Until Eleven - [GXB] [Mystery] [Thriller] [Romance] DEMO!!

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Until Eleven - [GXB] [Mystery] [Thriller] [Romance] DEMO!!

#1 Post by SeventhStranger » Tue Jun 30, 2015 4:47 pm

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Genre: Mystery, Thriller, Romance

Demo is OUT!
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http://seventhstranger.itch.io/until-eleven


Synopsis:
Kat's life is not turning out the way she had planned. She's jobless, broke, and worst of all - her boyfriend of 2 years just dumped her unceremoniously

Then something amazing happens. Kat discovers she has an alternate life on the other side of her mirror, a life that is everything she has always wanted. So when her alternate self offers to switch places for the day, Kat jumps at the chance.

Only life on the other side is not what it seemed. Unfortunately, getting back home is not as easy as she thought.

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Progress:
Writing: 70%
Programming: 60%
Sprites: 100%
BG: 80%
GUI: 100%
Music: 70%

Credits:
Sprite Art: http://rgbvscb.deviantart.com/
Writing/Programming/BGs/Gui: Me (seventhstranger)
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QUESTIONS:

If you played the demo, I need your feedback! This is my first game, so I'm learning as I go. Your help is much appreciated.

Some questions to get you started:

1. What did you like about the demo?
2. What do you think can be improved?
3. Did you find any bugs or typos?
4. How do you feel about the story so far?
5. Any suggestions or wishes for the full game?
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Re: Until Eleven - [GXB] [Mystery] [Thriller]

#2 Post by CSV » Tue Jun 30, 2015 4:53 pm

Such interesting plot and I love the art! I'm looking forward to future updates. =)
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#3 Post by SeventhStranger » Wed Jul 01, 2015 12:29 am

CSV wrote:Such interesting plot and I love the art! I'm looking forward to future updates. =)
Thanks! My goal is to finish the beta draft by August 1st. It will be fully playable, but I am sure I will want to make changes based upon player's input. :)

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Re: Until Eleven - [GXB] [Mystery] [Thriller] [Romance]

#4 Post by AsHLeX » Wed Jul 01, 2015 12:48 am

Good luck! This look interesting and love the art!! I'll be keeping my eye out for this one!
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#5 Post by Erikka » Wed Jul 01, 2015 5:06 pm

The story sounds exciting and your art looks amazing. Wish you luck with this project)

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#6 Post by SeventhStranger » Wed Jul 01, 2015 5:26 pm

Erikka wrote:The story sounds exciting and your art looks amazing. Wish you luck with this project)
Thanks! The sprite art is by a very talented artist that goes by rgbvscb on this forum. :)

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#7 Post by CrimsonMoon » Wed Jul 01, 2015 10:55 pm

I'm intrigued by the plot alone. The arts also look professional, and I fancy the logo. Good luck with the project, will be looking out for this once it's out. :D
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Re: Until Eleven - [GXB] [Mystery] [Thriller] [Romance]

#8 Post by Ernestalice15 » Wed Jul 01, 2015 11:03 pm

Looks interesting. Keep up the good work and I'll wait for more updates. By the way, I think the synopsis is too opened. You don't have to tell us how Kat wants to go back, or Katie has some plans. But overall, it's still interesting :)
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Re: Until Eleven - [GXB] [Mystery] [Thriller] [Romance]

#9 Post by SeventhStranger » Wed Jul 01, 2015 11:16 pm

Ernestalice15 wrote:Looks interesting. Keep up the good work and I'll wait for more updates. By the way, I think the synopsis is too opened. You don't have to tell us how Kat wants to go back, or Katie has some plans. But overall, it's still interesting :)

I did wonder how much to reveal... I didn't want to give away too much but I also wanted to tease a bit.
I can edit the description a bit to be a little less spoilery :)

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#10 Post by Erikka » Thu Jul 02, 2015 2:44 am

I was intrigued when I read in the description that Kat couldn't go back in her world)

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#11 Post by Lesleigh63 » Sun Jul 05, 2015 12:24 am

The artwork caught my eye and then I read the synopsis - sounds very interesting. Good luck with it.
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#12 Post by SeventhStranger » Sun Jul 05, 2015 11:51 am

Thanks everyone! I am progressing at a good pace, but I think after the game jam, there will still be tons of room for improvement. So hopefully you guys will be willing to playtest it when it's done :)

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#13 Post by AntiquedFae » Thu Jul 09, 2015 2:23 am

This looks and sounds fantastic on so many levels. I'm looking forward to it and wish you the best in production!
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#14 Post by Ringmaster » Thu Jul 09, 2015 10:33 am

The plot sounds super interesting, and the art looks wonderful! I'm really looking forward to it!

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#15 Post by SeventhStranger » Fri Jul 24, 2015 12:56 am

Added some GUI screen shots - i'm getting there!

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