help with renpy

[FyreMakesGames]

heres my script can u edit it so that this

http://nobu-nori.deviantart.com/art/Help-675149228
doesn't happen
I want it on the side like in the tutorial
please and thanks


# The script of the game goes in this file.

# Declare characters used by this game. The color argument colorizes the
# name of the character.

define n = Character("Nova")
define y = Character("You")
define t = Character("Tallflower", image = "Tallflower",)
# The game starts here.

label start:

# Show a background. This uses a placeholder by default, but you can
# add a file (named either "bg room.png" or "bg room.jpg") to the
# images directory to show it.

scene bg room

# This shows a character sprite. A placeholder is used, but you can
# replace it by adding a file named "eileen happy.png" to the images
# directory.

show nova

# These display lines of dialogue.

"Greetings,"

n "I am Nova I shall be you helper through you life as a warrior cat."

n "Once you are ready let's being."
$ player_name = renpy.input("What is your name, Magical Boy?")

$ player_name = player_name.strip()

n "Nice to you meet you, %(player_name)skit!"
scene nursery
define e = Character("Eileen", image="eileen")





t "Wake up %(player_name)skit it's time to see the world."
menu:
"No! I want to go back to sleep!":
jump backtosleep
label backtosleep:
y "Goes back to sleep."
# This ends the game.

return

[Imperf3kt]

Could you use the code tags please, so indentation is preserved.

also, you don't seem to have defined bg room, nova (image) or default playername (all of these go before the start)

I'm not even sure what is happening here

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n "Nice to you meet you, %(player_name)skit!"
scene nursery
define e = Character("Eileen", image="eileen")





t "Wake up %(player_name)skit it's time to see the world."
menu:

You also don't need to jump to a label, if it is directly after a menu, the game will continue from that point if there is nothing between.

[indoneko]

1. Please use forum's image attachment instead of linking to DA.

2. That side image is too big. I would consider cropping it, or resize it to take less screen space.

3. Where did you define your image (and side image)? I don't see it in your code

4. Don't put any character definition inside label start:
Put it at the beginning of your script instead.

5. Please use

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 tag when copy pasting your script