Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 22/10]

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Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 22/10]

#1 Post by kawaiinekochama » Wed Jun 21, 2017 2:33 am

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This is the first visual novel game I've ever created.
Story
Mina is a girl who is shy and quiet. She avoids social interactions and likes to keep her problems to herself. This happened after her parents disowned her and she began to hate her life. One night, she hoped for a company; someone who can lead her out of her sorrow. Then, a fairy from the Fauna Fairy Association (FFA) named Moko appeared and offered to help her by assigning his 'undermen'; Yuu, Jin and Kyon to change her. Mina was reluctant at first but was convinced after Moko reminded her about her terrible past. She agreed but there was only one big problem; she has to live with the three young men until she succeeded changing her life. As time flew by, Mina began to be her new self, however, she finally knew the true reasons behind her wish.
Characters

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*She will only appear in CGs.*
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Screenshot
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**I'm really sorry for the background. I'm such a genius to think that thick lineart fits. T__T**
Features
2 endings for each characters; good ending & love ending
1 good ending if any of the characters are not chosen
Simple and kinda straightforward gameplay
Warning: Might be filled with comedy scenes which are not funny and grammatical errors(since english is not my first language) and tragic pets/animals deaths
Progress
Script: 50%
GUI: 90%
Sprites: 100%
CGs & BGs: 50%
BGMs & sounds: 0%
this game is estimated to be work in progress like forever since i'm really busy right now so pls forgive me ("_ _)
Questions
Does this game interest you?
Which character do you like? Why?
Does the art seem acceptable?(just wanna know)
Got any suggestions to improve my game?
I've made a blog for my game's updates! Feel free to check it out! ^w^ (although I'm not very active. Sorry!!)(I changed the website as my campus blocks tumblr ;w;)
I've also created an itch.io page for the game! Please feel free to visit it.
My Blog!
My Itch.io page!
Thank you for stopping by! I will be glad if you could give positive remarks/support/suggestions! Have a nice day!
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Re: Change Me!(Girl)[GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][UPDATED]

#2 Post by kawaiinekochama » Wed Jun 28, 2017 6:09 am

I forgot to mention that the update for the screenshots and story progression might be slow as I am trying to learn the codes and sketching the backgrounds. I'll try to update in a week/shorter! Thanks for reading!

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Re: Change Me!(Girl)[GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][late update again]

#3 Post by kawaiinekochama » Mon Aug 07, 2017 12:01 am

Yay! Another update! I finally finished some of the backgrounds! Here's some sneak peeks of them:

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I'm really sorry for the late update. I was having umm... some personal problems and they're still unsolved. I'll try to update the screenshots once I've finished all the backgrounds! Thanks for stopping by! :D

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Re: Change Me!(Girl)[GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][late update again]

#4 Post by Galaxias Games » Mon Aug 07, 2017 12:54 am

Looks beautiful, great job on the artwork!

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Re: Change Me!(Girl)[GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][late update again]

#5 Post by kawaiinekochama » Thu Sep 07, 2017 11:41 pm

Now I have finished all backgrounds (yay finally \;w;/) now all left are the CGs
I also have done the supporting characters' sprites and the game is halfway finished (maybe)
Well, I'll start my final semester this week and I think that I will be much busier (cries)
And I need to stop procastinating since I can't stop playing Persona 5 so much (cries again)
I'll screenshot the game when I finally done quite of it and please wish me luck!
(I actually wanna update with the characters' sprites but I forgot to save it in my laptop T__T or did I had save it....?)
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Re: Change Me!(Girl)[GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][late update again]

#6 Post by kawaiinekochama » Sun Sep 10, 2017 9:55 pm

The last character sprites needed. Ugh I forgot that I had them in my laptop all this time. T__T
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And another news. I have decided to finish this project before my birthday which is on October 18 since I don't want this project to make me distracted from my studies. (cries) welp time to switch to orgia mode lol
and i'm still editing the screenshot of the game since it's too big (OwO)
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Re: Change Me!(Girl)[GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][late update again]

#7 Post by kawaiinekochama » Sun Sep 10, 2017 10:37 pm

Another update(after a few minutes, sorry I was too impatient) I finally updated the post with screenshots of the game. Yay!
But I'm really sorry for the backgrounds. I was thinking like hey this fits let's do this and BAMM disaster
If you wanna say that I can draw it back, welp the sketches were deleted thanks to my stupid self T__T;
I'm really sorry for that. (bows deeply)
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Re: Change Me!(Girl)[GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 16/9]

#8 Post by kawaiinekochama » Sat Sep 16, 2017 3:22 am

Hello! Selamat Hari Malaysia~ (although it's Saturday and it's weekend)
I have decided to put mini CGs into the game to make it interesting and I finished like five of them! \(^w^ )/
And I've finished like four CGs needed and noow I'm starting to get busy with assignments (TT__TT)
Well, here's some sneak peeks:
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(the box one is mini cg and the other one is the character event cg)
(and sorry for making the picture too small because I'm too lazy to resize it)
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Re: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 16/9]

#9 Post by Miyazaki Momoko » Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:57 pm

Oh heyyy a Malaysian AND an otome lover/maker AND an October baby! *w* Me too~

Does this game interest you?
Yes, definitely! Everything involves pets and cute otomes interests me xD

Which character do you like? Why?
Ahh the hard question. Honestly I rarely pick a favorite before playing an otome, moreover they ALL looked cute~ Could I just pick Moko instead? hehehehhehehehehehehhe the cutest of the adorable bunch<3

Does the art seem acceptable?(just wanna know)
Absolutely! It reminded me of those [P]lanets days :') With a better shading, (well teacup was just 16 back then, her art style has improved drastically!) I adore your shading, really~ Especially Yuu's sprite.

Got any suggestions to improve my game?
It's the color scheme ;w; Especially the one in Mina's introduction, it's hard to read. The save/options page too; is a bit too colorful/crowded to my liking. Maybe changed the pink/purple/blue and the polkadot background to solid colors? Without patterns of any kind, I mean.

Anyways, good luck with your first project! It looks promising, fighting! ^^

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Re: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 16/9]

#10 Post by kawaiinekochama » Mon Sep 18, 2017 9:48 pm

Miyazaki Momoko wrote:
Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:57 pm
Oh heyyy a Malaysian AND an otome lover/maker AND an October baby! *w* Me too~

Does this game interest you?
Yes, definitely! Everything involves pets and cute otomes interests me xD

Which character do you like? Why?
Ahh the hard question. Honestly I rarely pick a favorite before playing an otome, moreover they ALL looked cute~ Could I just pick Moko instead? hehehehhehehehehehehhe the cutest of the adorable bunch<3

Does the art seem acceptable?(just wanna know)
Absolutely! It reminded me of those [P]lanets days :') With a better shading, (well teacup was just 16 back then, her art style has improved drastically!) I adore your shading, really~ Especially Yuu's sprite.

Got any suggestions to improve my game?
It's the color scheme ;w; Especially the one in Mina's introduction, it's hard to read. The save/options page too; is a bit too colorful/crowded to my liking. Maybe changed the pink/purple/blue and the polkadot background to solid colors? Without patterns of any kind, I mean.

Anyways, good luck with your first project! It looks promising, fighting! ^^
Wow thanks for answering the questions! OwO And hello fellow Malaysian~

Welp, about the color scheme I agree that the description is freaking hard to read. I don't know why I did that (maybe i was high or something). And about the game menu, I actually hate solid color for the background so I made polkadot background to make it look interesting. But since you think it's too colorful, I'll consider to change the menu appearance (means more work haha :'3)

And thanks for cheering me! I'll work harder! \(o>w<o)/~*
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Re: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 16/9]

#11 Post by kawaiinekochama » Tue Oct 10, 2017 10:49 pm

Hello. I've been so busy these weeks so I just scrolled through the forum as I couldn't update anything.
Since I'm now in the final semester, there's like tons and I mean TONS of projects to do and talks to attend. (welp i never see those coming really) For these weeks, I've been doing group assignments non-stop (yeah walking around town then walking around the faculty to search for your lecturers) and have to go to BORING talks and couldn't skip them 'cause my lecturers will kill me TT^TT

God who's not tired doing all that TTvTT

And because of stress, I fell sick and it was really terrible. I can't get up and almost can't breath so yeah...
But thankfully I've recovered now so I finally finished the needed CGs before continuing writing my script.
I'll do my best and hopefully not to get sick again (because it hurts so much)
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Re: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 11/10]

#12 Post by kawaiinekochama » Sun Oct 22, 2017 9:56 am

Finally an update! \(^w^)/ ~
I've done setting up my itch.io page (welp except the banner)! You can visit it here.

PS warning the background is kinda... too cute to look at. TTvTT
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Re: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 22/10]

#13 Post by nekobara » Sun Oct 22, 2017 4:11 pm

kawaiinekochama wrote: Finally an update! \(^w^)/ ~
I've done setting up my itch.io page (welp except the banner)! You can visit it here.

PS warning the background is kinda... too cute to look at. TTvTT
It is too cute! I love it. 💛

I've also been meaning to answer the questions for a while now... So here goes!

Does this game interest you?
It does. It's kind of adorable.~

Which character do you like? Why?
Well, Jin fits the requirement of being a cat boy and he rocks that orange tiger ensemble, but then I really looked at Kyon's character intro. He was a stray and has a treat addiction? That makes him calm and gentle and mysterious. You know, just a little bit. But if I'm being honest, Moko caught my attention first. His design is too darling just like your itch.io background is too kawaii.~ Still, Jin is my favorite. Even after all I said. Also Yuu seems cold and distant. I like that. So there's some love for everyone. ♥️ Including Mina. She needs a hug. From Jin.

Does the art seem acceptable?(just wanna know)
I think it all ties in together really well and it's cute as heck. So yes.~

Got any suggestions to improve my game?
Hmm. I'm never good at giving suggestions or anything like that. I apologize. But I do suggest that you don't push yourself too hard while making it. Just do your best and remember to take care of your health.😺
"When people don't express themselves, they die one piece at a time." -Laurie Halse Anderson

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Re: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 22/10]

#14 Post by kawaiinekochama » Sun Oct 22, 2017 9:17 pm

nekobara wrote:
Sun Oct 22, 2017 4:11 pm
kawaiinekochama wrote: Finally an update! \(^w^)/ ~
I've done setting up my itch.io page (welp except the banner)! You can visit it here.

PS warning the background is kinda... too cute to look at. TTvTT
It is too cute! I love it. 💛

I've also been meaning to answer the questions for a while now... So here goes!

Does this game interest you?
It does. It's kind of adorable.~

Which character do you like? Why?
Well, Jin fits the requirement of being a cat boy and he rocks that orange tiger ensemble, but then I really looked at Kyon's character intro. He was a stray and has a treat addiction? That makes him calm and gentle and mysterious. You know, just a little bit. But if I'm being honest, Moko caught my attention first. His design is too darling just like your itch.io background is too kawaii.~ Still, Jin is my favorite. Even after all I said. Also Yuu seems cold and distant. I like that. So there's some love for everyone. ♥️ Including Mina. She needs a hug. From Jin.

Does the art seem acceptable?(just wanna know)
I think it all ties in together really well and it's cute as heck. So yes.~

Got any suggestions to improve my game?
Hmm. I'm never good at giving suggestions or anything like that. I apologize. But I do suggest that you don't push yourself too hard while making it. Just do your best and remember to take care of your health.😺
Wow thank you for answering the questions! I'm actually relieved that someone can look at that page (cause i just love cute stuff so much so i can't help myself from creating that background >w<)

And I'm really thankful that you love every character and spoiler:
Mina will receive so much hug from Jin hohoho :P
Thanks for the advice! I'm really trying to take care of my health now! I kept drinking tea since I recovered from the fever to relieve stress :P
I will try to not push myself! I will do my best!
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Re: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][update 22/10]

#15 Post by kawaiinekochama » Mon Jan 01, 2018 11:10 pm

Hello everyone. Well, this is not an update. Just a quick note (maybe)
I decided to re-draw the backgrounds as I see that the backgrounds keep bugging me when I was testing the game.
And since I've finally bought a drawing tab (yay~) I think that my artstyle will become different. Now I'm really hesitating whether to re-draw everything rather than just the backgrounds. And I'm sorry for not able to update anything since I was really busy with projects and everything was pretty hectic. But now.... I'M FREE BABY!!! except that I have finals next week TT TT
Oh yeah happy new year everyone! I don't really have any resolutions since I'm not into that 'new year, new me or new goals' haha sadlifehere
Thanks for getting interested with this game and wish me luck! >w</
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