryu UTADA. He's a bit noisy and blunt but he's a good boy ^^ His two best friends are Ikki (Delinquent-kun) and Miura even if those three have no common points.
Ah yes by the way Miura is this boy. I already put his sketch before but I don't remember if I said what was his name x)
There is Toshio MIURA
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#27 Post by jascarly123zo » Sat Jun 13, 2015 11:55 pm

Ahh the art looks great for this! I love how all the tsun characters are almost always Tauruses LOL Downloading the older version to play right now, and looking forward to future updates from this! <3

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#28 Post by ColaCat » Sun Jun 14, 2015 8:59 am

^_^ Well I'm glad you put them on! He really does look "Flashy". XD
Oooh, o.o chibi! Can't wait to see more.
Now I can't decide which character I like best...
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#29 Post by Karamelow » Sun Jun 14, 2015 1:44 pm

@jascarly123zo: Well thank you! Hope you will enjoy the complete routes ;)

@ColaCat: You can't decide? Hehe... and there 2 more character routes! In total they will be 6 ^^
By the way, here the chibi for the haunted classroom!

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#30 Post by ColaCat » Sun Jun 14, 2015 2:05 pm

>o< *Tries to make a decision before there are even more chars to choose from*

^_^ That chibi is really good!
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