Page 1 of 1

Under construction...

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2017 12:59 pm
by Neeka
See above....Will re-open and update in the future.

Re: Precision Academy: A Hetalia Fan Game [GxB] [Fantasy]

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2017 2:51 pm
by juliaa
I am not interested in vampires and stuff. In fact I hate anything that can bite me like ants, wasp, snakes, centipedes, you name it. If I see them I kill them. But you should probable post some picture and stuff. The college part and stuff sounds good, but we don't know how to reply to you because we did not see your work.

Re: Precision Academy: A Hetalia Fan Game [GxB] [Fantasy]

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2017 3:02 pm
by Neeka
juliaa wrote:But you should probable post some picture and stuff. The college part and stuff sounds good, but we don't know how to reply to you because we did not see your work.
I updated with a sample for backgrounds. Currently there are no character sprites to show.

Re: Precision Academy: A Hetalia Fan Game [GxB] [Fantasy]

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2017 5:49 pm
by Shinoki
Hetalia fan game? From your post, I can't really see anything related to Hetalia about the story. Personally, you might want to play on the Hetalia aspect a bit more in order to attract that niche of Hetalia fans. I think that the story itself can stand alone as it's own piece of fiction rather than as a fanfiction, so there are people who would probably play it even if they aren't in the fandom.

However, there's not much information about the characters. The story itself has promise, but it's not exactly unique. From your blurb, I can only see that it's school life, otome game, main character in a new place, and vampires. You might want to show what's different or interesting about the story or show off the intrigue of the characters.

Re: Precision Academy: A Hetalia Fan Game [GxB] [Fantasy]

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2017 6:29 pm
by Neeka
Shinoki wrote: However, there's not much information about the characters. The story itself has promise, but it's not exactly unique. From your blurb, I can only see that it's school life, otome game, main character in a new place, and vampires. You might want to show what's different or interesting about the story or show off the intrigue of the characters.
I updated the original post; I hope it helps clear things up! Thanks for your input. :)