Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]

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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]

#16 Post by MariLuzaria » Wed Jan 10, 2018 12:43 pm

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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]

#17 Post by Unicorn_Magic » Sat Jan 13, 2018 11:33 am

Wow, the art is absolutely stunning! It blew my mind away >.< Also, I really like the plot as well, Luisa is so awesome, I like how she isn't afraid to fight for what she wants. The boys are so out-of-the-ordinary too! I look forward to more updates, good luck!

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#18 Post by MariLuzaria » Sun Jan 14, 2018 1:30 pm

Thank you for the comments! Time to spoiler!
Dad with a walking stick entered the room. He saw me excited and with scissors in my hand, he got worried.
- What are you going to do, honey?
- Trust me, Daddy. I will get our ship back, - I said and cut my hair off.
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#19 Post by MariLuzaria » Tue Jan 23, 2018 12:07 pm

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#20 Post by MariLuzaria » Wed Feb 14, 2018 9:45 am

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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]

#22 Post by try10 » Tue Mar 13, 2018 10:56 am

WOW! The art is so beautiful. This seems like an interesting project and the MC is likable as well. Good luck!

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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]

#23 Post by MariLuzaria » Wed May 02, 2018 10:46 am

This, finally, happened! Release, friends! And in honor of such a significant event for our team, the first week of the game will be sold at a discount! Everyone enjoy the game! And do not forget to leave your feedback in Steam, and also write to us if you suddenly find any bugs. With love, your MariLuzaria :) https://store.steampowered.com/app/7892 ... or/?beta=0
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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]

#24 Post by AntiquedFae » Thu May 03, 2018 12:55 am

Congratulations! The art is beautiful and I like a brave heroine. It stood out to me as actually being a really good use of the dressing as a boy plot: combining that with a game all about sailing and naval history is really clever, since in some European cultures sailing was very much relegated to only boys. So basically, I just wanted to state my admiration for this game.

Also, I saw that your steam synopses really needed proofreading and I do proofreading so um please, please, please don't be offended by my unsolicited proofreading and...here?

Louisa has spent all her life on the sea with her father sailing a ship christened "Diossa" and she never imagined it would change. But, as soon as she returns from the Maritime Academy she learns that her father has been deceived by a monsieur Viardo who has snatched their ship! And so begins Louisa's adventure.
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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]

#25 Post by MariLuzaria » Thu May 03, 2018 11:44 am

AntiquedFae wrote:
Thu May 03, 2018 12:55 am
Thank you! We have already changed the synopsis, but thank you for your concern :))

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Re: Unmoor! [otome] [romance] [fantasy] [VN]

#26 Post by AntiquedFae » Thu May 03, 2018 4:38 pm

That's good! My apologies for intruding. ^_^;
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