SORRY I CRITICIZED A LOT ON THE GUI. The rest are already really good-- especially that confrontation with Thra Pena? That was actually pretty terrifying and tense.SwallowtailedTrinket wrote:@Ghost of Crux
Okay, so GUI still needs quite a bit of fine-tuning. I will add that to my list! Thanks for the specifics, too, that's a big help!
I've tried to trim down most of the text walls, but I wouldn't be surprised that I've missed a few.
Nah, liking Ruim is fine--likable side-characters are better than boring ones, right? And I'm pleased that you enjoyed the sibling moments as well!
The end of your post actually made me laugh a lot XD Sounds like you had fun playing and I couldn't ask for more!
Thank you so very much for your feedback :D It means a lot to me, and I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Also this is PROBABLY very nitpicky so I'm sorry if it comes off that way but any particular reason why the menu is on the left side of the screen? :'o
The buttons of the menus are pretty big compared to everything else, and it kinda keeps snapping to my attention every time I go back to the left to read the next line. They're very attention grabbing. It's a suggestion, but perhaps they can be on the right? Or be a bit smaller. As it is, the textbox is very heavy on the left side, since the menu and the namebox are all on the far left. It kinda shifts the "center of balance" of things-- when you go to the right side of the screen, it feels really barren and you just kinda naturally go back to the busiest part of the screen.
But that's enough of me commenting on GUI I'm sorry ;;
HONESTLY I just really liked the Ruim and Makani interactions in general-- Makani is still upset, but she deals with it maturely and doesn't lash out on him but rather on the idea and situation, which is super nice. It turned her from a potentially annoying protagonist who rightfully are upset by arranged marriages but at the same time are unwilling to see the sides of the issue. The fact that the curse is an established thing that made Makani do things that make him and her mother rightfully worried is just?? I love it. I just really love how you write the entire thing.
IT WAS A FUN READ, REALLY, so it was all my pleasure.
//vibrates excitedly here
@ Zelan; HELLO FRIEND
do we start making the fanclub badges now or later? LMAO