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Re: Infurubia [Fantasy/Romance][NaNoRenO 2016]

#31 Post by clua » Mon Mar 07, 2016 1:07 pm

Zelan wrote:Your art is freaking GORGEOUS I can't even!

I played TKOT not too long ago (a month ago maybe?) so it's super awesome to see something else from you! I love the concept for the plot and the relationships between characters and I'm really looking forward to it coming out. owo

(By the way, I'd be willing to proofread if you need anyone! ^_^)
Thank you for your kind words!! Actually, for TKOT I got a ton of help(Of Anarchy) for the writing :A:
This is the second time myself going solo after I did Charlatans and I'm hoping my writing doesn't disappoint orz.
Also, thank you for your offer! I will have it in mind when the time comes :u;
Weenily wrote:GAMBA AND HAERN ARE TOO CUTE. I SCREAMED WHEN I SAW CELLIA THOUGH OH MY GOD. BEST CHARACTER, CELLIA. Also Alink's sprite is looking good! The flashback looks good and is easily distinguishable from current time! Thank you for the tutorial as well. *o*
Good luck writing chapter 2! Those chapter names sound really fun, I especially like the name of the queen chapter!
Yeehh, I got to move to chp 2 and I'm loving it so so much! Eidell...Is that type of asshole character I always enjoy to write. But she got a very clumsy side too, in contrast to Alink which is very stoic.
Green Glasses Girl wrote:Your designs are so detailed and inviting Not that I'm stalking you or anything. *sobs* SO BEAUTIFUL. I enjoy when you put twins in your visual novels. It's nice to see that sibling dynamic.

B-Bittersweet journey?! Oh no, happy-sad moments are sure to follow. I hope my heart can take it. Anyway, I'm looking forward to this since I loved Charlatans.
B-but I thought stalking was part of this. I mean...I'm stalking too! :A:
Hope the characters interactions are interesting enough, it's what I most like to write...I'm trying narration this time instead of a purely dialogue driven story.
Thank you so much for your good wishes!


Progress between yesterday and today:
Script is currently 7k and that covers first chapter draft(Need to add some bits more and check it)
and the start of chapter 2. Guys, if I manage to finish the script I would be so happy :A:

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Soldiers are not tiny, this is the average height of a Kaufur.
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Fixing Alink for..I don't even know anymore.
A bit of them in game
Anndd a bit more of them in game!
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#32 Post by clua » Tue Mar 08, 2016 7:55 pm

Another little progress update:

Script: Almost 8k

Some CG prevs (Click images for larger size)
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Expressions already done
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#33 Post by Hi.In.Ni » Tue Mar 08, 2016 8:25 pm

I just cant. Can't.
You hear me? This is too good. I'll go sleep now, wake me up when it's finished. I can't wait any longer, just... -cries-
WAIT, THE TRAITOR S KNIFE IS YOURS TOO? Holy sheep I'm your fan since 2012 and I had no idea!!
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#34 Post by Lesleigh63 » Tue Mar 08, 2016 9:22 pm

This is gorgeous.

My favourite is Haern.
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#35 Post by Weenily » Wed Mar 09, 2016 9:34 am

I'm glad you're having fun writing chapter 2! LOL asshole characters are the best. I love the screencap with Eidell's high pitched laugh and Alink laughing at her omg I ended up laughing too. I'd like to see some more screencaps of Chacal!

ALSO WhOA THOSE CGS ARE GORGEOUS. I love the lighting and the hair being blown by the wind! Congrats on finishing the expressions! They definitely convey a lot of emotion. I love how Gamba's ears go down in that one sprite it's so cute >7<
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#36 Post by ebi-hime » Wed Mar 09, 2016 4:29 pm

This looks so cute omg... I love your other two VNs, you have such creative and unique ideas, and your art is so gorgeous! I'm sure this will be just as good! >_<
Also, I really like Haern's design. The big hat, plus him being a wanderer, kind of makes me think of Snufkin from the Moomins. I kind of feel like he'll be my fav already o'3'o
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#37 Post by clua » Wed Mar 09, 2016 9:52 pm

Hi.In.Ni wrote:I just cant. Can't.
You hear me? This is too good. I'll go sleep now, wake me up when it's finished. I can't wait any longer, just... -cries-
WAIT, THE TRAITOR S KNIFE IS YOURS TOO? Holy sheep I'm your fan since 2012 and I had no idea!!
XDD Yes, TKOT is mine :A: No worries about it I guess...I've been too inactive orz
BTW good luck with your nano project! I've saw you are doing it too!
Lesleigh63 wrote:This is gorgeous.

My favourite is Haern.
Thank you! I'm very surprised so many people like Haern XD!
Weenily wrote:I'm glad you're having fun writing chapter 2! LOL asshole characters are the best. I love the screencap with Eidell's high pitched laugh and Alink laughing at her omg I ended up laughing too. I'd like to see some more screencaps of Chacal!

ALSO WhOA THOSE CGS ARE GORGEOUS. I love the lighting and the hair being blown by the wind! Congrats on finishing the expressions! They definitely convey a lot of emotion. I love how Gamba's ears go down in that one sprite it's so cute >7<
XD She was my least favorite character from my original story because she was supposed to be more arrogant than
anything :p I'm glad I decided to work on this year.

I was to code today but, in the end, I couldn't because more art was needed. Hopefully, soon there will be more screencaps on the game. Thank you as always :A:!!

ebi-hime wrote:This looks so cute omg... I love your other two VNs, you have such creative and unique ideas, and your art is so gorgeous! I'm sure this will be just as good! >_<
Also, I really like Haern's design. The big hat, plus him being a wanderer, kind of makes me think of Snufkin from the Moomins. I kind of feel like he'll be my fav already o'3'o
Good luck!!!
Thank you for your kind words!! I'm glad to see your thread too :A:!!
Ahaha, you could guess and you were right! I like those type of characters too(Along with the mages and bards type)
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Thank you again :D!

About progress I guess not much today -_- At least in quantity...
I finished 3 cgs(They were actually half done, I just needed to give them some details)
spent the rest of the day doing ONE CG and I'm like...Dead XD
Context of this CG: Haern accidentally hits Gamba in her stomach with his staff(Yes, he have one...It's more like a little cane or something)when he was running from Icaro bandits. This scene is when they first meet.
And no, he didn't hit her that hard. He is not even half stronger than her XD
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Action CGs are very hard to draw for me...orz
Also I drew how female Icaro bandits look:
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Males(Like the CG above) have their hair longer, girl Icaros have it shorter.
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#38 Post by clua » Sat Mar 12, 2016 2:52 pm

Guys, some quick updates!
-Script is currently 10K and near to chapter 3
-Today I'm doing GUI work, this are some screens I was able to design and code

Quick menu:
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Preferences screen:
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I don't know if I will be able to custom the encyclopedia entry...XD...I hope so :_:

EDIT:
So Save/Load menu are 100% functional
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Anndd tried to add the Encyclopedia anyway:
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I'm having troubles with the imagemap...I mean it's showing in game but it's like the images are over the box that
contains the encyclopedia's entries...I will keep trying until today, since it's not a priority.

Some in game screens
and some dumb rule 63 of Cellia and...
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#39 Post by clua » Sun Mar 13, 2016 9:22 pm

S-sorry for posting a third time

Some more progress...
Decided to stop avoiding joined sprites and finally finished some:
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Also I'm trying a tiny portrait thing
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Since the game has a lot of dialogue and also my writing is not the best I though
I should add a hint of which character is speaking.
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#40 Post by Zelan » Sun Mar 13, 2016 9:30 pm

That joined sprite of Gamba and Chacal is adorable and heartbreaking at the same time. *hugs* Nice work on all of them!

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#41 Post by ebi-hime » Mon Mar 14, 2016 12:10 pm

The GUI all looks so gorgeous o:
And I really love the twin poses of Alink and Eidell, they look so cute together...
I like she's patting him even though he's taller than her, that's a very moe character interaction XD
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#42 Post by clua » Sat Mar 19, 2016 8:46 pm

Zelan wrote:That joined sprite of Gamba and Chacal is adorable and heartbreaking at the same time. *hugs* Nice work on all of them!
Thank you!! That sprite in particular is part of chapter one :)
ebi-hime wrote:The GUI all looks so gorgeous o:
And I really love the twin poses of Alink and Eidell, they look so cute together...
I like she's patting him even though he's taller than her, that's a very moe character interaction XD

Ahaha, yess! I was avoiding working this "special" sprites because they felt more like a hassle but as soon as I finish
them...Damn, it was worth.

Guys a bunch of progress I guess.

First, I finished coding the whole chapter one and I'm both coding and completing assets for chapter two. My goal for Nanoreno is to have these two chapters done, and write a bit of the following ones.

Added portraits:
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Coded chapter intro:
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Added image choices(I tried this code before and I'm so glad because I had a bunch of issues when I first tested it in _Salomon hahaha)
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Another scene coded

There is a recent progress post here

BTW I'm sorry I've been a little unresponsive. I been working on this every day non-stop(Save for some days that I was working in my catering job orz) hoping I can have something playable at the end of the month. Everyone good luck in these last weeks!!
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#43 Post by clua » Tue Mar 22, 2016 12:38 am

Progress I guess?

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One CG from chp 2
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Mockup for a certain scene...
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Post with more detailed info.

What I'm currently missing for the...Demo?(Two chapters out of four)
-Encyclopedia. To write the actual info orz
-Main menu and edit yes no prompt
-Missing 3 CGs and this doesn't include flashback scenes but those are easy to do so I'm not worried that much
-A bunch of sprite variations
-Code everything lol


What the finished demo will not have:

-Music. Sorry guys but I'm unable to add music to the game, mostly because I had a really strong preference for some type of music for this game so I'm not liking what I find. I will see what can I do with the music issue when the game is complete.
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#44 Post by ALCOR_etc » Tue Mar 22, 2016 9:43 pm

Hello, clua! I've been stalking following your progress on tumblr and I really really love your art. I'm excited to explore the story!

I adore Gamba's design (especially her eyes), so I drew a little something:

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Best of luck!

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#45 Post by clua » Tue Mar 22, 2016 10:44 pm

ALCOR_etc wrote:Hello, clua! I've been stalking following your progress on tumblr and I really really love your art. I'm excited to explore the story!

I adore Gamba's design (especially her eyes), so I drew a little something:

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Best of luck!
UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Thank you so much!!
She looks like she is ready to kill me hahaha :A: Cute and deadly!
Good luck for you too, best wishes and thank you again for your kindness!
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