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Demo (5 mins long to get a taste of what the game might be like owo):
http://www.mediafire.com/file/ighenonvn ... r_Demo.rar

Overview/Description:

Seventeen years-old Miwa (name changeable) Amori was forced to move with her parents from Japan to Brighton in England. It was a surprise for her. She really didn’t expect it. Moving was hard since she’s still a teenage girl, and departing only after she finished high school back in Japan. Joining Lingrove Institute & Academy of Excellence College was probably the best decision she ever made. Miwa made pretty good friends over the past school year. Maybe things will change as she gets closer? She always was the dreamer type. After living there for almost 2 years, it’s time to make some more memories and keep Reminiscing Forever.

Character Profiles:

Heroine -


Love Interests -




Side Characters -




CGs:

First ever CG to be made being worked on



Extra Info:

• Visual Novel is being made using Visual Novelty/TyranoBuilder Visual Novel Studio. Might be ported to Renpy depending on how popular the game turns out (if Visual Novelty is used).
• Founder, creator and writer is Taz (me). Voice Actors and CG Artist will be revealed later.
• 15+ Endings, Several CGs, Maybe 6-7 hours of gameplay? (Idk yet)
• Sprites made using --- http://silverhyena.deviantart.com/art/G ... -412450628 --- http://silverhyena.deviantart.com/art/G ... -413022118
• Once it's released, this will be a freeware game.
• Game development might take about 2 or more years.
• This is a W.I.P project. Look forward to it and I'll be waiting to hear from you guys!

Questions:

1. What do you think of this game? Will you be interested in playing it?
2. Based on the (admittedly meager) descriptions, which character are you most interested in? Why?
3. Would you be willing to pay for it if it becomes commercial? Why or why not?
4. What are your expectations for this game? What pitfalls do you want the game to avoid?
5. Feedbacks, comments, criticisms, questions, concerns, etc. are welcome! Please tell me what you think or ask me anything!

THIS THREAD WILL ALWAYS BE UPDATED. BE WARNED, EVERYTHING ON HERE IS NOT FINAL SINCE THIS IS A W.I.P.

Tiffany Adams seems like an unlikely name for a Latina. However, I don't know the character's backstory. She might be adopted, she might have changed her name, she might go by a nickname... In any case, just make sure the character's name makes sense in regards to her family, experiences, and so on.

TazTheFirst wrote: 2. Based on the (admittedly meager) descriptions, which character are you most interested in? Why?

I'm curious about Ryoto's background. Did he grow up as a UK citizen or as an immigrant? What languages does he speak?

TazTheFirst wrote: [*]Once it's released, this will be a freeware game.
[*] Game development might take about 2 or more years.
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3. Would you be willing to pay for it if it becomes commercial? Why or why not?

If you expect to devote at least two years to story development, then I think that you will benefit by selling the final product. Use the current sprites as placeholders for now.

TazTheFirst wrote: 5. Feedbacks, comments, criticisms, questions, concerns, etc. are welcome! Please tell me what you think or ask me anything!

Give the reader a sense of place. Help people know what's notable and interesting about life in Brighton.

One last suggestion: plan out your endings. Think about where the story could or should go. You might want to write multiple drafts of your endings well in advance.