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Ambassador of Sieubia - Adventure/Fantasy/Adult Themed

#1 Post by wakagana »

Apologies ahead of time, a lot of these images are formatted for our upcoming Kickstarter - I won't be linking it here to respect the guidelines of the forum because we have no demo. Either way, I just want to let people know this project is in the works and would love any feedback/questions from anyone interested in playing it, or even helping out in some way. Hope you enjoy the rough concept of what we have going on!

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Ambassador of Sieubia (AoS) is an episodic fantasy visual novel game about Nisha Ellanor, an ambitious diplomat and mage who has vowed her service to her country, Sieubia.

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Follow Nisha's story as she journeys throughout the world on various assignments and personal ventures. Help forge her path by making important decisions ranging from what missions she undertakes and how she serves her country to whom she befriends and opposes...and falls for.

Every choice you make can have a slight or great effect on Nisha’s story.

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Nisha was born and raised in a small farming town in the countryside. Her parents were farmers and lived a simple, modest life.

This was changed forever when a band of barbaric thugs pillaged the town, burning and looting her home and slaying her parents before her eyes.

Nisha was to be taken away and sold into slavery, only to be saved by a lone warrior who had been traveling through the area. After defeating the savages, the warrior guided Nisha to an orphanage, where she would spend the rest of her early childhood.

Having been saved in such a manner, Nisha aspired to one day be able to protect others and help prevent misfortunes like the one she suffered through.

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After a good deal of hard work, dedication, and some luck, Nisha managed to graduate from the most prestigious military academy in the country and is now capable of achieving her goal.

This is where Nisha’s journey begins.

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Having grown up in a wealthy family, Lillian found herself cast into Sieubia's most prestigious military academy after revealing she had a knack for horse back riding and a special connection with animals. While not being the greatest student, always aloof and constantly distracted, she is one of the best equestrians the academy has seen, and is even more talented with fighting while on horseback. She is one of Nisha’s only friends and is excessively loyal, both to her country and her friends. Lilliane has trouble keeping her mouth shut, and is notorious for being very blunt and open about what she thinks.

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A past shrouded with crime, espionage and trafficking black market goods, Noraea Fireheart evaded capture and imprisonment for most of her life and gained a reputation within Sieubia as one of the best assassins and smugglers that ever lived. However, everyone’s luck eventually runs thin, and she was apprehended after a job took a dive for the worst. She was offered her freedom back in exchange for her services – to work for the kingdom and military instead of for her own benefit.

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Much like Nisha, Mystearica was orphaned at a younge age. Growing up proved difficult as her temper and emotions always got the better of her decision making and her tendencies to get into fights increased with her age. Once of age, Mystearica left the orphanage and joined the military - only to find that her outbursts and challenging demeanor weren't permitted. After being forcibly discharged she became a personal bodyguard and eventually met Noraea. Surprisingly, their two contrasting personalities melded perfectly and the two have been inseparable since.

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Growing up, Jiji lived a posh and pampered life style within one of the wealthier houses of An'Kazi. He hadn't a worry in his life, and he spent his days reading and learning - seeking more knowledge, ever so curious about the world he lived within, and the world beyond Eshijan's borders. Due to Jiji's interest in the world outside of Eshijan, when he came of age, he was given a chance to become a foreign ambassador for the emperor. He took this opportunity, vowing his life to his work and the emperor's wishes.

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A proud member of the Octian Royal Guard and an honorable knight - Stel Desani serves her kingdom and country with great ambition and courage. At a young age, she swore an oath to protect whoever she was assigned to until her very last breath if necessary. Stel makes for a great protector and escort, but has a hard time lightening up, often being too sedate or stern even in the safest or carefree of environments.

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This island nation is detached from the harms of the world and has an abundance of amenities and resources like beautiful beaches and fertile farmland. Most importantly, it's the homeland of the Sieubian race.

Sieubia’s history of relative peace and its prime location for international trade has contributed to its capital, one of the largest ports in the world and also named Sieubia, becoming esteemed for its elegance and allure.

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Sieubians are the descendants of an ancient, dragon-like race that once ruled the world from the mountains to Sieubia's east, now 'Octia'.

Through years of evolution and adaptation, Sieubians have distinguished themselves from their ancestors, cultivating a global presence and a creating new empire rivaling the size and power of the kingdom over which their predecessors once reigned.

Known around the world for their technological advancements as well as skill in various magical arts, Sieubians are also recognized for a distinct trait they share with their ancestors: they are of an epicene and indeterminate nature to the eye, with both genders having very feminine characteristics. The only indicator to determine the sex of a Sieubian is their horns, or lack thereof; male Sieubians possess horns, while females do not.

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Players will have the opportunity to decide what sex they want Nisha to be in the beginning of the game.

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To the southeast of Sieubia lay Oxos, whose rolling plains and prairies form a sea of earthly green and gold. These open grasslands are occupied by a tribal, nomadic, beastlike people called the Rubani, who enjoy a natural talent for hunting wildlife and domesticating beasts thought too feral to control.

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Excessively territorial, the Rubani view any encroachment on their land as a threat. This inevitably led to a conflict with colonizing Sieubians, as well as inner disagreements within the different tribes and sects of the Rubani. These disagreements resulted in a massive civil war that lasted many years, allowing Sieubia to gain a foothold within the western peninsula of Oxos. However, the once-separated tribes have finally unified under a single banner again to push Sieubia's settlers out and reclaiming old ancestral lands.

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A mountainous country rich with ancient treasures and architecture left over from a past empire, Octia is the homeland of the Octians, the closest living relatives of the dragon race that once ruled the world. Octia’s steep and desolate landscapes offer little to those who are not capable of flying or trekking the massive heights of the summits that house archaic cities and temples.

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Still holding onto a fragment of the power they once had, Octia regards itself as being a nation that honors nothing more than morality and truth, though this often results in meddling in other countries’ affairs in an effort to make the world as peaceful as possible—even at the cost of more violence.

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Karaso is a diverse and temperate region home to the noble and young humans. While not as experienced or historically important as the older races of the planet, the different states and kingdoms within Karaso have come together to strengthen their bond in hopes that they can join Sieubia as one of the world’s most prominent names.

Karaso has prospered due to trade agreements with Sieubia and their overly friendly political methods in recent years.

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(Human Adventurer on the left, Human-Sieubian hybrid Courtesan on the right.)

Notably, Humans seem to be the only race capable of having children with Sieubians, leading some to believe that perhaps they, too, are descendants of the dragon race.

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To the north of Sieubia and Karaso lies a frigid territory shrouded in mysteries and rumors. Often described as somewhere adventurers flock but never return from, Asnar is inhabited by a feline race, the Asnarians.

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Secluded from most threats because of the deadly weather and climate, Asnarians live and thrive in deep underground cities carved out from the very mountain ranges that make up the large, uncontested region.

It is commonly understood that Asnarians will eat anything they can get theirs paws on that isn't a fellow Asnarian; many thus assume that most adventurers to Asnar end up an entrée.

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Land locked and protected by a large belt of deserts and steppes, Eshijan is a nation left largely untouched by exterior influences.

An'Kazi is the capital and home of the Zahari, a race of harpies that worship the sun and sky and have ruled over this desolate land for thousands of years. They shun outsiders and explorers from ever entering unless they stay permanently and adopt the Zahari dogma and traditions.

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It is said that the Zahari were created with powerful twisted magic by the ancient dragon race simply to be their servants and subjects, and that they played a major role in the dragon race's downfall.


Lastly - Here is some eye-candy of the world the player will be exploring!

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In conclusion, this is all just conceptual and we're going to hopefully be developing the game in the near future.

Overall, our goal is to make an adult themed game from a westernized writing/development perspective with a little bit of everything for everyone. Whether it's developed story lines, amazing art or a niche sexual fetish (fairly obvious - based on the Sieubian race *cough cough*), hopefully something in this project interested you in some way!

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#2 Post by gekiganwing »

wakagana wrote: Ambassador of Sieubia (AoS) is an episodic fantasy visual novel game ... Follow Nisha's story as she journeys throughout the world on various assignments and personal ventures. Help forge her path by making important decisions ranging from what missions she undertakes and how she serves her country to whom she befriends and opposes...and falls for. Every choice you make can have a slight or great effect on Nisha’s story.
1. I'm curious what you meant by episodic. Will the story be told across multiple installments? Will there be times when the story skips ahead in time, or skips from place to place?

2. Will there be many choices? Just a few? Or somewhere in the middle?

3. I assume there will be some decisions which are intentionally vague, some which will have clear outcomes, and some that are in between those extremes. Any thoughts about implementing clear versus vague choices?
wakagana wrote: Overall, our goal is to make an adult themed game from a westernized writing/development perspective with a little bit of everything for everyone.
1. Any specific influences? If so, be sure to mention them. (I think you'll benefit by citing a few of your influences in your Kickstarter. Just make sure that it doesn't read like a list of things you like. Also, make sure the comparisons are accurate.)

2. Is this freeware? Or will you sell the story as an indie VN?

3. Will the story include explicit content? If not, would it merit a Mature (ESRB) or Restricted (MPAA) content rating?

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A few questions:

1. You stated that both the males and females of the Sieubian race have feminine characteristics, but only the males have horns. However, Mystearica and Stel both have female pronouns in their descriptions. Am I missing something here?

2. Noraea and Mystearica have the same last name, but it's written that they met not too long ago relative to the game. Are they married? Adopted siblings? Or is it a total coincidence?

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#4 Post by wakagana »

@Geki --

1 - By episodic we meant the game would have several releases - that way we wouldn't be forced to wait months-years at a time to release the full game. It will be put out in smaller segments so people can enjoy them sooner rather than a long long time down the road.

2 - There will be a lot of choices within dialogue and encounters with other diplomats/people of importance. There won't be many 'tea or juice' type choices.

3 - Instead of making it obvious as to which choice does what, we're going to be teasing to the player as to whether they made a good or bad decision with a certain character - similar to the TellTale games like with walking dead, where after a decision the player will be notified with "X didn't really like that" or "Y will remember that."

4 - In terms of specific influences, the only ones I can really think of that we're possibly trying to emulate are Fire Emblem and possibly final fantasy - but neither of those are Westernized games. We're hoping to add turn based combat and stats for each character as well, so we'll see how that comes along as we progress.

5/6 - It will be for sale and will have adult content - certainly 18+/R as it will have drugs/sex/violence in it.

@Zelan --

1 - I'm actually having a bit of trouble here myself with the writing aspect of things. We're aware some players might be a little 'uncomfortable' seeing a visually female character and having the dialogue have masculine speech involved. We're in the process of figuring out what would be best to make it less awkward and confusing for people.

One option we're looking at is the gender roles within those races being less important, or non-existent, leaving words like 'he' and 'she' not used.

Another is possibly making up a different term for each gender within the Sieubian race like he/she equaling out to Su/Sei (Although I'm not really a fan of this due to the stereotypes of tumblr making it a little outrageous) along with the fact some people might struggle to read that without feeling off. If we were to do this, we would probably need a little intro-guide/foreword to explain everything to people prior to the game starting - which might actually be a fun way to introduce people to the whole ordeal.

2 - Noraea and Mystearica are in fact married - sorry for being rather vague, the more intimate details of a lot of the stuff I want to keep for people to enjoy in the script.



Thanks for the questions guys! Certainly helping me figure out some of the smaller stuff I've been debating within my head. Any feedback on the suggestions I've made helps as well!

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Thanks for answering my questions! ^_^

I personally wouldn't have a problem with feminine-looking characters referred to as "he," but if that seems like it'd be an issue for other players then making up your own pronouns is probably the way to go. I'm sure that will also lead to some backlash from people who like to make a scene, but hopefully since the characters aren't even human it'll be acceptable to more people.

Making up different pronouns for the other races, or using Su/Sei for them as well, might further establish different pronouns as the norm for this world. On the other hand, that might not make sense if those races have more sexual dimorphism than the Sieubians.

Last thing - one of your answers to gekiganwing has piqued my interest. So we've got a fantasy game with drugs in it? Since it takes place in a different world, I'm assuming the drugs won't be like cocaine or anything, but more like cannabis or opium (plant-based drugs). Is that right? Do you plan to use drugs from our world, like those two, or are you making up one (or several) specific to this world?

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Zelan wrote:
Last thing - one of your answers to gekiganwing has piqued my interest. So we've got a fantasy game with drugs in it? Since it takes place in a different world, I'm assuming the drugs won't be like cocaine or anything, but more like cannabis or opium (plant-based drugs). Is that right? Do you plan to use drugs from our world, like those two, or are you making up one (or several) specific to this world?
I can imagine there being plant-based stuff used in cigars and such - I don't really plan on writing anything involving people tightening up their arm and then injecting meth or heroine into it. Haha, it'll be casual stuff like tobacco or weed for sure. The use of magic will also be incorporated, so perhaps something like that can get someone that 'high' as well.

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wakagana wrote:
Zelan wrote:
Last thing - one of your answers to gekiganwing has piqued my interest. So we've got a fantasy game with drugs in it? Since it takes place in a different world, I'm assuming the drugs won't be like cocaine or anything, but more like cannabis or opium (plant-based drugs). Is that right? Do you plan to use drugs from our world, like those two, or are you making up one (or several) specific to this world?
I can imagine there being plant-based stuff used in cigars and such - I don't really plan on writing anything involving people tightening up their arm and then injecting meth or heroine into it. Haha, it'll be casual stuff like tobacco or weed for sure. The use of magic will also be incorporated, so perhaps something like that can get someone that 'high' as well.
Ooooh, I didn't even think about magic! That's an interesting concept, too. It'll be interesting to see how that ends up in the final game.

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