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Yukari
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by Yukari » Wed Feb 08, 2017 11:18 am
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Awiola
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by Awiola » Sat Feb 25, 2017 1:14 pm
I played demo, looks interesting [and these 'battles' c:].
Backgrounds and GUI are good however textbox font is a little illegible. I don't know it be only on my computer, but simple menu in the upper right corner [battles] doesn't exist [instead this - strange something].
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Dirtblast_McSass
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by Dirtblast_McSass » Tue Feb 28, 2017 7:41 pm
Really good. I saw the art style and I wanted to give it a try. It runs really smoothly and is written very well. I'm with Awiola though, that white font and pink background is trouble. My eyes were crossing trying to read it after awhile. Maybe if the pink was a darker shade, it could work.
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parttimestorier
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by parttimestorier » Tue Feb 28, 2017 8:05 pm
This sounds like it could be really cute and fun! I like the sound of Keiko as a character especially. I don't really have the spare money to support crowdfunding at the moment though, so I'm curious about the price you'll charge for it once it's done. If you've thought about that already, do you plan for it to be $10 USD like the basic digital download tier, or it will be something different?
Also, I think you missed some typos in your story description - you have a few stray apostrophes and "year" spelled as "yeat" right now.
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Yukari
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by Yukari » Sun Mar 05, 2017 4:51 am
Thanks for the feedback, I'll change the font. You can change the transparence of the messagebox to read the text better.
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