Aw, I'm so glad to hear you liked P&Y, and don't worry about your English, it's fine.Mikaesa wrote:First, i would like to say i'm very happy to see a new project from Mammon. I really really like your writing, i discovered Pervert&Yandere by chance and couldn't stop playing 2 days straight (also i apologize in case my english is a litte weird)
I hope you and the other otome fans around here will like the Thorn Prince just as much as the men, just like how I like to play otome's where you romance the protagonists through the love interests. And if it helps, after making 5 versions of William I picked the bishounen version of him as opposed to the others (including Ser Godfrey).Mikaesa wrote:1. Do you like the premise? Does this sound like an interesting story you’d want to read?
Yes if it's one of your story, i'm definitively interested. I mean the premise is simple but i can imagine what you can do with William already. Otherwise, i don't really play [BxG] because i'm a girl, it's usually harder to immerse in the story. But because your protagonists are not meant to be "blank", it's ok (in lots of VN, protagonists have no personality to let the player substitute themselve in them. I prefer your approach)
Oh i like the crazy mother part, nice backstory here.
I understand what you mean and get how it might be confusing. One of the main reasons is actually quite the spoiler, but the other one is that William is quite handsome. Even though his personality is rotten, his exterior is quite nice on the eyes. And the princesses don't know him well enough at the beginning to know what his personality would be like.Mikaesa wrote:2. Do you like or dislike the characters? Anyone in particular?
- I don't really understand one thing about Salia description : why is she a candidate to court the prince ? I mean, her country seems powerfull and the prince quite troublesome. So i don't understand her motive to be here (also in her description, she can have any man she wants so why him ?)
In comparaison, the innocent Charlotte wants to find true love and Veronica have a "poor background". I can clearly see their motive for being here. I hope you understand what i mean ?
Also, princess Salia is that kind of popular girl that goes for the most powerful boyfriend, regardless of what a jerk he might be.
Your impression of all three princesses is quite accurate, and I won't really diverge from any of these personalities. However, I do hope that you'll find all their routes, including Charlotte's, interesting nonetheless. I have hopes that combining her with William's personality will make the otherwise tiresome tale interesting. And I haven't really gotten to Charlotte's and Veronica's dresses yet, so Veronica will probably get something more proper with jewelry and such indeed. Right now it's just that one dress though.Mikaesa wrote:- I already know that Charlotte will be the most cringy route for me because i hate this type of girl (pure, innocent, naive little lamb hahah). But i know she's a necessary character in this kind of story, maybe i will not hate her in the actual game.
-Veronica is my favorite princess for now ^^ Maybe her sprite is too humble for a princess, even a hated one. I really like her face and dress, maybe she could use a necklace for exemple (or bracelets) to give her a more noble appartenance ? She is not the kind to wear complicated gown like the other 2.
Just remember that Ser Godfrey is supposed to be 40. (Sorry, it's really hard to make anime characters old yet not ancient.) And I guess Bertram might look a bit like her indeed, though definately not with intent.Mikaesa wrote:- Ser Godfrey is probably with the bad guys but i wanna say he's really sexy It'll be difficult to hate him if i must hahaha
- Don't take it the bad way but Ser Bertram kind of reminds me of Brienne de Thor
- Of course Prince William is very interesting, i can't wait to read him in action.
Aw, thanks. And I'm sorry for (as some people phrased it and I've come to realise myself looking back at it) hurting your eyes with the colour scheme in P&Y.Mikaesa wrote:Overall, your art skills have improved nicely. What i apreciate the most is that you really understand what each personnality must wear, their posture and expressions. They fit their role. Also, thanks for drawing a map.