Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

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Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#1 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Wed Nov 23, 2016 9:09 pm

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The demo is a work in progress.
Demo: noveleyez.itch.io/memoriae-mori

Story: Faceless corpses are being found in the city. Although two of the victims were students, their families didn't seem to be very upset. This catches the main character's attention, but her focus soon turns to those around her: a foreigner who suddenly transfers to her school, her sister who starts acting strangely, and a mysterious girl she encounters. While the main character tries to manage her personal life, in the city, people continue to die...

Characters:
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Elise Belle
A foreigner who transfers to the main character's school one day. She says she lived in Japan when she was little.
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Setsuka Houkyou
The main character's sister. She is normally reserved, but sometimes has trouble controlling her emotions.
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???
A mysterious girl the main character happens to come across.

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Questions:
1. What is your impression of the demo?
2. Did you encounter any problems while playing the demo? Did the text show up letter by letter, or all at once? Were there any old saves?
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Re: Memoriae Mori[GxG][Eroge/Mystery/Romance][Commercial]Dem

#2 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Sun Dec 04, 2016 11:58 pm

Updated demo.

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#3 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Fri Dec 16, 2016 12:24 am

Slight update.

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#4 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Sun Jan 01, 2017 4:58 pm

Slight update.

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#5 Post by ssero » Sun Jan 01, 2017 5:51 pm

Hi Tiesu Erioto

Your quick story summary really piqued my interest and somehow the scanty character description worked fine with it. The visuals to me look a bit simplistic (I'm sorry) but they still have a very nice charm to them and everything seem to fit together.

I would like to play your demo but on itch.io there's only a windows version available. If you would be working with Renpy, would it be possible to also upload an OSX demo? I would love to give it a try.

Thank you and I'm sorry if my comment appears rude.
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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#6 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Mon Jan 02, 2017 8:57 pm

Hi ssero,

Thank you for your response. I know the art has a long way to go...I'm working on it. As for the demo, I've tried uploading an OSX version, but I haven't tested it. I hope you don't run into any problems while trying to play it. Also, I didn't think your comment was rude.

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#7 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Thu Jan 12, 2017 2:12 pm

Slight update.

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#8 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Fri Jan 20, 2017 8:58 pm

Slight update.

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#9 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Sat Jan 28, 2017 9:35 pm

Update.

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#10 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Mon Feb 06, 2017 9:49 pm

Update.

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#11 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Sun Feb 12, 2017 6:58 pm

Slight update.

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#12 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Mon Feb 20, 2017 11:51 am

Update.

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#13 Post by PyTom » Mon Feb 20, 2017 8:48 pm

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#14 Post by Tiesu Erioto » Tue Feb 21, 2017 9:44 am

You mean like "Updated art"?

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Re: Memoriae Mori [Yuri] [Eroge/Mystery/Romance]

#15 Post by SypherZent » Tue Feb 21, 2017 11:43 am

Hmm, if you were following a game you really liked on Steam, or perhaps a film you were expecting to be released soon, or perhaps a TV show that was coming out, and every update they posted just said "Update," think about how it would make you feel.

You have to offer to others what you would like to receive.
In that sense, just posting "Update" is neither informative, nor aesthetic for the potential consumers. :/
It's better to just wait to have an actual image to share. Something "marketable".

Hope this helps clarify. ^^

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