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Re: Episicava [BxG][action,adventure,psychological,war][patr

#16 Post by dfbreezy » Thu Aug 11, 2016 9:26 am

New sample text. Meet Alacria in her battle mode. [Removed]
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#17 Post by dfbreezy » Fri Sep 02, 2016 8:30 am

New Logo For the emulators.

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#18 Post by officeryou » Sat Sep 10, 2016 2:49 pm

This may not be a very thoughtful response, but I do want to say that I love Aniam's design!

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#19 Post by dfbreezy » Sat Sep 10, 2016 11:14 pm

officeryou wrote:This may not be a very thoughtful response, but I do want to say that I love Aniam's design!
So far that's the thing most people are saying. But i wonder how you guys would react when you see Aria.
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#20 Post by dfbreezy » Sun Sep 18, 2016 3:29 am

Here is a sample track from Episicava's OST called Bad omen.
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#21 Post by Zelan » Sun Sep 18, 2016 11:27 am

dfbreezy wrote:Here is a sample track from Episicava's OST called Bad omen.
Holy crap, I like that a lot. ^_^ Well done.

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#22 Post by dfbreezy » Sun Sep 18, 2016 1:13 pm

Zelan wrote: Holy crap, I like that a lot. ^_^ Well done.
Thanks. It was composed by one of our composers, Tim Reichert.
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#23 Post by Crucifixian » Thu Sep 29, 2016 5:41 pm

I like to make things concise. It's just how I write. Forewarning. Very messy and quick thoughts. Also going to assume the team will fix the grammar errors (Punctuation, Capitalisation [Northmanni]) by themselves.

Sample 2 Thoughts:
Liked the opening quote. Full of...
Is your MC going to emotional at anypoint of the VN or no?
You need to describe that club, is it a normal club? Shady behind the back-streets club?
That first convo was stale... not sure how to explain it.(MC and shake woman)
Haha the mystery method of human interaction/seduction... I'm really into this concept.
(Will one of the female characters call him out on his logical seduction methods? :) )
"MC I know you just pretend to actually care about me... you are nothing but a tool-abuser"
"Who sees women as tools for his greater good."
"We are more than that! (slaps)"
Sidetrack over.
The power of the eye stare is strong and I hope you elaborate on that (eyes are the windows to the soul)
Nice, she swindled him in the end. Strong game she has.
I enhance my vision to that of a hawk -- I use hawkeye vision
This MC is a cold hearted pimp huh...
Bloodlust explanation could be better... An army of red hatred engulfed my very core... maybe...

Sample 3 Thoughts:

Short bright yellow hair with yellow eyes. Short and cute. Flat chested -> Is there no other better description than yellow? Like sunshine eyes or glowing balls of energy or golden coins?
I'm assuming you will have badass visuals because that fight text absolutely sucked. Instilled zero emotion from me. I thought fights were meant to be exciting.
It's like you were describing the fight but took out the exciting out of it.

Ineviability waiting for tho God of Logic to fall i 3...2...1... (In the rest of the VN)
[Not bad for a girl] --> [Not bad... for a girl] (More emphasis on the MC being a dick)

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/ If you want to improve the writing.

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Whoever designed the 'crazy' in Aria should get a pat in the back. Good job.
Personally can't stand the boobs but I guess that's more of a marketing thing then anything.
Ace sounds like the stereotypical narcissist father. I hope you make him very, very, hateable.

That's about it.

/goes back to his VN

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#24 Post by dfbreezy » Thu Sep 29, 2016 5:55 pm

Crucifixian wrote:I like to make things concise. It's just how I write. Forewarning. Very messy and quick thoughts. Also going to assume the team will fix the grammar errors (Punctuation, Capitalisation [Northmanni]) by themselves.

Sample 2 Thoughts:
Liked the opening quote. Full of...
Is your MC going to emotional at anypoint of the VN or no?
You need to describe that club, is it a normal club? Shady behind the back-streets club?
That first convo was stale... not sure how to explain it.(MC and shake woman)
Haha the mystery method of human interaction/seduction... I'm really into this concept.
(Will one of the female characters call him out on his logical seduction methods? :) )
"MC I know you just pretend to actually care about me... you are nothing but a tool-abuser"
"Who sees women as tools for his greater good."
"We are more than that! (slaps)"
Sidetrack over.
The power of the eye stare is strong and I hope you elaborate on that (eyes are the windows to the soul)
Nice, she swindled him in the end. Strong game she has.
I enhance my vision to that of a hawk -- I use hawkeye vision
This MC is a cold hearted pimp huh...
Bloodlust explanation could be better... An army of red hatred engulfed my very core... maybe...

Sample 3 Thoughts:

Short bright yellow hair with yellow eyes. Short and cute. Flat chested -> Is there no other better description than yellow? Like sunshine eyes or glowing balls of energy or golden coins?
I'm assuming you will have badass visuals because that fight text absolutely sucked. Instilled zero emotion from me. I thought fights were meant to be exciting.
It's like you were describing the fight but took out the exciting out of it.

Ineviability waiting for tho God of Logic to fall i 3...2...1... (In the rest of the VN)
[Not bad for a girl] --> [Not bad... for a girl] (More emphasis on the MC being a dick)

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/ If you want to improve the writing.

Other:
Whoever designed the 'crazy' in Aria should get a pat in the back. Good job.
Personally can't stand the boobs but I guess that's more of a marketing thing then anything.
Ace sounds like the stereotypical narcissist father. I hope you make him very, very, hateable.

That's about it.

/goes back to his VN

For sample 2, I've already changed 95% of that scenario and improved it weeks ago. But it's good to know that your opinion closely matched my Editor's.

For sample 3, that fight scene wasn't supposed to last long, because of certain plot developments, Hence the "I shot, she leapt" etc... but i will consider extending it a bit.

But thanks for the opinion. I will post another sample soon when my next surprise Arrives.
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#25 Post by dfbreezy » Mon Oct 17, 2016 1:59 pm

With the addition of our new boxart, i'll upload a proper snippet of the story soon.
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#26 Post by Zelan » Mon Oct 17, 2016 6:27 pm

HOLY CRAP.

DUDE

That box art is flipping amazing. Like, I'm a little bit freaking out right now. (I may be crying or maybe I just didn't blink for a long time.)

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#27 Post by Crazy Cactus » Sat Oct 22, 2016 11:44 pm

New cover/box art is amazing and makes me super jelly. The image itself and the composition is really epic in feel and has a tone to it that is really inspiring. Definitely a type of 'feel' to it I hope to have for our own cover art to be done at some point as well.

GUI is really nice and crisp as well, don't know if I already mentioned that somewhere before. Everything is looking really nice so far. As you mentioned though, would love to hear more in-depth about the story, even if only in some snippets (just to get more of a feel of the direction of the overall plot and all that goodness).

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#28 Post by dfbreezy » Wed Oct 26, 2016 7:08 am

We've made a Subreddit for our studio.
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#29 Post by dfbreezy » Sat Nov 19, 2016 10:24 am

Big update. All the sprites for the demo are complete. Expect screenshots of the project soon!
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#30 Post by dfbreezy » Sun Nov 20, 2016 11:21 am

Here's a proper sample that has already been proofread.
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