Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]
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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]
The last of the minor characters
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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]
Wow, the art is absolutely stunning! It blew my mind away >.< Also, I really like the plot as well, Luisa is so awesome, I like how she isn't afraid to fight for what she wants. The boys are so out-of-the-ordinary too! I look forward to more updates, good luck!
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Thank you for the comments! Time to spoiler!
Dad with a walking stick entered the room. He saw me excited and with scissors in my hand, he got worried.- What are you going to do, honey?
- Trust me, Daddy. I will get our ship back, - I said and cut my hair off.
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Spoiler. Sketch
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We have a page in Steam! Follow us
http://store.steampowered.com/app/789260/Unmoor/
http://store.steampowered.com/app/789260/Unmoor/
Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]
WOW! The art is so beautiful. This seems like an interesting project and the MC is likable as well. Good luck!
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This, finally, happened! Release, friends! And in honor of such a significant event for our team, the first week of the game will be sold at a discount! Everyone enjoy the game! And do not forget to leave your feedback in Steam, and also write to us if you suddenly find any bugs. With love, your MariLuzaria https://store.steampowered.com/app/7892 ... or/?beta=0
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Congratulations! The art is beautiful and I like a brave heroine. It stood out to me as actually being a really good use of the dressing as a boy plot: combining that with a game all about sailing and naval history is really clever, since in some European cultures sailing was very much relegated to only boys. So basically, I just wanted to state my admiration for this game.
Also, I saw that your steam synopses really needed proofreading and I do proofreading so um please, please, please don't be offended by my unsolicited proofreading and...here?
Louisa has spent all her life on the sea with her father sailing a ship christened "Diossa" and she never imagined it would change. But, as soon as she returns from the Maritime Academy she learns that her father has been deceived by a monsieur Viardo who has snatched their ship! And so begins Louisa's adventure.
Also, I saw that your steam synopses really needed proofreading and I do proofreading so um please, please, please don't be offended by my unsolicited proofreading and...here?
Louisa has spent all her life on the sea with her father sailing a ship christened "Diossa" and she never imagined it would change. But, as soon as she returns from the Maritime Academy she learns that her father has been deceived by a monsieur Viardo who has snatched their ship! And so begins Louisa's adventure.
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I offer proofreading and ideabouncing. You can find out more in my thread.
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Thank you! We have already changed the synopsis, but thank you for your concern )
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That's good! My apologies for intruding. ^_^;
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