The End of an Actress [BxG, Tragedy]

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The End of an Actress [BxG, Tragedy]

#1 Post by ebi-hime » Sat Aug 10, 2019 11:06 am


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Based on the life (and death) of Marie Antoinette, The End of an Actress is a tragic romance story
set in a fantasy universe with close parallels to late 18th century France.

The kingdom of Artoire was once a force to be reckoned with. Governed by a string of beloved kings,
the nation was wealthy, its people prosperous. That was in the past, however.
Now, Artoire’s fortunes are dwindling, as constant wars and food shortages sweep the land.

After innumerable hard years, the people of Artoire begin to despair. Fearing for the worst,
they search for a messiah who can save them during their time of peril…

And that messiah comes in the form of a fourteen-year-old girl with blonde hair and blue eyes called Liliane.

Liliane is a beautiful, charming, elegant young lady from the foreign land of Charentes,
born to the noble Saint-Coeurs. Betrothed to the future king of Artoire, Liliane ascends to the throne upon the death
of the old monarch, to public approval and rapturous applause.

Time passes, however, and soon the public opinion towards Liliane turns. The young queen, it transpires,
is vain and flighty, and she cares not one jot about the plight of the common people.
The death toll continues to rise, new wars loom on the horizon, and despair swells.

Betrayed and helplessly hurt, a young man called Marius becomes a key player
in a revolt that will shake the society of Artoire to its very core.

Once a street urchin in love with the queen, and now a lead revolutionary, Marius is faced with a difficult decision.
Can he really bring the queen he once adored to justice… Or will his old feelings ruin all he has been working for?


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Marius
The first time Marius sees Liliane, it’s during her wedding procession through the streets of Artoire.
Though a street urchin at the time without a penny to his name, Marius falls in love with Liliane at first sight;
prepared to lay down his very life for her sake, if need be.

The second time Marius sees Liliane, he’s rather more cynical. After serving as a soldier in a fruitless war,
and losing many of his comrades, he begins to wonder whether the queen cares for her people as much as they care for her.

Rendered cold and distant after witnessing so much bloodshed, Marius is determined to bring the queen
he once loved to justice, no matter the cost. Unfortunately, he isn’t as heart-hearted as he would like to think.

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Liliane
Liliane was born into the noble Saint-Coeur family, and her life has been one of pleasure and excess since birth.
With wardrobes full of beautiful clothes and maids to attend to her every need, Liliane is spoiled to the extreme,
and she has no conception of how ordinary people live.

Haughty and proud to a fault, Liliane regards herself as a perfect being. She looks down upon her
subjects – Marius in particular – and, even when threatened with death, she refuses to apologise for any of her supposed sins.

It would be most unseemly for a queen to apologise to a mere commoner, after all.


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Credits
Writing/coding: ebi-hime
Character art: Renmiou
CG art: Rock C
BG art: Kathrinne B
GUI: kathaeris
Music: yuzuki


Notes
The End of an Actress has a handful of choices and multiple endings.
It’s relatively short (about 60k).
The story is also written in third person.
It contains 18+ content, including one sex scene, but it's quite tame.

The writing is entirely finished, and so are the character sprites and BG art.
A handful of CGs still need to be completed, as does the music.
I’m hoping to release the story in December this year.

The story will be commercial and should cost around $9.99.

If you want more constant updates, please check out my twitter or tumblr! I post there more often! ☆彡
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Re: The End of an Actress [BxG]

#2 Post by ZanthosAC » Sat Aug 10, 2019 1:37 pm

Game looks great so far, and a lot of your other works have been stellar also. This title had me confused at the BxG label though. It could very well be unique in that sense, as based on the art I would classify it as "otome" at first glance. Additionally, I'm trying to find whose perspective the story is told from? Marius?

I say this because I'd say the story/art/themes seem more "otome" over a BxG labeling. Otome is more popular too. I suppose it could be otome with a male protagonist, certainly. One anime/manga comes to mind and that is 3-D Kanojo (3d girlfriend/Real girl). This manga was published in Kodansha's Dessert magazine which is typically (shojo/josei). 3d Kanjo had a male protagonist but typically catered to girls with its art/themes and story. I enjoyed it being a male, personally.

Regardless, I just wanted to share my initial observations. Hoping the best with your new project and looking forward to more (I'm sure it'll do great).

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Re: The End of an Actress [BxG]

#3 Post by ebi-hime » Sat Aug 10, 2019 2:10 pm

ZanthosAC wrote:
Sat Aug 10, 2019 1:37 pm
Game looks great so far, and a lot of your other works have been stellar also. This title had me confused at the BxG label though. It could very well be unique in that sense, as based on the art I would classify it as "otome" at first glance. Additionally, I'm trying to find whose perspective the story is told from? Marius?

I say this because I'd say the story/art/themes seem more "otome" over a BxG labeling. Otome is more popular too. I suppose it could be otome with a male protagonist, certainly. One anime/manga comes to mind and that is 3-D Kanojo (3d girlfriend/Real girl). This manga was published in Kodansha's Dessert magazine which is typically (shojo/josei). 3d Kanjo had a male protagonist but typically catered to girls with its art/themes and story. I enjoyed it being a male, personally.

Regardless, I just wanted to share my initial observations. Hoping the best with your new project and looking forward to more (I'm sure it'll do great).
The story is written in 3rd person, but the narration only offers more insight into Marius's thoughts and feelings than Liliane's. As such, Marius is the main character, not Liliane, so it seems more appropriate to label the story as BxG rather than GxB.
I also think the story has an otome 'vibe' to it, but I don't think it would be quite right to label it as such...
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Re: The End of an Actress [BxG, Tragedy]

#4 Post by Zelan » Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:00 pm

I like the art style a lot, and I always love your writing ^_^ this story seems super interesting! Looking forward to the release. (:

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Re: The End of an Actress [BxG, Tragedy]

#5 Post by ebi-hime » Tue Nov 05, 2019 10:04 pm

Zelan wrote:
Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:00 pm
I like the art style a lot, and I always love your writing ^_^ this story seems super interesting! Looking forward to the release. (:
Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy it when it comes out!

& I'm bumping this thread to let everybody know the Steam store page is up. You can wishlist the game here if you want!
It'll probably be out early next year (most likely mid to late January).
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