Hello!
i played the demo!
I think the most interesting guy in the demo was the blonde, Shinichi.
I also already hating the pink fangirl, she is so annoying! if she likes him so much why she just dont go and tell him instead of bothering the heroine!
I think there is a book name ps i love you, i havent read it but i remember my younger cousin talking about it, you may want to change name to avoid copyright issues?
I also think you should make the preferences, save, load stuff in the texbox more visible, i had problem seeing what is what, maybe mark the letter with a black mark around them so its more visible?
The choices size font is way too small you should try to make it bigger its a little annoying have to pass the mouse over to see what is written.
good luck with your game!!
PS: I Love You [Otome][Drama] - updated 4/22 [Demo]
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Re: PS: I Love You [Otome][Drama] - updated 4/22 [Demo]
Thanks so much for playing the demo and telling me your thoughts!Ermytarya wrote: ↑Sun Apr 22, 2018 10:38 pm Hello!
i played the demo!
I think the most interesting guy in the demo was the blonde, Shinichi.
I also already hating the pink fangirl, she is so annoying! if she likes him so much why she just dont go and tell him instead of bothering the heroine!
I think there is a book name ps i love you, i havent read it but i remember my younger cousin talking about it, you may want to change name to avoid copyright issues?
I also think you should make the preferences, save, load stuff in the texbox more visible, i had problem seeing what is what, maybe mark the letter with a black mark around them so its more visible?
The choices size font is way too small you should try to make it bigger its a little annoying have to pass the mouse over to see what is written.
good luck with your game!!
TBH, I think Haruhito has the MOST interesting backstory, but I equate interesting = depressing, so maybe Shinichi with his boy past is indeed more interesting than the other 2 guys, lol.
If there indeed is a book called PS I Love You, then there's really nothing I can do :/ Book and movie titles cannot be copyrighted (in most instances), something I came across in my novel-writing days when there is, literally, multiple books called "SO AND SO" and all of them are in completely different genres
Thanks for your suggestions, I will definitely implement them in the subsequent edits.
What did you think about the music/sounds? Too intrusive, not intrusive enough?
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Re: PS: I Love You [Otome][Drama] - updated 4/22 [Demo]
But haruhito appears just to insult how distracted the heroine is, i know he had good intentions telling her to be careful, bu i still wanted to slap him and teach him manners XD. You are the writter you know your characters better, i only can give my opinion based in the short interactions of the demo.milkteebaby wrote: ↑Mon Apr 23, 2018 12:50 am
Thanks so much for playing the demo and telling me your thoughts!
TBH, I think Haruhito has the MOST interesting backstory, but I equate interesting = depressing, so maybe Shinichi with his boy past is indeed more interesting than the other 2 guys, lol.
If there indeed is a book called PS I Love You, then there's really nothing I can do :/ Book and movie titles cannot be copyrighted (in most instances), something I came across in my novel-writing days when there is, literally, multiple books called "SO AND SO" and all of them are in completely different genres
Thanks for your suggestions, I will definitely implement them in the subsequent edits.
What did you think about the music/sounds? Too intrusive, not intrusive enough?
I just hope that if the pink haired girl decided to really go a tell sporty guy that she likes him, he wont be the typical uh ah, and will give her a straight no for answer, hope he wont date her just no to be alone because that what i was smelling XD
Oh did not know that tittles cannot be copyrighted O:! i am less ignorant today.
The music fits the mods perfectly in a good timing, everything ok with the music!
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