An Edelweiss' Resolve [GxB] [Urban-Fantasy] [School Life]
Posted: Fri May 18, 2018 12:40 pm
Hello! This was initially a college group project I did for a class, and turns out I really like writing for VN! Since this is my first project (and unbeta'ed), I want to ask you guys how should I improve it. Please give me the critics I need!
Also, what's with the atmosphere saying danger everywhere? Is it because people despises witches as the fairytale's villain, or because of the rumors about students being kidnapped?
Download here! Walkthrough here
After living your whole life as a normal high school student, a fateful meeting with a powerful witch shows that you are actually a witch, too! And now she hired you as her apprentice while paying for education in a better school that teaches magic... and giving you a chance to meet magic casters like you.
Features:
Important note: Kieran (the vampire)'s route is locked at the first playthrough; you have to finish at least one ending from Johann or Alaric's route to unlock his route. The recommended playing order is Johann -> Alaric -> Kieran.
You are encouraged to answer these questions so I know how should I improve:
Also, what's with the atmosphere saying danger everywhere? Is it because people despises witches as the fairytale's villain, or because of the rumors about students being kidnapped?
Download here! Walkthrough here
Features:
- 40,000+ words better love story than Twilight, since you can actually date the vampire AND the werewolf.
- Nameable protagonist with no default name (because we want to).
- Three bachelors to choose, with good and bad ending for each route.
- Lots of choices (some of them might drastically alter the conclusion).
Characters
Important note: Kieran (the vampire)'s route is locked at the first playthrough; you have to finish at least one ending from Johann or Alaric's route to unlock his route. The recommended playing order is Johann -> Alaric -> Kieran.
although if you're here only for the story, Johann's route can be skipped since Kieran's story will explains everything
Screenshots:
You are encouraged to answer these questions so I know how should I improve:
- Which one is your favorite route and ending? Why?
- Are there parts of the story that should be extended or cut? Why?
- How about the character development? Which part should be improved more?
- Was the conflict interesting enough? Are there scenes that should be developed more?
And lastly, thank you for playing!