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On Benson’s birthday, he makes a wish for his life to be more exciting. That same day, he receives a video game he’s never heard of in the mail from a distant relative. What happens when one of the characters jumps out of the screen and into Benson’s bedroom? He must be dreaming….right? Now, Benson must take care of the guy and make sure he can get back to his world in one piece!

I'm always excited to see more BxB, and recently to see things for Yaoijam, so this is great.

1) The premise sounds interesting! I'd be curious to see what (if any) explanation is provided for how (or why) the game characters end up in the real world. (Is the distant relative trying to hook him up? ) I hope a lot of the comedy comes from the guys being both unfamiliar with the real world, and also chasing after each other as villains and heroes should.

2) I usually find that the most important part of games, for me, is the characters. Given that the hero and villain probably will (and should!) be completely over the top, as video game stereotypes often are, I hope Benson is well-written, relatable, and interesting as a character.

3) It often frustrates me when video game characters are particularly obtuse, either rushing off and doing the obviously wrong thing, ignoring obvious signs and clues, or generally just handling situations in horrible and unrealistic ways. But, as noted above, I almost feel like that would be *better* here.

This looks fun, and I love Hero's hair (that is Hero, right?)

bobconway wrote: ↑

Sat Jun 02, 2018 12:44 am

3) It often frustrates me when video game characters are particularly obtuse, either rushing off and doing the obviously wrong thing, ignoring obvious signs and clues, or generally just handling situations in horrible and unrealistic ways. But, as noted above, I almost feel like that would be *better* here.

This would include pretty much the worst time-keeping skills. Hero shouldn't be able to distinguish when something is actually urgent, unless there's some kind of countdown visible. (He'll probably even go running off to do *less* urgent things instead...)

1; I do like it! I'm excited to see the final product of this game!

2; Hm... maybe more romance options? The villain, as most villains do, doesn't seem to have a reason for his ways- It would be cool if he did!

3; Hrm... I just hope the characters are more developed? The hero is the typical hero, and the villain is the typical villain- what makes them different and interesting?

That aside, I do really like the idea! <3 I'm sorry I didn't really say much ;;

Thank you all for the comments! I can't give any information yet as we're still finalizing a lot of the plot, but I'm taking to heart all of your lovely suggestions for the script! I appreciate you taking the time to comment and look at our WIP thread. Thank you so much!


Also, I fixed the thread so it's more clear who the sprite is. Rainbow hair is Hero, whose code name we'll be releasing soon

Don't have much more to say about the plot besides what those above me said, but I am LOVING Hero's hair, and his tats. The artist did a great job on his design!

@Zelan Thanks for the comment!

I've uploaded the player character and villain's art. Hope you like them!

Aww, protag and villain are super cute.

Your sprite artist does a really great job with hair, both in style and color. Are the wings on his back part of his jacket, or are they actual wings that stick out from his back?

@bobconway we've thought a lot about this comment and decided that the villain has actual wings on his back in game but out of game he's got the embellishment on his back!


Also, we have a super cool logo done by Mitoky! ^_^