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World Adventure Universe [Action/Adventure/Fantasy]

Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2016 10:54 pm
by Crucifixian
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(Theme music)
The Grand Belt of Champions - The belt worn by the greatest Adventurer in history, Fancy Pants, is scattered around Ezo after his death, leading to a new era of Promotions!
The story of Adventurers in World Adventure Universe on a quest to defeat evil, themselves, to obtain FABOULOUS belts and to become KING OF THE PROMOTIONS!
(To be continued...)

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The story formerly known as Navneta


Read the Web Novel here

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2016 11:19 pm
by Schwartzlicht
[...]
How do I move characters left and right instead of middle?
Say you have Alice and Bob.
To make Alice sprite appear left and Bob appear right, you type:

show alice at left
show bob at right


To move Alice from right to left, try:

show alice at right
show alice at left with move


To remove Bob from the scene, going from left to right, use:

show bob at left
hide bob with moveoutright


So it all boils down to these instructions:

show sprite at right/left/center
show sprite at right/left/center with move
hide sprite with moveoutright/moveoutleft/moveouttop/moveoutbottom


The remainder of your doubts will have to be solved by someone more experienced.

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2016 11:21 pm
by Crucifixian
Schwartzlicht wrote:
[...]
How do I move characters left and right instead of middle?
Say you have Alice and Bob.
To make Alice sprite appear left and Bob appear right, you type:

show alice at left
show bob at right


To move Alice from right to left, try:

show alice at right
show alice at left with move


To remove Bob from the scene, going from left to right, use:

show bob at left
hide bob with moveoutright


So it all boils down to these instructions:

show sprite at right/left/center
show sprite at right/left/center with move
hide sprite with moveoutright/moveoutleft/moveouttop/moveoutbottom


The remainder of your doubts will have to be solved by someone more experienced.
Thank you for the speedy reply!

Can you also flip sprites as well by any chance? :)

flip sprite

Hope your projects go excellently!

CruCru

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2016 12:21 am
by Schwartzlicht
You have to define it as an image. Say you have Alice again, and her "mad" sprite is "alicemad.png"...

init:
image alicemadflip = im.Flip("alicemad.png", vertical=True)


Then you call it like this:

show alicemad
a 'Where are you, Bob?'
show alicemadflip
a 'WHERE. ARE. YOU?'

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2016 6:22 am
by Crucifixian
Schwartzlicht wrote:You have to define it as an image. Say you have Alice again, and her "mad" sprite is "alicemad.png"...

init:
image alicemadflip = im.Flip("alicemad.png", vertical=True)


Then you call it like this:

show alicemad
a 'Where are you, Bob?'
show alicemadflip
a 'WHERE. ARE. YOU?'
Thanks again!

Due to this thread being moved to the Bigger Leagues (Ideas->WIP) I had to clean up my original post to make it look professional.

Also have a cool photo of a new character!

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2016 10:09 pm
by Crucifixian
Found some time with midsem break. Two more characters! 3 More to go.

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:48 pm
by Crucifixian
Two more to go! Mr K prelim drawing is out.

Also edited the opening post heavily and posted code for tech help.

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 11:21 pm
by SypherZent
Hey, just saw the Tech help part of your project.

If you are trying to get only the character's head inside of the textbox, then I would recommend creating a separate image.

So you would have an image for full sprite, and a different image for just the head.
Then, you can use the same code that you have, except use the image for just the head.

Hope this helps out!

Edit: By the way, I really like the detail in the character faces!

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 2:39 am
by Crucifixian
Thanks SypherZent! Solved the issue straight away :D

What about the detail of the faces do you like about them?

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 2:51 am
by SypherZent
Crucifixian wrote:What about the detail of the faces do you like about them?
Well, how to explain. Art is a fairly subjective thing.

In my perception, first glance and I see that the art style is relatively simple.
It's not vibrant colors and gradients. This leads to the next effect.

Within the next few milliseconds, my focus instinctively closes in on the character faces.
And I realize they are quite detailed! You seem to get the expressions just right.
These expressions give the characters good personality in my opinion.

So, I think you give a good level of detail to the faces. ^^

Are you planning on giving each of the characters different facial expressions?

Also, I think Mr. K looks the coolest. ^^

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 4:30 am
by Crucifixian
SypherZent wrote:
Crucifixian wrote:What about the detail of the faces do you like about them?
Well, how to explain. Art is a fairly subjective thing.

In my perception, first glance and I see that the art style is relatively simple.
It's not vibrant colors and gradients. This leads to the next effect.

Within the next few milliseconds, my focus instinctively closes in on the character faces.
And I realize they are quite detailed! You seem to get the expressions just right.
These expressions give the characters good personality in my opinion.

So, I think you give a good level of detail to the faces. ^^

Are you planning on giving each of the characters different facial expressions?

Also, I think Mr. K looks the coolest. ^^
Glad to hear that your thoughts on the characters, especially Mr K :)

I'd like to give them different expressions (pending on skill/other artist's skills/timeline) because this will be a free edition. And if money is in the equation in the future, the whole VN shall be remastered in everything.

I enjoy the process of this VN :D hope we can push each other to make great VN!

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:12 am
by SypherZent
Nice! And yes, making VNs is quite fun, haha!

Looking forward to seeing more characters & previews as your game develops. ^^

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 10:10 am
by Crucifixian
All prelim character design done!

Next step: Plot writeup! Fun times ahead!

And Programming! :D

Re: Navneta: Ichikoku [Adventure/Psychological/Fantasy][Stor

Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 7:48 am
by Crucifixian
Music prelim done. If you like your quality of music I suggest you don't listen to it. The Theme music is already on the opening post so I didn't re-post. I don't have a Musician besides myself, so it's all piano recording with potato camera, gonna re-mix with Reaper when I can.

Keeping the positive momentum up! :)

Next step is plot, which has 3-4K words :( but I know how it begins and ends and the twists in between :)

Navneta shall be Linear VN currently.

This is fun :D

Re: Navneta [Action/Adventure/Fantasy]

Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2016 12:34 am
by Crucifixian
Rough plotline done! 24 Chapters done! Time to add all the quotes and then demo is out!
Have a snippet of the plot!

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jj/j - Cello
d - Magneta
e - Kid
f - Grandmaster
h - Zurc


    jj "WHAT ARE THOSEEEEEEEEEE!"
    "Points at her shoes"
    d "..."
    d "Comfortable... boots?"
    jj "What the hell... NO! JUST NO!"
    d "You're telling me that a single pair of shoes is your sole justification to kill me?!?"
    jj "YES!"
    e "What are they talking about."
    f "..."
    f "Fashion..."
    e "..."
    j "Cello cries at night when he sees terrible footwear."
    j "They are the tyres to the car. They bind you to this earth!"
    j "How could you torture your poor poor feet like this!"
    d "Say the same thing yourself... what the hell are those jester shoes you are wearing!"
    f "So... Kid, should we save her..."
    "Kid is gone"
    f "Where did you go?"
    j "Bitch please, these are an upgrade from jesters!"
    j "Fashioned from extinct red elephant tusks, these are the rarest of the Alvinci collection!"
    j "They are the best shoes for shoe-otaku's like myself!"
    d "You're mad!"
    e "I AGREEEE"
    j "Yes you are right! I'm mad because you don't understand the fundamental aspects of fashion!"
    j "..."
    "turns to Kid."
    j "Who are you Capman?"
    "Kid defeats Cello"
    e "I'm killing you because you weird me out!"
    j "Wait! Don't kill me just yet!"
    j "Two things:"
    j "Nice Noke Runners by the way,"
    e "Thanks!"
    d "ANGER... RISING..."
    j "where did you get them in Ezo?"
    e "That's what they were called?"
    j "What the hell! Another fashion unbeliever."
    e "And the second?"
    j "Unbutton the bottom part of your blazer it's, ugh..."
    "Cello faints, and Grandmaster, Kid and Magneta look on in stunned silence."
    f "..."
    f "Why is this guy a Hero?"
    h "He is a fabulous man! THATS WHY"