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Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2016 4:03 pm
by Zelan
Please, Faelynn, Rayna's hair is fantastic. You're just jealous and you know it. :P

Jealousy aside, I'm getting the feeling that Faelynn will end up being the endearing kind of annoying. Those characters usually aren't my favorite route, but I always love them anyway because SNARK.

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2016 6:42 pm
by Crazy Cactus
1. What do you think of the story?
Looks like an interesting and unique premise to me, and looking forward to seeing more details fleshed out.

2. Whaddya think of Rayna as a character and as the protagonist?
For lack of a better word, she seems like quit the badass in a way - and has that quality to draw you in for a great protagonist.

3. Which of the three guys is your favorite?
Barleaugh intrigues me quite a bit. Though, admittedly, the candid and sweet nature of his personality (based on the short description) reminds me of the burly, strong, handsome, and honest Luke Cage, of which I recently just finished marathon watching. ;D

4. How do ya feel about Rayna's family?
I dunno. I get this feeling her mother is gonna play a big role? Maybe? (sarcasm)

5. Any questions/comments/suggestions for us?
Curious to see if Rayna's mother will be the regular strict type of parent or if she will be the crazy strict type that alienates her daughter like Kyoko's mother in Skip Beat.

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 2:26 pm
by riverbluesbear
GUYS LOOK AT WHAT POTOUTO DID ON THE FIRST PAGE FOR US BRB CRYING BYE

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:53 pm
by Zelan
OMG I LOVE POTOUTO SO MUCH

i wish i had money to hire them :') and also a project oops

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2016 7:47 pm
by riverbluesbear
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Say hello to Jonathan "Jon-Jon" Matthews, Faelynn's older brother and Rayna's ex-boyfriend :D We so love how his design came out and are screaming over it! He's definitely an important character, if not the most important one. Available only in flashbacks :D

Tell us what ya think! :)) (Please...:D)

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2016 9:45 pm
by Zelan
oh DANG dramaaaa

Personally, I'm not a huge fan of piercings or gages, but they work well with his design. And I love his tattoos ^_^

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2016 11:17 pm
by riverbluesbear
Zelan wrote:oh DANG dramaaaa

Personally, I'm not a huge fan of piercings or gages, but they work well with his design. And I love his tattoos ^_^
We have too much love for them xD All of the love interests, besides Leah, have a piercing of some sort lol

And we love his tattoos, too! :D Adryn is quite amazing! :D

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 3:59 am
by LibraSweets
I adore the art style and the colors, everything just pops and looks super fun. Draws my attention in instantly.
Barleah is just my type, too. He and Rayna's family are fantastically drawn.

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2016 8:29 pm
by riverbluesbear
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This is Rayna's younger sprite, which will be seen in flashbacks, happening three years prior to the story, so, this is Rayna when she is sixteen :) Any thoughts as to why she has changed so drastically? The only other character to get a flashback sprite is Faelynn lol and wait until you see him! So, whaddya think? :D

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2016 11:26 pm
by Zelan
Young Rayna pulls off the goth look pretty well. ^_^ Hmm, I don't know why she's changed drastically. Maybe it has something to do with when she and Faelynn had their falling-out? That would be my only guess.

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2016 3:47 am
by riverbluesbear
Zelan wrote:Young Rayna pulls off the goth look pretty well. ^_^ Hmm, I don't know why she's changed drastically. Maybe it has something to do with when she and Faelynn had their falling-out? That would be my only guess.
Oh, yeah, she definitely does! :D Adyrn did an amazing job! As for your guess, you, my friend, are very, very close:)) It has something to do with it, but not everything to do with it ^^

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2016 3:52 am
by riverbluesbear
LibraSweets wrote:I adore the art style and the colors, everything just pops and looks super fun. Draws my attention in instantly.
Barleah is just my type, too. He and Rayna's family are fantastically drawn.
Sorry we didn't see this earlier, but we totally agree! Adyrn literally just takes the image I want right out of my head and makes it happen lol she's amazing~ I'm also glad Barleah is getting some love! Adyrn did a wonderful job on not only his skintone, but also Rayna and her family's.

Unfortunately, a lot of VNs don't have POC, especially as a playable protagonist, and if they do, they are very light on the spectrum, so I really wanted to showcase that in my VN, and Adryn did such a wonderful job translating those thoughts! So, thank you so much for those kind words! :D

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2016 6:56 pm
by riverbluesbear
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Rayna and Papi bonding time <3 <3 (AKA, Rayna making fun of Papi's old high school band)

We're also currently at 30k! :D Yay for writing! :D

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free)

Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2016 7:46 pm
by riverbluesbear
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Our first CG!! Yay!! It's Young Rayna and Young Papi in their apartment, with Papi singing to her! Many thanks to Adyrn for doing such a wonderful job~

More to come! :D

Re: RTANMUSSB! (Otome, Comedy, High School, Free) First CG U

Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2016 10:12 pm
by Googaboga
That's a really cute CG ^^. I'm looking forward to seeing the others that are to come.

Also, it's great that the script has come as far as 30k. Congrats C:.