Alice in Neverland [Adventure/slice of life] Update 8/27

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Alice in Neverland [Adventure/slice of life] Update 8/27

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Update: 7/28=

Backgrounds completed! See further below for more~

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Alice in Neverland is exactly what you would think: Alice (nameable) was ditching school and through a course of events has landed in Neverland. She stumbles across a cast of unique characters, informed of Neverland's plight and impending destruction. She vows to help her newly found friends to keep Neverland and it's magic alive.


Alice: A strong-willed, empathetic girl who has stumbled into a strange world. At first she tries finding her way back home but soon becomes caught up in Neverland's struggle for survival.


Peter: A charismatic and adventurous boy who wishes to defeat the evil consuming his home. He's easily distracted, loving to hear/read new stories.

Cheshire: Peter's friend and confidant. Most days enjoys pranking whoever he can or napping.

Hatter: The last remaining Lost Boy. He's currently a captive to the Red Pirate Queen, made to make her whatever her heart desires. His loyalty will always remain with Peter.

Red Pirate Queen: A vicious pirate who killed her own father, the Pirate King. Will do anything to get what she wants, not hesitating to spill blood in order to reach her goal. Despises Peter and the Lost Boys, turning the coast into her a pirate fortress.


I would love to hear some feedback! What do you think of the plot? Which character do you like best?

Sprite Artwork by Mikomi! <3

Credits:
-Peter voiced by waltermack
-Alice voiced by Peyton Cole
-Hatter and Cheshire voiced by bradsmithVR
-Red Pirate Queen voiced by Victoria Wong
-CGs by shortycake ; Kellen
-GUI by ThayBrownie
-Logo by Reikun
-BG art by Puppetbomb NEW!
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Re: Alice in Neverland [Adventure/slice of life]

#2 Post by parttimestorier »

Hey, Mikomi art! She did the art for a short VN I made recently as well. :)

This sounds like a cool idea! The cross between the Red Queen and Captain Hook sounds especially fun. Do you have plans to include any other Peter Pan/Alice in Wonderland characters that you haven't already listed? I noticed the Hatter is listed a lost boy but the Hare isn't - will he show up elsewhere?
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Re: Alice in Neverland [Adventure/slice of life]

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The characters listed are the entire cast (so far lol I'm thinking of including a fairy) Everyone except Alice and the Pirate Queen are males. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for your feedback :)) If you have any other questions please feel free~
parttimestorier wrote:Hey, Mikomi art! She did the art for a short VN I made recently as well. :)

This sounds like a cool idea! The cross between the Red Queen and Captain Hook sounds especially fun. Do you have plans to include any other Peter Pan/Alice in Wonderland characters that you haven't already listed? I noticed the Hatter is listed a lost boy but the Hare isn't - will he show up elsewhere?

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Re: Alice in Neverland [Adventure/slice of life] Update 6/30

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6/30:

Peter's lines have been completed! Now all characters have partial voice acting. To show some content, here is an example of an in-game CG done by shortycake.

(An external link since resizing would make it blurry :/ )

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Re: Alice in Neverland [Adventure/slice of life] Update 6/30

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Oh man this looks like it is going to be so good! I'm really looking forward to this one.
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heartfragment wrote:Oh man this looks like it is going to be so good! I'm really looking forward to this one.
Thank you so much! The tentative release date is August 1st!

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Update 7/22

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Hello everyone! I'm looking for a GUI artist in addition to a background artist. Really I only need a textbox and choice boxes. If you'd be interested in expanding your portfolio or helping the community I'd greatly appreciate it!

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Update 7/24

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GUI artist found! The UI is now completed! The tentative release date is for August 8th, the end date for Cloudnovel's Summer Sun Jam. Of course, this depends when I get the needed backgrounds. This game will be on Cloudnovel as well as a downloadable version from itch.io. Thank you all for your support and love!

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Update 8/18

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Working on making an unlockable CG page as well as some final touches, such as sound effects! Also, another CG/main menu graphic is in the works! ^^

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Update 8/27

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All backgrounds are completed!! I worked with the wonderful Puppetbomb who offered amazing game art~

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