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Thanks for the feedback!gekiganwing wrote:The ideas in Shattered Sky look promising. A distinct setting with danger, male and female protagonists, and an affection system. Here are my comments and criticism:
* Be sure to check for typos and grammar errors.
* Including random events could be a good idea. Will these affect the story in any way?
* Mini games can be enjoyable. However, are they just optional? If players need to complete them, then make sure the mini games are playtested so that they're intuitive and not too difficult.
* You have four character images, and a quote for each person. When you have time, please provide more information. What drives these characters? How do they relate to each other? Who are they on their own?
Thank you so much! I was trying to lvl up my drawing skill for this project.FrozenApple66 wrote:Oh my goodness, your line art is so sweeping and gorgeous!
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