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#1 Post by riverbluesbear » Wed Sep 28, 2016 9:39 pm

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Logo done by the amazing Potouto! :D

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LOVE INTERESTS

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POTOUTO DID THE NEW PROMO-THINGY AND IS AN ANGEL FROM THE DEPTHS OF HEAVEN AND WE CAN'T THANK THEM ENOUGH JUST LOOK AT THIS
ADYRN (AKA EHCS) DID ALL OF THE CHARACTER SPRITES AND DID SUCH A WONDERFUL JOB AT BRINGING ALL OF OUR CHARACTERS TO LIFE THANK YOU

We will post our progress as much as we can, and screenshots are coming soon! :D Thanks so much for looking at this, so please drop a line and tell us how ya like it!
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#2 Post by ZionVI » Wed Sep 28, 2016 11:35 pm

1. What do you think of the story?
REALLY loving it, especially all the features listed. The writing style just pulled me right in, can't wait to feast my eyes on it and the amazing characters, any chance of a demo release planned?

2. Whaddya think of Rayna as a character and as the protagonist?
She seems great, normally I don't like female leads in VN but her design is amazing and I'm actually excited to find out more about Rayna an play as her.

3. Which of the three guys is your favorite?
As a sucker for long hair on guys I like Faelynn's design but I have to say that Hatori is the most appealing to me. You make it a real hard choice though. Cause damn I'm sure I'll be spending as much time deciding who to go after as I will playing the game.

4. How do ya feel about Rayna's family?
Her father seems absolutely fantastic and I'm very happy that family dynamics will be a thing in this VN. Seriously, over the moon about that.

5. Any questions/comments/suggestions for us?
MAKE IT! RELEASE IT! LET ME LOVE IT!
This has potential to be one of the best visual novels I've played in a long time, and I'm extremely excited.

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#3 Post by riverbluesbear » Thu Sep 29, 2016 12:09 am

Thank you so much! :D You have no idea how much that means to us! :D

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#4 Post by Googaboga » Thu Sep 29, 2016 1:54 pm

Hey, I just wanted to say real quick that this seems great. Rayna is beautiful and sounds like a lot of fun. The rest of the cast seems pretty stand out as well. And seriously, these designs are super nice.

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#5 Post by riverbluesbear » Thu Sep 29, 2016 2:00 pm

Thank you so much!! :D :D

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#6 Post by Zelan » Thu Sep 29, 2016 5:04 pm

1. What do you think of the story?
It seems interesting! :D I'm curious, since you stated that Rayna doesn't really know what to do with her life and does things to "experience them" rather than because she actually enjoys them, are there endings where Rayna discovers something that she truly does enjoy and wants to make a job out of? Acting, writing, teaching, what-have-you? I would love something like that.
Of course, she could always just stick with the band and have it get super famous. cx
2. Whaddya think of Rayna as a character and as the protagonist?
Her design is gorgeous, for one thing. I like her loud personality, too; I prefer my protagonists to have something to say about everything, in all honesty. And I actually really like the fact that she failed to graduate her senior year - it's probably not something that I would recommend, of course, but it makes her a more interesting character. Plus, it toys with the typical high school setting a bit since our protagonist is legally an adult at this point.
3. Which of the three guys is your favorite?
Barleah! I love sweet-natured characters, and I can sympathize with him having been pushed into sports. The other two are fine. Asshole characters are hard to write in a way that I like, though. Hatori is interesting enough and I'd like to know what's up with him being all mysterious, but Barleah just takes the cake over him.
4. How do ya feel about Rayna's family?
I'd be very interested in seeing how they'd react if all four of them were locked in a room together. It seems like they've got some interesting dynamics going on. About how old is Briseis? I feel like she would have been on the younger side (like in her 20s) to leave Rayna without much thought and only later be interested in reconciling.
5. Any questions/comments/suggestions for us?
I've been wondering about this project since Potouto posted the logo a while back. cx Glad to finally see what it's about! I had thought that it might be a management sim/vn hybrid, but this is just as good.

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#7 Post by riverbluesbear » Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:23 pm

Thank you so much, Zelan! :D

To answer your questions, part of the game is to kind of guide Rayna into her pursuit of her future. So, you can focus on her sharpening her band skills, or you can have her try new things out. Briseis was eighteen when she had Rayna, and Elios was twenty-two, so now, Briseis is 37, and Elios is 41:) A management sim is WAY beyond our skill set lol but maybe for the future!

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#8 Post by riverbluesbear » Thu Sep 29, 2016 11:43 pm

Screenshot from the game! :D
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Like mother, like daughter ^^

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#9 Post by Amberbaum » Fri Sep 30, 2016 12:26 pm

Her parents look awesome :D.

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#10 Post by riverbluesbear » Fri Sep 30, 2016 4:27 pm

Thank you! ^^

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#11 Post by Zelan » Fri Sep 30, 2016 10:58 pm

'Cheese and rice' is one of my favorite expressions. cx Also, I forgot to mention this before, but I love Lucy's design. Her hair is fantastically drawn and I'm jealous of her scarf.

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#12 Post by potouto » Sat Oct 01, 2016 12:02 pm

Oh my god, this looks amazingly fun <3
Hope things will go well with your projects, I love all of the character design <33
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#13 Post by Letitia_L » Sat Oct 01, 2016 4:15 pm

1. What do you think of the story?
The story seems pretty interesting! I especially love the fact that we can chose Rayna future and that the choices will all matter.

2. Whaddya think of Rayna as a character and as the protagonist?
I really like her sprite, she's beautiful! And I think she will be a original protagonist, it's not every days that we have a protagonist that failed her senior year and has a loud personality ^^ I like it.

3. Which of the three guys is your favorite?
Ha it's pretty difficult. I really like the sprite of Hatori and Faelynn, they're gorgeous :D For the personality I don't know yet, usually I like the douche type of character but Hatori really intrigues me.

4. How do ya feel about Rayna's family?
I don't now yet, but I like the fact that the story relate to the family in this VN, it's quite rare.

5. Any questions/comments/suggestions for us?
Nothing aside from I can't wait for the release, so keep up the good work!
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#14 Post by riverbluesbear » Sat Oct 01, 2016 11:13 pm

@Zelan: I say it all the time, so my co-writer decided to put it in lol and thank you! I absolutely love Lucy! Adyrn made her even more beautiful and bratty than I could have ever wanted <3

@Potouto: T.T THANK T.T

@Letita_L: Thank you so much for all of the kind words~~ :D

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#15 Post by riverbluesbear » Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:16 am

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