Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance] [Steam/Itch.io] [Released]

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Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance] [Steam/Itch.io] [Released]

#1 Post by Zetsubou » Tue Oct 13, 2015 3:11 pm

For sale now on Steam. (RRP: $15 USD)
Also available on Itch.io.

Word count: 128k
CG count: 66 (+variations)
BG count: 71 (+daytime variations)
Sprites: 30
Endings: 6 (3 are premature)


About

Sickness is a mixture of (violent) crime, comedy, and romance.
It tells the story of Suoh, a recently-orphaned youth who has quit school to support his sister.

Sickness revolves around Suoh's rapid descent into a life of crime, his attempts to break free from his new life, and potentially romance found along the way.

There is a more lengthy, detailed description on Steam.



Characters

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Suoh Tesla
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Protagonist of Sickness.

Suoh is a recently-orphaned youth with a violent path.
His only family, his twin sister, means everything to him, and in the beginning, everything he does is for her sake.
However, as Sickness progresses, Suoh becomes more violent and amoral. He still uses his sister's well-being to justify his actions, but the thrill of his criminal dealings and the money he makes becomes a bigger factor.

Sara Tesla
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Suoh's twin sister.

Sara is a high school student who harbors complex feelings.
To her brother, Sara is an angelic sister with a loving nature and endless affection; an image she cultivates and builds on daily.
To everyone else, however, Sara is narcissistic and thoroughly two-faced.
Family aside, Sara doesn't care for other people in the slightest, and as a result of her desperately trying to hide this fact, her family mistakenly believe Sara to be bipolar.

Karasu
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Up and coming crimelord of Richmond.

Karasu builds his wealth through a variety of "services", including, but not limited to, gambling, corporate espionage, and organ trafficking.
Above all, however, Karasu is most famous for providing "waste disposal" for neighboring towns, whether they request his services or not.
His ultimate goal is to build an empire he can share with his beloved "children"; interesting individuals he has taken under his wing and granted a new lease on life.
Though many view him as a sadistic narcissist who will stop at nothing to obtain what he wants, Karasu is ultimately a simple businessman who displays affection only for a chosen few.

Sai
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Professional killer working for Karasu.

Sai is Karasu's most trusted and capable employee, responsible for overseeing his most lucrative business ventures, despite always working in the shadows.
Unrivaled in what he does, Sai is a ruthless killer who feels no remorse; those who get on his bad side seldom live long enough to realize it.
The only things more important to Sai than his work are his daughter's well-being and happiness.

Misa
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Daughter of Sai, and also a professional killer working for Karasu.

Misa is a teenage girl who wishes for a life without bloodshed.
As the daughter of a professional killer (and protective father), Misa has trained from a young age in order to protect herself from the dangers of the world.
However, as her father's work inevitably absorbed her life, Misa adapted her skillset to match those of a killer, using her youth and small figure to become the youngest and most discreet killer among her peers.
Outside of work, Misa is still just a young girl. She's very friendly, once she warms up to someone, and is protective of those close to her.




Credits

Full credits are in-game. Some contributors are:

Zetsubou: Programming, writing, inception, etc.
Unwonted Studios: Production
Ezri: Sprites - http://www.ezriart.com/
Monika M.: Sprites - http://psyalera.deviantart.com/
7aho: Backgrounds - http://7aho.deviantart.com/
Richard/Rachel Marks: Backgrounds - http://falynevarger.deviantart.com/
Sendo: Backgrounds - http://sendraw.deviantart.com
Jake Bowkett: Backgrounds - http://www.jakebowkett.com/
Flora: CGs
Damlight: Object sprites
Kingv: GUI Artwork - http://kingv.deviantart.com/
Last edited by Zetsubou on Fri Jan 22, 2016 7:37 pm, edited 9 times in total.
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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance][Steam Greenlight]

#2 Post by HiddenCreature » Tue Oct 13, 2015 3:25 pm

Correct me if I'm wrong, but if you have a commercial game on Steam, they don't let you host it on other websites like itch. You might want to double check on that.

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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance][Steam Greenlight]

#3 Post by Zetsubou » Tue Oct 13, 2015 4:28 pm

I'll look into it, but I would be surprised if that's the case, since games I've bought elsewhere (eg. HumbleBundle) are also on Steam, and even come with a Steam key.
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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance][Steam Greenlight]

#4 Post by papillon » Thu Oct 15, 2015 12:26 pm

HiddenCreature wrote:Correct me if I'm wrong, but if you have a commercial game on Steam, they don't let you host it on other websites like itch. You might want to double check on that.
This is not correct.

They might object to you having the same game for a lower price elsewhere, or selling a game on Steam that you are giving away free elsewhere, but no, there has never been anything which stops you from selling the game elsewhere.

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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance][Steam Greenlight]

#5 Post by infel » Fri Oct 16, 2015 5:17 pm

So I'm not often on here anymore, but I wanted to post and say I'm really glad you decided to post this game. I actually saw it a while back on your blog and it was really admiring to see how much time and work you've put into this. I hope more people try it out and, though I'm not too into BxG's, I'll be playing it once it comes out. Good luck on Steam by the way!. I see you guys are close to your goals.
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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance][Steam Greenlight]

#6 Post by Zetsubou » Sun Oct 18, 2015 11:58 pm

Thanks infel ^^

Sickness certainly has taken a lot of time and effort. It's a relief to see the end in sight.

Since you're more into GxG's, you could check out Written In The Sky, which is a short yuri KN I've been working on.
It's more of a far-out comedic VN rather than a serious story about lesbian relationships though, so without knowing your tastes I can't really say if it's something you'd enjoy.
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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance][Steam Greenlight]

#7 Post by infel » Mon Oct 19, 2015 9:38 pm

Zetsubou wrote:Thanks infel ^^

Sickness certainly has taken a lot of time and effort. It's a relief to see the end in sight.

Since you're more into GxG's, you could check out Written In The Sky, which is a short yuri KN I've been working on.
It's more of a far-out comedic VN rather than a serious story about lesbian relationships though, so without knowing your tastes I can't really say if it's something you'd enjoy.

Np =). And I do have a likeness for GxG XD. I'll have to try out your game when I can. I really miss playing visual novels ;-;.
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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance][Steam Greenlight]

#8 Post by Zetsubou » Mon Dec 21, 2015 4:33 am

The demo took longer than expected (I've been commissioning assets out of order), but I finally have one ready.
Thread for the demo is here: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 45&t=36161
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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance] [Steam] [Demo]

#9 Post by KairuKyun » Mon Jan 11, 2016 12:24 pm

Coming soon!!! January the 20th 2016. Look out for it on steam published by Unwonted Studios.
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Re: Sickness [Crime/Comedy/Romance] [Steam] [Released]

#10 Post by Zetsubou » Wed Jan 20, 2016 5:45 pm

Sickness has now been released.
Can someone move this thread to the completed section?
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