Just wanted to say that the Kickstarter looks really good!
Re: LINGERING [LIVE ON KICKSTARTER]
Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2018 4:56 pm
by Xerofit51
traineroflegend wrote: ↑Fri Jun 08, 2018 9:34 am
Just wanted to say that the Kickstarter looks really good!
Thank Youuu , wish us luck!
Re: LINGERING [LIVE ON KICKSTARTER, BL, GL, Straight, Mystery, Drama]
Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2018 6:12 am
by Knight of Hearts
Hi, there!
Your game really appeals to me because of the stylishness and art and the BL content! XD
Let me start by saying the trailer for the KS campaign is stunning! Great pacing, dynamic, the music is on point and the length of trailer isn't too long!
May I suggest a couple of things for your KS campaign?
1. In the title of the game you may want to indicate what's the genre of the visual novel + if it's BL/GL etc...since its not immediately obvious when you get on the Ks page. Also you'd wanna list if it's pg 13, 16 or 18...so ppl know right away what they are looking at. You'd wanna market to the right audience with that title and not have them scroll half way through the campaign to figure it out. Also, people will use the keyword in the search bar for your title.
2. Since you do have a demo created, you may want to list it right on top of the KS campaign and make sure the DOWNLOAD DEMO button is distinct and prominent. At the moment it's kinda lost on the content of the campaign and blends in.
Good luck!
Re: LINGERING [LIVE ON KICKSTARTER, BL, GL, Straight, Mystery, Drama]
Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2018 6:28 am
by Xerofit51
4 more sprites until back to cg and other things.
If you like what you see don't forget to check our kickstarter :3
Your game really appeals to me because of the stylishness and art and the BL content! XD
Let me start by saying the trailer for the KS campaign is stunning! Great pacing, dynamic, the music is on point and the length of trailer isn't too long!
May I suggest a couple of things for your KS campaign?
1. In the title of the game you may want to indicate what's the genre of the visual novel + if it's BL/GL etc...since its not immediately obvious when you get on the Ks page. Also you'd wanna list if it's pg 13, 16 or 18...so ppl know right away what they are looking at. You'd wanna market to the right audience with that title and not have them scroll half way through the campaign to figure it out. Also, people will use the keyword in the search bar for your title.
2. Since you do have a demo created, you may want to list it right on top of the KS campaign and make sure the DOWNLOAD DEMO button is distinct and prominent. At the moment it's kinda lost on the content of the campaign and blends in.
Good luck!
Thanks for the feedback we were wondering if there are any flaws in our Kickstarter! We'll be sure to add those keywords and edit the download button to something more noticeable. Thank you for the input, much appreciated
Re: LINGERING [LIVE ON KICKSTARTER, BL, GL, Straight, Mystery, Drama]
Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2018 4:19 am
by Xerofit51
This is a sneak peek of what you may find in our kickstarter artbook, the bg is not done yet though. The R18 one will have this and a much more heated image of these two kings lolol. Please consider donating to our Kickstarter https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/48 ... escription for more rewards and so that we can make this game come true